- Thread starter 6Rairyu9
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- Dec 27, 2017
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Good luck with your game. Hope you succeed. Promising begin, good idea so far, nice visuals. But one tiny critic make sure you have some proofreaders or so, cos I would say about 70-80 % the pronouns like he or she but also you are wrong in the version I played. I am no native speaker either, but that kind of mistakes sometimes make it quite harder to get what they are saying. Please do not feel offended by this, it is also a massive point for people to stay with your game and support you.
As I said, Good Luck with your game, and enough patience to get it rolling
As I said, Good Luck with your game, and enough patience to get it rolling
- Dec 29, 2023
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I hope that Sara being the maid of someone else's before won't mean anything much...
Also, fix the bad sentences and prolong the sex scenes, more variations, etc. etc.
Hope the MC can bring the girls from his hometown to this one. Not just the childhood friend alone, from the previous posts you said the other girls are not prostitutes of any kind, so hoping for more girls with the MC's harem.
Now speaking of harem, is that actually planned? What are the future tags, planned content, etc. etc.?
Also, fix the bad sentences and prolong the sex scenes, more variations, etc. etc.
Hope the MC can bring the girls from his hometown to this one. Not just the childhood friend alone, from the previous posts you said the other girls are not prostitutes of any kind, so hoping for more girls with the MC's harem.
Now speaking of harem, is that actually planned? What are the future tags, planned content, etc. etc.?
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Dev, you desperately need a proofreader, this should be your top priority.
- Dec 29, 2023
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Indeed, even though English is not my 1st lang but still I barely understand some sentence.
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