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typos I found:
In the intro
"screw up this at all" -> screw this up at all
"If floor 80th look like" I think would be better if it was If the 80th floor looked like
"She’ll be delighted to show you our most valuable asset, as you know is Dr. White’s baby girl" -> which as you know
"well, it would be foolish of you to not know by now this place" -> that this place
"like a smile that it was not meant to be finished" ->like a smile not meant to be finished
First mission in the heist
"For what I’d seen of him, he was the kind of big dumbass that would lose their temper right away"-? from what I'd seen of him
Second mission with the reverend
"You're a good agent and your two first missions" -> first two missions
In the intro
"screw up this at all" -> screw this up at all
"If floor 80th look like" I think would be better if it was If the 80th floor looked like
"She’ll be delighted to show you our most valuable asset, as you know is Dr. White’s baby girl" -> which as you know
"well, it would be foolish of you to not know by now this place" -> that this place
"like a smile that it was not meant to be finished" ->like a smile not meant to be finished
First mission in the heist
"For what I’d seen of him, he was the kind of big dumbass that would lose their temper right away"-? from what I'd seen of him
Second mission with the reverend
"You're a good agent and your two first missions" -> first two missions
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