- Aug 21, 2019
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Hmm. was good, but some stuff doesn't flow well. Like the Tiara stealing part and MC thinking why she is in the city and stuff. But after getting to his home, he completely forgets about it and only thinks about his gf and her mother. Its not like they were just acquaintances either. They know each other like brother and sister, so him not thinking or being worried about her didn't flow well in that instance. still was good tho, just something I couldn't get out of my head.