An amazing first release, a lot of content as well. It took me about 2.5 hours and I'm a decent reader. it's well-written, funny, has a great soundtrack, several lewd scenes already as well.
The story is that the MC is teleported into a parallel world where mostly everything is the same (home life, family, friends), but many people in the world have magical powers and it is part of normal life. The MC is figuring out these powers while coming to grips with this new reality. There is an element of mystery and it seems clear this is headed towards "awesome fantasy adventure story" territory.
Only potential downside I can think of is that there's some 4th wall breaking that I think occurs a little *too* much. It is well-done, but I wish the author would not make it as frequent as it is right now.
It's still early but this has potential to be one of the greats on the site.
The story is that the MC is teleported into a parallel world where mostly everything is the same (home life, family, friends), but many people in the world have magical powers and it is part of normal life. The MC is figuring out these powers while coming to grips with this new reality. There is an element of mystery and it seems clear this is headed towards "awesome fantasy adventure story" territory.
Only potential downside I can think of is that there's some 4th wall breaking that I think occurs a little *too* much. It is well-done, but I wish the author would not make it as frequent as it is right now.
It's still early but this has potential to be one of the greats on the site.