I have to admit that my first impression of
Primal Instinct (airport scene) was negative.
The renders of Sandra and Alex (especially her botox lips) gave me the creeps.
Also, characters like Alex are probably my least favourite ones.
She's grown up (she appears like she's already in her 20s), still a virgin, madly in love with her brother and so focussed on him she seems unable to live a life on her own now he's gone.
I really can't stand dependent and clingy characters like her.
In my opinion her (already established) excessive longing for the MC is also kind of a lame incest motive.
Then there's Blake, one of those annoying douchebag "bros", you wish you could instantly launch into outer space.
Seriously - why is this guy even on our honeymoon?
Fortunately
Primal Instinct gets better after you survive the initial onslaught of creepiness.
Renders are overall pretty well done - you will still occasionally face some scenes that seem unintentionally odd / creepy / cringy (yeah, I'm aware the last one is supposed to be a grimace - still...):
The music is fitting.
There are several misspellings (still needs better proofreading).
MC and Meghan calling each other "wife" and "husband" sounds kinda weird.
Characters are interesting.
I'm missing some more (random) hotel guests - apart from the main characters the whole place feels kinda deserted.
The story is enigmatic and got me somewhat hooked.
There's also a decent amount of meaningful choices with different outcomes (scenes).
A bit of more specific criticism:
Overall pretty good and recommended.