thetwist007

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Jan 24, 2018
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Mini review - putting the review here because I can't honestly give the game more than a couple of stars in present state and that would be cruel to a v0.1 release, but I want to give some feedback.

The Good:
- the writing (when you can find it) it pretty good. The porn logic is not too extreme, the escalation is slow and teasing.
- the video clips are something new that I haven't seen before: a whole series of non-sexual situations with the same "stepmom" actress. this is a massive improvement compared to most other twineHTML+realporn games which normally have random and disconnected videos with a variety of different actresses.

The Bad:
- the grind is about 3x too much + it's coupled to a stupid timebased click game. okay, sure, i'll do the laundry and clean the kitchen and the pool... but having to do that for 5 days straight to get to the next "talk"? and then another 10 times "freelance work" to get the $200 for an event? It's just too much.

The ugly:
- bugs. lotsa lotsa many bugs. This game **really** needed the dev to actually do a playtest before releasing, let alone a closed alpha playtest by some other people.


Summary:
- thank you dev for making the effort to create a game. too many people on this board don't appreciate the effort required.
- i like the writing, I just wish I could read more of it without hating the gated progress to get there
- the consistent actresses in the videos are great, an actually new thing for this genre.
- please playtest the game yourself before release. Yes, it's a v0.1 release, but there's easily 1/2 dozen game breaking bugs that would have been caught.
Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts on my game. I genuinely appreciate your feedback, and it's crucial for me to hear from players like you as it helps me improve.

I understand your concerns about the grind and the time-based mechanics in the current version of the game. Your feedback regarding the pacing is valuable, and I'll take it into consideration for future updates to ensure a more enjoyable experience for players.

Regarding the bugs you've encountered, I apologize for any inconvenience they may have caused. I agree that thorough playtesting is essential, and I'm committed to addressing and resolving these issues promptly.

I'm delighted to hear that you appreciate the writing and the consistency of our actresses. It's encouraging to know that you're enjoying those aspects of the game.

Your feedback inspires me to continue working hard to make this game better with each update. I value your support and hope you'll give my future releases a try. Rest assured, I am committed to delivering an improved gaming experience in the next versions.

Once again, thank you for your feedback, and please keep an eye out for my updates. Your input is incredibly valuable to me, and I look forward to making the game more enjoyable for you and all my players.
 
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So the plot to the first couple seasons of Boardwalk Empire?

Also how DARE you make a queen of hearts game without the milf being asian. Understandable mistake really, niche fetish and all, but its still upsetting
 
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somebodynobody

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Queen of heart

Using the error fixed html.

Visually it is not great looking.

Some passages are huge paragraphs of text.

After assigning people their roles, the next screen is not centered.

After the beginning, you shouldn't have to go to the living room for that scene, it should auto fire.

Shouldn't be able to do freelancing or whatever on first night after those scenes. Also the stop button should vanish from freelancing after you do it.

having bandicut at the end of the videos is kind of funny. Even some of the gifs have weird credits like cleaning the kitchen a towel wiping a counter gif is an international film festival.

sleep doesn't matter.

if you go to the very right of a bar, it is undefined.

outing uses the whatever video was previously used (swimming, exercise, etc).

morality choices don't seem really moral.

It is weird you can choose to do a thing to get love, or choose to talk and one of the choices is also love.

I will say a lot of the little videos should be much shorter, why a minute long swim video?

When triggers happen they seem to be kind of out of nowhere, you really need to hard set them.

In bedroom need undefined amount to talk.

Some of the text stays on screen like if you did something with a benefit from a previous room it will show in the next, like x2 money or whatever.

330 in kitchen everything overlaps.

So much grinding, and no idea for what. Ask yourself, do you want to do something over and over again. If you get the best score at whatever improves relationship that is +10, I have just seen a 480 relationship, that means perfecting the relationship things 48 times. If 0 or other then many more.

Talking in living room during day instead of outing.
Uncaught TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'title')
at window.talkEventScene (eval at call.output.output (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:3:140549), <anonymous>:310:32)
at window.talkEventCheck (eval at call.output.output (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:3:140549), <anonymous>:304:3)
at HTMLDivElement.onclick (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:1:1)

It seems you can only talk once? Which makes it impossible to get the points you need if you screw up. Like why is love or lust even a choice if it can break the game if you do that?

