Decided to float a few bucks, I'm a sucker for catgirl games.
After playing through 0.1, I have a few comments:
MC is a complete dumbass, can we please rein this in from "Harem Anime Protagonist" levels of obliviousness?
How long is it supposed to have been since the flashback, in rough terms. It made me think of Lilly more in terms of "that old cat that has been in the office forever" instead of "that cat that we just found last month", but the way MC is treating alcohol and Lilly has me thinking I'm supposed to be reading this timegap as much less than my initial thoughts. Maybe a "medium flashback" could be fit in there with a "mid-way" aged Lilly and a comment of "I knew Anthros aged fast, but she's grown so fast" as a way to indicate this? I don't know.
How old is MC supposed to be? He's a small business owner, and owns a decently sized house from the looks of it, either way it seems like he's coded as much younger than he "should" be so I want to figure out what the intention is.
Either way, going to keep my eye on this for a bit, as I said I'm a sucker for exactly something like this and I'm looking forward to how you guys navigate this story.
Decided to float a few bucks, I'm a sucker for catgirl games.
After playing through 0.1, I have a few comments:
MC is a complete dumbass, can we please rein this in from "Harem Anime Protagonist" levels of obliviousness?
How long is it supposed to have been since the flashback, in rough terms. It made me think of Lilly more in terms of "that old cat that has been in the office forever" instead of "that cat that we just found last month", but the way MC is treating alcohol and Lilly has me thinking I'm supposed to be reading this timegap as much less than my initial thoughts. Maybe a "medium flashback" could be fit in there with a "mid-way" aged Lilly and a comment of "I knew Anthros aged fast, but she's grown so fast" as a way to indicate this? I don't know.
How old is MC supposed to be? He's a small business owner, and owns a decently sized house from the looks of it, either way it seems like he's coded as much younger than he "should" be so I want to figure out what the intention is.
Either way, going to keep my eye on this for a bit, as I said I'm a sucker for exactly something like this and I'm looking forward to how you guys navigate this story.
I may be a complete hypocrite on a pirate forum, but not at the moment, sorry. I'll PM you when I can justify it to myself and stop my hypocrisy. (Something, something, at least I'm self aware? I don't even know)
Still enjoying this, I think there's a few grammar and spelling issues that need cleanup, but nothing too terrible. It's not super obvious it's a translated game, so kudos to your English Translator.
Still enjoying this, I think there's a few grammar and spelling issues that need cleanup, but nothing too terrible. It's not super obvious it's a translated game, so kudos to your English Translator.