VN Ren'Py Abandoned Project SAGE [Act 1 v0.19d] [Paperwork]

[grtrader]

Ok, just got to point out how Fing stupid the dialogue and logic in this game is. The two shit bags that are black mailing her literally make it a point to use the idea she didn't go to the cops that she is a slut and wants it.

She even acknowledges that going to the cops now is a play in the dialogue. Does she fucking act on it. Hell when it offers you the opportunity to Act it fucking just loops back to the same choice.

All she has to do is say, "you know what fuck it release the pictures. It doesn't matter I have the audio and both you bitches are now going to jail. You might cause me some issues but your ass will be in jail." Those two sniveling piles of shits would have been begging with in seconds for her not to do so.

They pretty much made it a point to tell her that and player can't use it? Seriously. WTF is wrong with the author?

Not just that same scene he shoves his cock in her against her will. And talking to George she says it was rape when she can break out of that scene by bust the one guy in the jaw and kicking the other in the chest. Why the hell she didn't use that opportunity to just kill both of them is beyond me. The kitchen was right there with knives. Hell she could have took those high heal shoes and castrated both of those bitches. Again what the fuck is wrong with the author?

Then there is this bullshit discussion with George about her being mature enough to handle dealing with it. Hell, how the fuck is she responsible enough to deal with it. She let it get his far and every fucking chance she had to put an end to it she doesn't (granted that is because the author of this doesn't give to fucks about reality).

It goes beyond that. She literally threatened them with the cops and got to see how fast they backed the fuck down right after the family left. So she has a GOD damn clear experience threatening calling the police will work. You would have to be a mental fucking retard not to see that issue.

What's worse is he tries to portray her as some what smart. Hell, I know some really stupid women who wouldn't have let none of this shit get this far. I can only guess the author hates women and doesn't give two shits about a story or shit making any sense. Fuck If that's all I wanted I just would unpack the images and go through them it would be faster no need to click the stupid dialogue away. Fuck in this case the dialogue is 330,000. Might as well just stuck a fucking dictionary entry over each page maybe at least there is a chance someone would get something useful out of it and learn something. Hell I feel dumber for having just read this crap.

If you are wondering why I haven't got past this.

 

[changeling]

Stupid allegations remain stupid despite the subsequent denials.

Sure, champ!

 

[grtrader]

Ok, forget about that innocent glass of milk...

...BUT...

We are at F95, not on a Patreon paid post. You can talk freely about a game, and you can download it too. Nice, huh? But please, don't come with that pirate excuse. You don't know who is supporting who, so don't preach about it.

Deflorination will be with a romantic partner. Well she just got deflower by the guy black mailing her. She only fights back after he stuck his cock in her. So much for that.
That entire scene is beyond stupid and makes no sense don't believe me read my last post on this it explains all the issues with that.

 

[FightmeLaiLai]

If it was our world:
Call cops - Instant Game over for future blackmail
Let them fuck without fighting back - that would be full on rape which will be even worse.
Let them release photos - Sure she can try to call their buff but you are very much assuming they would be begging her not to do it. They could also either don't care about it and there be no winner.
Kill them with kitchen knives - Sure why not instant gratification eh? But then she goes to jail and its game over. I mean how many times have you killed someone really for blackmailing?

Overall I can see your pointgrtrader. I do as it obviously makes sense in our reality world.
But you are being overly serious in justifying a porn game by mixing with reality.
If you prefer reality porn games, A wife and mother - game will be your cup of tea.

 

[grtrader]

If it was our world:
Call cops - Instant Game over for future blackmail
Let them fuck without fighting back - that would be full on rape which will be even worse.
Let them release photos - Sure she can try to call their buff but you are very much assuming they would be begging her not to do it. They could also either don't care about it and there be no winner.
Kill them with kitchen knives - Sure why not instant gratification eh? But then she goes to jail and its game over. I mean how many times have you killed someone really for blackmailing?

Overall I can see your pointgrtrader. I do as it obviously makes sense in our reality world.
But you are being overly serious in justifying a porn game by mixing with reality.
If you prefer reality porn games, A wife and mother - game will be your cup of tea.

There is no assumption to it at that point. They already proved they don't want the cops called which is why he took the website back down at the beginning of the scene.

You're right killing them right off is a bit fast. Cut their dicks off after she slices their ankles so they can't run the fuck away. She can then clean up the mess and drag them off to where she wants and do with them as he feels like. Bet there are a number of people that would help her George being first, hobos, old men friends, brothers....

