Ren'Py Abandoned Pursuit of Dreams [v0.1.1] [Seizel]

Siegalis

New Member
Mar 8, 2020
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The game is full of bugs, it is very short for a demo, the images have saws, they are only placed images and now, there is no programming, the story seems interesting ... but it can become flat. The map of the city is very poor, compared to other images, the exit options are marked nonsense, bad and it is sad for how they were painted. Of course my criticisms are strong but that is not a demo, it is an alpha, a demo presents a game that lacks few tweaks and then more things will be missing, this is in my opinion, it is just an alpha that lacks a lot of polishing. Will it present something new or will it even correct the errors of this alpha? Thanks for your time for reading me.
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WaerM

Active Member
Dec 3, 2017
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Is there anything to do in this game more than
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And i feel it a bit strange with a teacher that's in her classroom only one time :)
 

Fzoner95

Well-Known Member
Oct 13, 2017
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- After the intro MC says he has to go to school but it's sunday
- The red for the evening map light is too strong
- navigation is a pain in the ass
- the principal tells me that I should look for Lena on another day but she is at the school
- MC finds the book for Lena even before she told him that she is looking for it
- Masturbating doesn't forward the time
 

Mormont

Devoted Member
Nov 30, 2018
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Glad to see you've fixed the navigation looks much better already and now I'm not clicking all over the screen just to move room :LOL:
 

BigMike240

Newbie
May 21, 2018
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Love the Music and Renders, BUT...It's Really Fucking Annoying how you have to skip multiple days to prolong the game nothing happens 90% of the time.

6 ish lewds, peek in shower, quick picks during masturbation/sleep, handjob in library, Principle spanks teacher after skipping like 2 days, and the kiss after helping friend/cousin depending if you used the patch or not.

Wake up search empty rooms or peek nothing happens
go to school find a book find glasses find book then you gotta skip multiple afternoon evening nights virtually all meaningless nothing happens during those times

yada yada early work granted there could be potential, overall not enough meat on the bones, everything is spread thin you'll end up skipping/sleeping more times than whats actually in the game. Maybe if there were more stuff in between during afternoon night like a glory hole in the school bathroom/gym or watch porn on the pc to break off the monotony. plus the gym and park are under construction so extremely early stages. Best of luck.
 

LionHeart131

Member
May 23, 2018
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Seems like it has potential to be a good game. However, it needs to fix the navigation as well as the loop bugs. Also could use some polishing on renders.