Game skipped past a buzzing lightness and replayed the scene with Jenna under the blanket during the afternoon, and then the quest tracker jumped to a new one.

It wasn't my imagination quest has some /divs sitting in the text.

Quest text doesn't mention things don't happen on weekends

pic/scenes/misc/mom34.jpg (images are not in the misc folder)
pic/scenes/misc/mom35.jpg
pic/scenes/home/support.jpg (doesn't exist)

A bunch of things being "undefined" when it should be just stated as "end of content".
 
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thetwist007

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Jan 24, 2018
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Queen of heart

Using the error fixed html.

Visually it is not great looking.

Some passages are huge paragraphs of text.

After assigning people their roles, the next screen is not centered.

After the beginning, you shouldn't have to go to the living room for that scene, it should auto fire.

Shouldn't be able to do freelancing or whatever on first night after those scenes. Also the stop button should vanish from freelancing after you do it.

having bandicut at the end of the videos is kind of funny. Even some of the gifs have weird credits like cleaning the kitchen a towel wiping a counter gif is an international film festival.

sleep doesn't matter.

if you go to the very right of a bar, it is undefined.

outing uses the whatever video was previously used (swimming, exercise, etc).

morality choices don't seem really moral.

It is weird you can choose to do a thing to get love, or choose to talk and one of the choices is also love.

I will say a lot of the little videos should be much shorter, why a minute long swim video?

When triggers happen they seem to be kind of out of nowhere, you really need to hard set them.

In bedroom need undefined amount to talk.

Some of the text stays on screen like if you did something with a benefit from a previous room it will show in the next, like x2 money or whatever.

330 in kitchen everything overlaps.

So much grinding, and no idea for what. Ask yourself, do you want to do something over and over again. If you get the best score at whatever improves relationship that is +10, I have just seen a 480 relationship, that means perfecting the relationship things 48 times. If 0 or other then many more.

Talking in living room during day instead of outing.
Uncaught TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'title')
at window.talkEventScene (eval at call.output.output (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:3:140549), <anonymous>:310:32)
at window.talkEventCheck (eval at call.output.output (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:3:140549), <anonymous>:304:3)
at HTMLDivElement.onclick (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:1:1)

It seems you can only talk once? Which makes it impossible to get the points you need if you screw up. Like why is love or lust even a choice if it can break the game if you do that?

Game skipped past a buzzing lightness and replayed the scene with Jenna under the blanket during the afternoon, and then the quest tracker jumped to a new one.

It wasn't my imagination quest has some /divs sitting in the text.

Quest text doesn't mention things don't happen on weekends

pic/scenes/misc/mom34.jpg (images are not in the misc folder)
pic/scenes/misc/mom35.jpg
pic/scenes/home/support.jpg (doesn't exist)

A bunch of things being "undefined" when it should be just stated as "end of content".
Thank you for your thorough review of 'Queen of Heart.' I genuinely appreciate your feedback, as it helps me identify areas that need improvement and make the gaming experience better for players like you. Let me address your points:


  1. Visual Presentation: I acknowledge that the visual presentation needs improvement. I'm actively working on enhancing the overall aesthetics to make it more visually appealing.
  2. Text Length: I'll work on breaking down long paragraphs of text into more digestible portions to improve readability.
  3. Centering Issue: The issue with the next screen not being centered after assigning roles will be fixed in the next update.
  4. Scene Transition: I'll make sure that after the beginning, the transition to the living room scene happens automatically to enhance gameplay flow.
  5. Freelancing: I'll adjust the ability to do freelancing or similar activities on the first night and ensure that the stop button disappears after completing the task.
  6. Credits and Gifs: I'll review and update the credits and ensure that they align with the context of the scenes. Additionally, I'll shorten videos and gifs as appropriate.
  7. Game Mechanics: Your points about morality choices and love-related choices are noted. I'll refine these choices to make them more meaningful and consistent.
  8. Triggers: I'll work on making trigger events more logical and less abrupt.
  9. Bedroom Interaction: I'll add clarity to the required amount of talk in the bedroom.
  10. Text Overlay: I'll resolve issues with text carrying over from one room to another.
  11. Overlapping Content: I'll fix the overlapping issue in the kitchen (330).
  12. Grinding: I appreciate your feedback on the grinding aspect. I'll rethink and rebalance the gameplay to ensure it remains engaging and rewarding without feeling repetitive.
  13. Unintended Errors: I'll investigate and resolve the reported errors, such as the 'undefined' issue and the JavaScript error.
  14. Quest Tracking: I'll review and fix any issues with quest tracking to ensure it functions correctly.
  15. Weekend Events: I'll clarify in the quest text that certain events don't occur on weekends.
  16. Image File Locations: I'll make sure all image files are correctly placed in the respective folders.
  17. 'Undefined' Content: I'll address the instances where 'undefined' appears and replace it with appropriate content or 'end of content' indicators.
Thank you again for your detailed feedback. Your input is invaluable, and I'm committed to improving 'Queen of Heart' based on your suggestions. Please keep an eye out for updates, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the game as it evolves
 