Killing for black mailing. I wouldn't admit to killing anyone for that. I will say there is one guy who forced himself on a childhood friend who no longer lives in the US or at least goes by his old ID. I'll do a hell of a lot worse than kill him if I see or hear or see him again. If you are wondering if there are lines I won't cross when it comes to protecting family and getting revenge. The answer is NO. If you think I am lying Ask the Navy and the Feds or even ask the local LE. I've identified myself on here enough for you to look it up . My discharge from the Navy says "Honorable" and at the same time "Not recommended for further military service". To be blunt my goals at that time didn't align with theirs and they didn't want to be associated with me when I did what I needed to do. After words they tried to get me back in. I went to work for DOD instead. Military service and DOD work are all public record easy to verify.

 

[FightmeLaiLai]

There is no assumption to it at that point. They already proved they don't want the cops called which is why he took the website back down at the beginning of the scene.

You're right killing them right off is a bit fast. Cut their dicks off after she slices their ankles so they can't run the fuck away. She can then clean up the mess and drag them off to where she wants and do with them as he feels like. Bet there are a number of people that would help her George being first, hobos, old men friends, brothers....

Really? My memory of Andrew taking down the website was more of a bargaining chip to get Amy to do his bidding. Anyone else care to clarify this?

As for chopping dicks and swing of other dicks helping her to clean up the mess. I mean sure it is possible but I would rather Paperwork focus his time on more tits/fuck/blackmail as its..... a porn game and not a murder plot movie

 

[Kaidman]

I'm happy with most of the aspects of the game it has some nice things that were not in the first incarnation of this game although it did go into things very fast like for instance the encounter with the police at the beach she ended up giving blowjobs

 

[scatfetish]

I don't know why so many people think that there are so few sex scenes, then everything wouldn't be so exciting anymore, I think it's good if she slowly plays with everyone.

 

[FightmeLaiLai]

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I don't know why so many people think that there are so few sex scenes, then everything wouldn't be so exciting anymore, I think it's good if she slowly plays with everyone.

Because the genre of most porn games especially female protag tags tend to have quick sex within 2-3 versions since first release. This is the only game I have seen with balls to keep just teasing players with no sex. Wait that is a big lie. AWAM has even bigger balls

 

[grtrader]

Really? My memory of Andrew taking down the website was more of a bargaining chip to get Amy to do his bidding. Anyone else care to clarify this?

As for chopping dicks and swing of other dicks helping her to clean up the mess. I mean sure it is possible but I would rather Paperwork focus his time on more tits/fuck/blackmail as its..... a porn game and not a murder plot movie

Her "Take it offline! now!"
Andrew "Why are you so angry?"
Her "I'll shove that phone up your ass if you don't start using it now!"
Her "Then I'll see what that smug face turns into!"
Andrew "Don't make threats you can't back up."
She starts dialing
Her "Then I can call the police since I have nothing to lose now."
Paul "Are you serious, Andrew?"
Paul Please don't let the cops be involved..."
Andrew uses phone takes site down
Her "I can't believe I've lost myself like that." ~ Grammar error included.
Andrew "All right..."

Does that sound like shit went his fucking way? Guessing you didn't read it. You probably one of these people who just skips the words clicking as fast as you can to get to the next scene.

Don't worry you aren't alone. All you have to do is look at the number of people giving this thing a 5 claiming it has a good plot and story.

 

[FightmeLaiLai]

Her "Take it offline! now!"
Andrew "Why are you so angry?"
Her "I'll shove that phone up your ass if you don't start using it now!"
Her "Then I'll see what that smug face turns into!"
Andrew "Don't make threats you can't back up."
She starts dialing
Her "Then I can call the police since I have nothing to lose now."
Paul "Are you serious, Andrew?"
Paul Please don't let the cops be involved..."
Andrew uses phone takes site down
Her "I can't believe I've lost myself like that." ~ Grammar error included.
Andrew "All right..."

Does that sound like shit went his fucking way? Guessing you didn't read it. You probably one of these people who just skips the words clicking as fast as you can to get to the next scene.

Don't worry you aren't alone. All you have to do is look at the number of people giving this thing a 5 claiming it has a good plot and story.

Okay I give you that win lol. Point taken. But I still stand by what I said.
We should not be too serious when playing porn games as its just porn fantasy.

