Well just make this game Story based and you are good with it. Why put nonsensical grinding fest here?
Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts on my game. I genuinely appreciate your feedback, and it's crucial for me to hear from players like you as it helps me improve.Mini review - putting the review here because I can't honestly give the game more than a couple of stars in present state and that would be cruel to a v0.1 release, but I want to give some feedback.
The Good:
- the writing (when you can find it) it pretty good. The porn logic is not too extreme, the escalation is slow and teasing.
- the video clips are something new that I haven't seen before: a whole series of non-sexual situations with the same "stepmom" actress. this is a massive improvement compared to most other twineHTML+realporn games which normally have random and disconnected videos with a variety of different actresses.
The Bad:
- the grind is about 3x too much + it's coupled to a stupid timebased click game. okay, sure, i'll do the laundry and clean the kitchen and the pool... but having to do that for 5 days straight to get to the next "talk"? and then another 10 times "freelance work" to get the $200 for an event? It's just too much.
The ugly:
- bugs. lotsa lotsa many bugs. This game **really** needed the dev to actually do a playtest before releasing, let alone a closed alpha playtest by some other people.
Summary:
- thank you dev for making the effort to create a game. too many people on this board don't appreciate the effort required.
- i like the writing, I just wish I could read more of it without hating the gated progress to get there
- the consistent actresses in the videos are great, an actually new thing for this genre.
- please playtest the game yourself before release. Yes, it's a v0.1 release, but there's easily 1/2 dozen game breaking bugs that would have been caught.
Thank you for your thorough review of 'Queen of Heart.' I genuinely appreciate your feedback, as it helps me identify areas that need improvement and make the gaming experience better for players like you. Let me address your points:Queen of heart
Using the error fixed html.
Visually it is not great looking.
Some passages are huge paragraphs of text.
After assigning people their roles, the next screen is not centered.
After the beginning, you shouldn't have to go to the living room for that scene, it should auto fire.
Shouldn't be able to do freelancing or whatever on first night after those scenes. Also the stop button should vanish from freelancing after you do it.
having bandicut at the end of the videos is kind of funny. Even some of the gifs have weird credits like cleaning the kitchen a towel wiping a counter gif is an international film festival.
sleep doesn't matter.
if you go to the very right of a bar, it is undefined.
outing uses the whatever video was previously used (swimming, exercise, etc).
morality choices don't seem really moral.
It is weird you can choose to do a thing to get love, or choose to talk and one of the choices is also love.
I will say a lot of the little videos should be much shorter, why a minute long swim video?
When triggers happen they seem to be kind of out of nowhere, you really need to hard set them.
In bedroom need undefined amount to talk.
Some of the text stays on screen like if you did something with a benefit from a previous room it will show in the next, like x2 money or whatever.
330 in kitchen everything overlaps.
So much grinding, and no idea for what. Ask yourself, do you want to do something over and over again. If you get the best score at whatever improves relationship that is +10, I have just seen a 480 relationship, that means perfecting the relationship things 48 times. If 0 or other then many more.
Talking in living room during day instead of outing.
Uncaught TypeError: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'title')
at window.talkEventScene (eval at call.output.output (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:3:140549), <anonymous>:310:32)
at window.talkEventCheck (eval at call.output.output (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:3:140549), <anonymous>:304:3)
at HTMLDivElement.onclick (QOH-(CH-1)(Error-Fix).html:1:1)
It seems you can only talk once? Which makes it impossible to get the points you need if you screw up. Like why is love or lust even a choice if it can break the game if you do that?
Game skipped past a buzzing lightness and replayed the scene with Jenna under the blanket during the afternoon, and then the quest tracker jumped to a new one.
It wasn't my imagination quest has some /divs sitting in the text.
Quest text doesn't mention things don't happen on weekends
pic/scenes/misc/mom34.jpg (images are not in the misc folder)
pic/scenes/misc/mom35.jpg
pic/scenes/home/support.jpg (doesn't exist)
A bunch of things being "undefined" when it should be just stated as "end of content".
Thank you for bringing this issue to my attention. I apologize for the inconvenience you're experiencing, despite using the error fix. I take the quality of the game seriously, and I'm actively working to address all reported issues.I'm using the error fix, but it still gives me the in game error? Please advise
Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you're having some fun with the game. I completely understand your concern about the grinding aspects.It's a bit of fun, but way too grindy. Any way to fill in stamina/relation/money events so that they don't loop the same? Maybe give a few more spicy fun things intermittently? Plans for any other females in the mix?