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Stakos

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I like the story element and the way it goes but it's clearly too early to judge. My only complaint is that although there is an active task there is no way to reach it because you can't talk to stepmom in order to raise your morality. Unless there is another way to do it and Imissed it...
 
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Lednacek

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May 26, 2017
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i dont mind the grind. it is not htat bad. Just that there are so many bugs that it makes no sense. I agree you should at least mention the actresses in the game and put some link to them.
 

thetwist007

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Jan 24, 2018
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I'm using the error fix, but it still gives me the in game error? Please advise
Thank you for bringing this issue to my attention. I apologize for the inconvenience you're experiencing, despite using the error fix. I take the quality of the game seriously, and I'm actively working to address all reported issues.

Please clear browser cache

To help me assist you better, could you please provide additional details (Screenshot) about the specific error you're encountering? This might include the error message itself, the context in which it occurs, or any actions you took leading up to the error. With this information, I'll be better equipped to identify and resolve the problem.

Your feedback is crucial in improving the game, and I appreciate your patience as I work to ensure a smoother and error-free gaming experience. Thank you for your understanding.
 

tappp92

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Oct 23, 2017
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It's a bit of fun, but way too grindy. Any way to fill in stamina/relation/money events so that they don't loop the same? Maybe give a few more spicy fun things intermittently? Plans for any other females in the mix?
 

thetwist007

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Jan 24, 2018
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It's a bit of fun, but way too grindy. Any way to fill in stamina/relation/money events so that they don't loop the same? Maybe give a few more spicy fun things intermittently? Plans for any other females in the mix?
Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you're having some fun with the game. I completely understand your concern about the grinding aspects.

I don't want gamers to release their sexual excitement early. So, when your sexual excitement arises or increases, this grinding option will help keep you calm . ;);):ROFLMAO:
 
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konabwo

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vids are consistent
slowburning/teasing
ui seems to work
tips

subjective (-)
statgrind. i usually just cheat stats.
text. i dont read texts and rely on overall environment/tips/objects etc

dunno how it can help. depends on what you choose the game to be - datesimy VN (like now) or sandbox
 

lordfridge9

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Lol, the dev full on stole the plot from a story on Literotica. Hell, didn't even bother to change the names of the MC and GF, even just copy and pasted the whole intro as it is
 

Lonewolf007

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If sharing sharing is in the game please make it optional instead of forcing the player to share :WeSmart: . I would also like the option of stealing mom away from the dad on that route:devilish:. I find the grind O.K. but I would prefer to have the option to disable the mini games .
 
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theickobicko

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i'm playing the online version and The Tipping Point quest didn't trigger at first, it triggered 3 days after i reached the requirements. I think the reason was it was a weekend. so i reached the requirements on saturday, but it triggered on monday. but that was not mentioned in the quest requirements (or i didn't notice it?). Later quests are the same, they require it to be weekday to fulfil, which is really strange tbh.

sometimes previous quests trigger again when you enter some rooms. like gf watching at phone in MC bedroom.

i reached a quest where the mom asks for opinion on a bikini, when the leave button is clicked, the game crashes with "Error: the passage "GameOver" does not exist"
 
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