VN Ren'Py Race of Life [Act 1 v1.04.5] [Underground Studio]

[jadepaladin]

I think the thing that sets Maggie back for me is that she's not involved in the story at all - though at the same time, I feel that sometimes you do need that. At the moment, it just feels a bit like she's an afterthought though, with a completely unrelated story that therefore doesn't do anything to drive the main story forwards. I guess maybe if/when the mystery in her past and the thing with her mother starts to tie in with the industry, or the people in the racing scene, or of course, the situation with Lily, it will start to feel a bit more together.

I like the idea of Maggie and agree it's a negative that she's disconnected from the main plot. It seems like that will be addressed given the connections her family has to the main plot.
The massage table scene is a negative for me. I understand the purpose and as a sex scene it's fine, it just feels out of place to me and not executed as well as it could have been. She makes up for it with the blowjob scene later but at that point, lewdly she's at neutral compared to someone like Jasmine.
At least she's not Veronica.

 

[Dessolos]

I like the idea of Maggie and agree it's a negative that she's disconnected from the main plot. It seems like that will be addressed given the connections her family has to the main plot.
The massage table scene is a negative for me. I understand the purpose and as a sex scene it's fine, it just feels out of place to me and not executed as well as it could have been. She makes up for it with the blowjob scene later but at that point, lewdly she's at neutral compared to someone like Jasmine.
At least she's not Veronica.

I used to hate the massage table scene but I don't anymore once she told the MC the reason for it. tho I do agree it doesn't make it feel any less out of place and the execution of it feels like something you see on pornhub. She should of had that conversion with the MC first and the message table scene later.

 

[escofield]

Jasmine is the forbidden fruit

 

[Maviarab]

Jasmine is the forbidden fruit

That's slightly off and needs throwing away? Couldn't agree more.

 

[Dessolos]

That's slightly off and needs throwing away? Couldn't agree more.

Nah Veronica is the kind you throw away. Jasmine is the kind of fruit when it's going bad you just cut the bad parts off and still eat it before it goes completely bad and you have throw it away.

 

[jadepaladin]

Veronica is like a huge watermelon. It sounds like a good idea because you'd think there is more fruit but the bigger the watermelon is, the more the juices are spread out and it leads to being less flavorful.

Plus someone left it outside for a week in a parking lot.

 

[Dessolos]

Veronica is like a huge watermelon. It sounds like a good idea because you'd think there is more fruit but the bigger the watermelon is, the more the juices are spread out and it leads to being less flavorful.

Plus someone left it outside for a week in a parking lot.

nah Veronica is the watermelon that gets the Tybalt treatment and no one wants to see that. I mean Jill was horrified.

 

[SlapE]

Jasmine is the ultimate side chick

She's my main chick, Alison being a very close 2nd. I get what you mean though.

 

[jadepaladin]

nah Veronica is the watermelon that gets the Tybalt treatment and no one wants to see that. I mean Jill was horrified.

I felt bad for the watermelon. That was a good looking watermelon completely ruined.

Wonder if Veronica has an equivalent for the MC.

 

[superseveneight]

Top tier fruit comparisons.
Kris is up there for me because... she likes to cuddle.

 

[Dessolos]

Top tier fruit comparisons.
Kris is up there for me because... she likes to cuddle.
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only if Jas would learn a thing or 2 from her since she didn't want to cuddle <_>

 

[superseveneight]

only if Jas would learn a thing or 2 from her since she didn't want to cuddle <_>

Actually tragic. And we're also lacking a Kris kiss scene.

 

[Razrback16]

Top tier fruit comparisons.
Kris is up there for me because... she likes to cuddle.
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Ya I find her very sexy, just wish she wasn't seemingly paired with that other girl. That's what turned me away from her route.

 

[Dessolos]

Ya I find her very sexy, just wish she wasn't seemingly paired with that other girl. That's what turned me away from her route.

Yeah I still haven't watched the threesome because of her being in it. Tho i will say Kris's response if you turn down a threesome was a small negative towards her character for me as well

 

[Maccabbee]

Ya I find her very sexy, just wish she wasn't seemingly paired with that other girl. That's what turned me away from her route.

Yeah I still haven't watched the threesome because of her being in it. Tho i will say Kris's response if you turn down a threesome was a small negative towards her character for me as well

You don't know what you're missing. For a kinky threesome, it was remarkably wholesome and sweet. I was not a fan of Alexa at all before that. My opinion changed. This scene was top tier, and made me wish they could be a main ending.

 

[Dessolos]

You don't know what you're missing. For a kinky threesome, it was remarkably wholesome and sweet. I was not a fan of Alexa at all before that. My opinion changed. This scene was top tier, and made me wish they could be a main ending.

I plan to play it next time I play the game / replay it. But tbh I don't like threesomes most of the time so it's 50 / 50 if I like it especially since I don't like Alexa and Kris not a favorite of mine. However I did like the Jasmine and Nat Sauna scene so there is a chance.

 

[Maccabbee]

I plan to play it next time I play the game / replay it. But tbh I don't like threesomes most of the time so it's 50 / 50 if I like it especially since I don't like Alexa and Kris not a favorite of mine. However I did like the Jasmine and Nat Sauna scene so there is a chance.

Yeah, that was hot, but this is different from that. Also, as a threesome it was extremely kinky (the level of which I seem to recall that you can have some say in). I really enjoyed the light BDSM play, and the aftermath. I am normally mostly vanilla, but the scene just worked for me.

 

[Razrback16]

Yeah, that was hot, but this is different from that. Also, as a threesome it was extremely kinky (the level of which I seem to recall that you can have some say in). I really enjoyed the light BDSM play, and the aftermath. I am normally mostly vanilla, but the scene just worked for me.

It's a good scene for sure. I went ahead and played the scene when I first played the previous chapter just because I wanted to see Kris, but then backed the choice out and went for Maggie. Was hoping for a one on one Kris route, but that may not be in the cards.

 

[MiltonPowers]

Was hoping for a one on one Kris route, but that may not be in the cards.

There won't be a route for her, she's a confirmed SG.

 

[Razrback16]

There won't be a route for her, she's a confirmed SG.

Makes me feel even better about moving to Maggie, thx.