Incest - Sure lets fuck our sisters and mother. And I am sure our mothers are actually super hot with DD tits
Harem - There are certain countries which men are allowed that but we all know most guys arent that lucky.
NTR - Humm.... Erm... maybe only in Japan?? lol
Blackmail and rape - Dark topic, lets not go there

Anyhow, clearly you don't like the game which is fine by me. The dev can't please everyone.

 

[Creeping Death]

So, after 34 updates, Amy's still a virgin.

Wrong thread, the no sex whining is over at AWAM! And to be correct, it's 17 updates. The game was restarted. I know it will be no argument for a non paying, pirating troll

Yeah no sex, so what?! handjob, blowjobs, hot scenes, great eroticity, I pay for it and I am completely fine with the great work of Paperwork!

Aslo this thing is frequently freezing.. Can't run for more then like 10 mins and it starts getting laggy then crashes.

On the same page, ca. one hour before, the dev himself wrote something. How I love those dudes, coming in, complaing without reading a single post before.

 

[grtrader]

Okay I give you that win lol. Point taken. But I still stand by what I said.
We should not be too serious when playing porn games as its just porn fantasy.

Incest - Sure lets fuck our sisters and mother. And I am sure our mothers are actually super hot with DD tits
Harem - There are certain countries which men are allowed that but we all know most guys arent that lucky.
NTR - Humm.... Erm... maybe only in Japan?? lol
Blackmail and rape - Dark topic, lets not go there

Anyhow, clearly you don't like the game which is fine by me. The dev can't please everyone.

If you are going to take the time to write a story and put 330,000 words to it you should do it right. Make it make at least some sense. Other wise you are wasting yours and the readers time.
Hell it would be more useful to copy the dictionary at this point this story has so many issues.
Frankly, it is little better than letting a chimp bang away at a typewriter.

The author starts off trying to make out like she is fairly smart. Then in pretty much every oppertunity to show she has the least bit of intellect he fails.

He gives you tones of false choices that lead right back to where he wants to go rather than you actually having a real choice.

Take that scene there we discussed above about the only a few endings to that scene in reality you end up doing exhibition, or primarily you end up on knees with him shoving cock up her against her will or she is bent over against the fridge and gets it shoved in her against her will. Some how the duechebag author doesn't count that as rape when she talks to George about it.

I can go from the beginning of the game if you like pretty much 75% of the scenes have serious contradictions.
The author needs to go the hell back to school and learn how to write.

 

[Creeping Death]

grtrader , you seem to be very skillfull in all aspects needed to create an adult VN to blast every top tier game here away! What is your game called, can I find you on patreon?

 

[sinik13]

can't wait to test this update anyone can make a android version of it? plz plz plz

 

[grtrader]

grtrader , you seem to be very skillfull in all aspects needed to create an adult VN to blast every top tier game here away! What is your game called, can I find you on patreon?

I contract for larger titles. Engine development and so on.
I also ghost write, and consult because of my technical background.

Outside of that AI development and robotics programming for various companies, groups and agencies.
That includes PLC, embedded systems, drivers, compilers development, ...
I also do Web development everything from Social media sits, adults sites and even my son's ROTC unit.

But I am working on a tool I might be releasing soon to the public. My son got me to work on. He was wanting a replacement for team speak. So building a client server system that the end users can modify the UI and build tools for with PHP.

I also happen to teach Game development and several universities are using the material. Including valve points to it from their SDL page.

Maybe, if I get time in between the rest of that and my other projects I might through my hat in this arena.

But maybe you want me to be more specific.
Tomorrows project will be replacing the harmonic balancer on one vehicle while my son is in school.
In the evening I need to debug a round robin task manager with mulitple queue's task stealing and sharing and external shut down means.
That will be used in two projects one I listed above the voip client server tool the second is an improvement to a game engine.
I need a similar one without the round robin for a compression system. I think I will end up using Sean Parents because the licensing is MIT and you can really beat its performance.
I'm behind on a number of tutorials and a book....
Then I will probably look at picking some more contract work you know to keep paying the bills.

Who knows maybe before my son's birthday in November I will find a few days to work on something like that.

