WeRLegion

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Hope you will also make versions for mac available.

Until then I will be careful to weight in on the size-discussion.
So I will just say in general:

Every boob is sacred
Every boob is great
If a boob is wasted,
God gets quite irate
 

voyeurkind

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IHowever, the game is for you. So if it is the general opinion about the girl, I may change the proportions in the future although I'm not willing to do it drastically :)
Please don't do this. I know you want the game to have some commercial success, but you should also make the game that you want to make. It'll be much better for that.

That being sais, I'm in the process of playing the game now. Here are some thoughts:

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I am enjoying it so far. I like that I can make her as slutty as I want. I think there could be some improvements, but I think you're on the right track.
 

blastwave2k

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no offense.. but..

fucking what ? is that patreon pledge reward ! o_O

1 buck patrons get game version ... 1 MONTH .. before public !!!

watdahell dude ! lol
really? i already had at least $1 worth of entertainment. sub me in

oh shit. i'm the only one. guess i better not leak anything. he'd definitely know who did it xDDD
 

Pathvader

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The genre has NTR in it. So question with female protag is it the female who gets NTRed? Usually it is always a male character that gets it. May have to play this game just to see a female character get ntr lol
 

blastwave2k

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The genre has NTR in it. So question with female protag is it the female who gets NTRed? Usually it is always a male character that gets it. May have to play this game just to see a female character get ntr lol
so far i'm loving the game. well worth a dollar sub going forward i think. and umm. yea, female NTR? what is she NTRing the aunt? is that how we're looking at this? or is some other girl going to come in and sweep a boyfriend from her? i don't know. i don't know devs plans for future, but so far not seeing any actual NTR
 

Marquis

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I wanted the girl to be lean, Ponyguy. This is my first game but I've been lurking these forums for some time. Girls in games here are usually a bit "thick" for my taste. However, the game is for you. So if it is the general opinion about the girl, I may change the proportions in the future although I'm not willing to do it drastically :)
Don't change it, pretty please? Games here are overrun with a chubby, sometimes even actually fat and obese girls with giant mammaries and asses. Its very nice to see lean girls in games, even more since its so rare sight here.
 

KyoriKusagami

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@blastwave2k, I think the correct is cheating, but if she is single, it doesn't make any sense the tags "cheating" and "NTR" are already put in the post or maybe she will gets a boyfriend (i don't know if the game is linear or i will have real choices later) and cheat on him. yeah, it's too early to think in this.
 
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A lot of the times when you refuse something the aftermath of those scenes will still play out like stripped clothing. Also the world is ridiculous and sounds like some horny teenager wrote it. :p
Have to agree, forced to date some clown, share a room with old git, no real choices no real appeal.
 
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Zippity

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This visual novel/game is not much of a visual novel... The story is basic, and most situations the protagonist finds herself involved in, all end up having sexual stuff occurring... Very little meaningful and/or deep story elements... In fact, every single character (and there a lot of them) the female protagonist runs into either lusts after her, or thinks sexual thoughts about her... Every choice presented deals with going ahead with sexual content or stopping/avoiding sexual content, which makes this not really a visual novel and pretty much a porn fest... It uses Honey Select models and overused backdrops... For being so low a version number, there is an epic ton of sexual content in this thing as well... If you decide to go with all non-sex related choices, expect to be done with this thing quickly, because there isn't much attention put towards the story aspects outside of sexual stuff... I went ahead and posted my review...
 
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voyeurkind

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A few more thoughts:

* There's a lot of content, which is a good thing. However...

* Perhaps you should space out some of the content a little more. So much happens the second day of the game that I wonder where you're going to go with it all. Maybe space it out a bit so it doesn't all happen right away.

* I personally don't want to see the MC forced into any situations. That turns me right off pretty much any game. If she makes a choice that puts her in a bad situation that's one thing, but I'd just as soon there's no blackmail angle or anything like that.
 

paperwork

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Thanks to those who took their time and gave their reviews and thoughts here.
After the date night which is full of sex, MC says she won't do it again. In fact that was my idea; after a fast start to set the tone, the player will decide what the MC will do afterwards. This is what will happen after 2nd update. At least it is what I've been planning. So the first two versions will be an introduction.
The MC will have a boyfriend (He's a bastard). Unfortunately for some, this is a given too. What will happen afterwards is the players choice. So there will definitely be optional cheating.
This is not a game that takes itself very serious. I want to have fun making it. So expect stupid things as long as they are consistent.
 
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paperwork

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Ans as for creepy eyes and mouths of male characters, I can't really do much about them. My patreon earnings will go to a rig that can render and buying assets. After that I can do better visuals which satisfy both me and hopefully you. I really would like that to happen until my second game.
 
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