Started the game yesterday, and am currently midway through season 2.
I don't know if I can even express how blown away I am by this game. It is truly transcendent. By which I mean, it's not just a porn game. At some point soon I'll gather my thoughts and add a review.
A few typos or (possible) word substitutions I found.
Season 1:
When MC gives Emily the camera she says, "I'm gonna need to mixture it to learn the settings." (Unless this is some technical camera term I've never heard of, you might have meant to write something like 'fool with.')
When Hanna busts into MC's room the first time she says, "Oh the look is broken, my bad!" (Should be 'lock'.)
Season 2:
When Celestine confronts Emily, she says, "You never striked me as one to give up." (Should be 'struck'.)
Some highlights. The scene at the Oasis with Kaylee. What she says about fiction and its ability to transport is a nice moment of irony. (Not the funny kind, the meaningful kind.) Given that this VN is doing such a fantastic job of worldbuilding, it was a nice moment to stop and reflect along with her.
The moments when we delve into the pasts of the characters have been very emotionally effective. (So... affectively effective. Heh.)
Almost every time Kaylee makes a mean face.
There are many more.
The characters (aside from the obvious comic relief) are all psychologically believable and very well written. The scene with Ashe after the visit to the doctor was superb.
The cutscenes are all fantastic and well animated. The sex scenes are hot, and the bonus scenes always fit into the story like they should have been there, even if they were voted in later.
I could go on.
I'll just say it's great.
