Definitely had the making of a good H game here. I can only assume the creator's avarice and anti casual philosophy kinda screwed the pouch here. The way the side scrolling struggle bar and stripping was setup made the game certainly feel like an ACT H game you'd play while looking for ACT H games, but there's too many fail states. You don't need to make the game have unrelenting fashions of arcade-y gameplay with limited saves and limited health packs, we're not playing this game because it's a video game we're playing it because it's a hentai game. A game just needs a fail state to be considered a game, and it's totally doable to do that without ruining a person's boner which is counter intuitive to a hentai game's prospects. By that I mean endless ways to screw yourself over and vastly limit the amount of H content you can get before you game over, the pregnancy forced game over is a good mention on how to not do a game over given it's also a fetish people enjoy watching to it's climax without a hindrance. As for the online DRM and day one DLC well... if there were any pirates that were going to support the dev after they pirated you can forget about it now I'm sure.
Either way, missed opportunities all around. It still has the premise to be fantastic if he can rework the issues at hand or make a new game that doesn't make fappers want to skip the 'game'. Kinda reminds me of that H game with the paper bag guy, I forgot what it was called.