Awesome start to what looks like a high quality type of VN. Smart ADULT character, with a relatable life and personal baggage, if you will. For the most part I like how he carries himself. He handled himself pretty damn well from the William situation early on, all the way up to the Lily crisis. The crisis that is Lily's coma was a swerve I didn't see coming, nor did I want to. It's just a all around horrible situation to be in. And having to raise $10 million for treatment? Yeah, he's gonna be racing for a while. Then there's Allison, the Ex-wife.
Normally, it's quick and easy to put everything on the wife but the MC in this story was the cheater. So far, all we know is that when their marriage got tough and there wasn't any communicate he checked all the way out. I'm sure she holds some blame as well but mentally, emotionally and of course, physically their marriage was dead in the water. Again, even though it's easy for me to side with the MC, he admitted that he wasn't a good husband. But he's trying to be a better father though and I respect that. He's now has Veronica, which is one of many beautiful women in this game but clearly isn't ready for a relationship yet. Can't say I blame him.
Overall, impressive first go around. Hot sex scenes, writing was good, women were better, massive creampies, reverse cowgirl positions. I also the whole racing aspect was different but in a good way. I did have questions like could this Wyatt guy have been involved in Lily's accident? Is he involved at all with Allison? Why is his haircut so shitty, just things like that. I hope not, cause if he is.. he's gotta go. Lastly, this Doctor Katzei is a really accurate character, some of these doctors have God like complexes so it's was neat seeing that played out.
Best of luck