 

[Tabu9000]

So, here we are again. A top game " Au pair innocenc " the Dev earn over 1000 bucks p/m, after 50 days of teasing ( a long way to go) a stupid update with a blackmail for one BJ appears.
We see on F95 the same topics and discussion here right now, only the option of a " sandbox" is missing. There maybe not so smart how a game works, before there spread her personal mind all over the place.
What happen to the Dev from " Au pair ,,,", after some warning here and me to not go on with the wrong guy. He don´t care and bring up the next update to fuck her quick in both holes.
In short terms, over 1000 tears rolling over F95 and over 50% of his Patreon- supporter are gone over night. He try to come out of this shit, but his game and money are gone forever.
I cross my finger that paperwork never ever lose his direction on any routes where he starts and how the game ends.
Because that´s the way to get the " dark birds out of her cave " to make only noises.

 

[changeling]

Wrong thread, the no sex whining is over at AWAM! And to be correct, it's 17 updates. The game was restarted. I know it will be no argument for a non paying, pirating troll

Yeah no sex, so what?! handjob, blowjobs, hot scenes, great eroticity, I pay for it and I am completely fine with the great work of Paperwork!

Not whining, just a mere fact pointed out, random fanboy. You just took it too personally. That's 34 updates, even if it splits to a new restart.

 

[Creeping Death]

I contract for larger titles. Engine development and so on.
I also ghost write, and consult because of my technical background.

Outside of that AI development and robotics programming for various companies, groups and agencies.
That includes PLC, embedded systems, drivers, compilers development, ...
I also do Web development everything from Social media sits, adults sites and even my son's ROTC unit.

But I am working on a tool I might be releasing soon to the public. My son got me to work on. He was wanting a replacement for team speak. So building a client server system that the end users can modify the UI and build tools for with PHP.

I also happen to teach Game development and several universities are using the material. Including valve points to it from their SDL page.

Maybe, if I get time in between the rest of that and my other projects I might through my hat in this arena.

But maybe you want me to be more specific.
Tomorrows project will be replacing the harmonic balancer on one vehicle while my son is in school.
In the evening I need to debug a round robin task manager with mulitple queue's task stealing and sharing and external shut down means.
That will be used in two projects one I listed above the voip client server tool the second is an improvement to a game engine.
I need a similar one without the round robin for a compression system. I think I will end up using Sean Parents because the licensing is MIT and you can really beat its performance.
I'm behind on a number of tutorials and a book....
Then I will probably look at picking some more contract work you know to keep paying the bills.

Who knows maybe before my son's birthday in November I will find a few days to work on something like that.

Nice tech background, not to say impressive. But this entitles no one to write a better adult VN. I think too many people believe adult vn game devs are blessed with skills in writing, rendering, programming and then have the idea to use it for a VN.

Mostly these devs just start to play around with all the stuff out of curiosity or interesst to do something creative. At least this is my motivation, working in a completely uncreative IT profession, to do something "creative".

So the demands many people here have at the devs are way to high to fullfill for single persons working in a fulltime job. That's what I criticise, criticising things by people I don't see anything of them doing it better.

Not whining, just a mere fact pointed out, random fanboy. You just took it too personally. That's 34 updates, even if it splits to a new restart.

Ok, thanks for clarifying this for all idiot patreon supporters who don't know what they do or pay for. There are more threads where you can share your wisdom. I will cancel my payments immediately... not. I like what he's doing and I think his work is worth supporting him monetary. So you don't like it? Told everyone here in the thread? Move on, there are many many other idiots in many many other threads who like the work of the respective devs and support them with money who need education about the amount of updates were no sex happened. Superior pirate master race, not paying for anything, just complain and don't do anything to show off how great they can do better.

 

[grtrader]

So, here we are again. A top game " Au pair innocenc " the Dev earn over 1000 bucks p/m, after 50 days of teasing ( a long way to go) a stupid update with a blackmail for one BJ appears.
We see on F95 the same topics and discussion here right now, only the option of a " sandbox" is missing. There maybe not so smart how a game works, before there spread her personal mind all over the place.
What happen to the Dev from " Au pair ,,,", after some warning here and me to not go on with the wrong guy. He don´t care and bring up the next update to fuck her quick in both holes.
In short terms, over 1000 tears rolling over F95 and over 50% of his Patreon- supporter are gone over night. He try to come out of this shit, but his game and money are gone forever.
I cross my finger that paperwork never ever lose his direction on any routes where he starts and how the game ends.
Because that´s the way to get the " dark birds out of her cave " to make only noises.

ROFL
I have to wonder how many people actually bother reading the dialogue.

Paperwork doesn't seem to be able to keep on the same path for anything. I'm not sure if his attentions span more closely resembles a gnat or a fruit fly trying to choose a a target.

The dialogue was so bad today I went ahead and used rpaExtract and just looked at the images after a point.