- Jan 16, 2019
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as far as i remember the story went ... Tilly was wondering if there where anyone else like her ... not that there is ... but amazingly there turns out to be a shit ton more .. with powers none can compare with ...I don't get where this "drama" criticism comes from, it was building up to something like this, with Lance being a creepy fuck that also has a bullet named after him for his head, and his merry band of weird fucks, to Nika having a mysterious background and now transforming into a full blown traitorous bitch, the whole mystery behind the disappearance of Tilly's parents and their involvement of their powers, etc. I think it was pointing towards something like this where a "third" party would get involved, specially to oppose Lance.
The touch of the cheating bitch having maybe time traveling powers or clairvoyance is pretty rad though.
You missed the search for the Dragon Balls on the next update.If I was writing this I think I would probably have a shorter "heavy" storyline, like in this update the "Russians" would have come and gone vanquished either with or without superpowers. And Nika would join the Harem , and if Stacey can time travel or whatever she would return at the end of this update.
Now, next update would see MC trying to convince all the girls to accept Stacey (Harem again ) and maybe introduce some other females.
Then an awkward moment the update after that where Tilly's parents come back from the dead and MC has to persuade them to let Tilly stay.
Maybe Tilly's Mom and her Dad would seperate after arguing about MC, and Tilly's mom stays (Harem again )
Nika's mom could turn up and.... you guessed it (HAREM ).
Needs at least 3 milfs to balance the females. 3 young 3 older. with some females on the side for variety, maybe a barista or female MC meets in the street etc.
Well.....Maybe there is an incident in a korean restaurant, no, chinese restaurant coz he mentioned chopsticks did'nt he . Then he looks at the little chinese waitress and Tilly uses her power to "persuade" the waitress to search MC for dragon "balls" whereupon Valerie, Nika and Stacey strip off and have an orgy .You missed the search for the Dragon Balls on the next update.
Dont forget the Mcs Latina boss.....Well.....Maybe there is an incident in a korean restaurant, no, chinese restaurant coz he mentioned chopsticks did'nt he . Then he looks at the little chinese waitress and Tilly uses her power to "persuade" the waitress to search MC for dragon "balls" whereupon Valerie, Nika and Stacey strip off and have an orgy .
Hmmm....Gloria.... After the orgy and they come back from China, Gloria calls MC into her office and Lance sees them again but MC bitch slaps Lance a couple of times and Gloria pulls out a strap on, , when MC sees what she wants to do to Lance he rips it off her puts it on himself and fucks both her holes. Lance is in a corner crying like a little girl . Tilly sensing MC, (I know she says she can't, but she's lying,) gets all hot and horny and brings Stacey, Nika, Valerie, Tilly's Mom and Nika's Mom promising them Ice Cream, to MC's workplace, seeing the strapon they all take turns in butt fucking Lance, and MC gets Gloria to join..... (The HAREM) wooohooooo.....then MC declares Free Love and another orgy ensuesDont forget the Mcs Latina boss.....
Hmmm....Gloria.... After the orgy and they come back from China, Gloria calls MC into her office and Lance sees them again but MC bitch slaps Lance a couple of times and Gloria pulls out a strap on, , when MC sees what she wants to do to Lance he rips it off her puts it on himself and fucks both her holes. Lance is in a corner crying like a little girl . Tilly sensing MC, (I know she says she can't, but she's lying,) gets all hot and horny and brings Stacey, Nika, Valerie, Tilly's Mom and Nika's Mom promising them Ice Cream, to MC's workplace, seeing the strapon they all take turns in butt fucking Lance, and MC gets Gloria to join..... (The HAREM) wooohooooo.....then MC declares Free Love and another orgy ensues
The issue is not really that she died, is that that whole scene felt out of place. Just before that, the whole dialogue between the mc and russian guy was a meme fest and out of nowhere they kill her.It doesn't bother me a bit if my daughter's mother died because that slut was just air for me. If she cheats once, she always cheats. So full of shit for the whole character. I would even edit all her points -500. Whenever possible I chose a negative selection for that.
If we’re talking straight now, then the last two updates have been full of shit. The last one was torn out of the ass. That, too, was done transversely.The issue is not really that she died, is that that whole scene felt out of place. Just before that, the whole dialogue between the mc and russian guy was a meme fest and out of nowhere they kill her.