VN Ren'Py Abandoned Rebecca [Ver 7] [FanMixer]

[Mormont]

Well, that was an interesting start I like the idea of this game and like others have said it would be good if the dialogue was fixed it's not the worst I've seen but some corrections needed there. Also not sure what to make of the MC I guess I've never been much of a fan of the creeping around MC and then once he does his creeping around he pretty much fucks his wife still half asleep and says No a good couple of times so yeah the MC not a big selling point at this stage.

 

[Trasher2018]

Because of Patreon. They will shut this down if it has their definition of incest. The credit card companies have forced this on them.

Ok - then the patch ^^. I do like that she is the wife's niece.

Well, that was an interesting start I like the idea of this game and like others have said it would be good if the dialogue was fixed it's not the worst I've seen but some corrections needed there. Also not sure what to make of the MC I guess I've never been much of a fan of the creeping around MC and then once he does his creeping around he pretty much fucks his wife still half asleep and says No a good couple of times so yeah the MC not a big selling point at this stage.

Yeah the MC is a hard sell how he is portrayed. Especially because none of our choices change anything. It is OK to have a creepy and abusive (current) path. But I hope we can have a path were we try to keep our wife as happy as possible and corrupt that little vixen.

The foundation has potential, but needs a lot more work. At least the renders look good - so it is "only" writing and programming ;P

 

[Teflonmike]

I agree with previous posts, renders are ok but the Ingrish is awful, and the dialogue is worse. I cannot for the life of me understand why some non-English speaking Devs do not take advantage of the free proofreading services offered by some native English speakers on this site. I can only imagine that their misplaced belief in their English ability is nothing other than hubris.

If the Dev reads this I will offer my services free of charge to translate and correct his English for his next two updates at least.

In the meantime, I'm going to re-write his script as I firmly believe he has something interesting here to work on. I am not an incest fan though, despite what you might think from my previous work on scripts.. I will in all probability take it in a different direction than the authors intent, though at this stage, what the author's intent was, is entirely debatable.

If you'd like a different, and English speaking take on this little gem feel free to PM me and when I finish it I'll inbox you with the improved rpy .. What I'm not prepared to do is post any altered script publicly.. That would be wrong without the dev's consent.

 

[ArturiousDesign]

I'm actually enjoying the story, but the Engrish is a bit tough. Rebecca is very pretty but she is a bit dead-eyed and Emotionless. I hope this changes in future updates.

 

[V19XX]

Not incest, remove tag.
Admins should already add actual incest tags to follow up maybe a blood-related tag so this shitshow actually stops, i don't know if they realise for a LOT of people this is an important thing. No need to impose American worldviews in a porn web.

 

[goobdoob]

Not incest, remove tag.
Admins should already add actual incest tags to follow up maybe a blood-related tag so this shitshow actually stops, i don't know if they realise for a LOT of people this is an important thing. No need to impose American worldviews in a porn web.

It's too bad you don't understand the tag rules. And feel the need to insult Americans.

Perhaps read the definition of the incest tag here:?
https://f95zone.to/threads/tags-rules-and-list-updated-2019-03-24.10394/

 

[theinlyfaker]

Not incest, remove tag.
Admins should already add actual incest tags to follow up maybe a blood-related tag so this shitshow actually stops, i don't know if they realise for a LOT of people this is an important thing. No need to impose American worldviews in a porn web.

I feel the same way and I am an American. This is not incest. If she's the niece of my wife that makes her my niece in law that is not incest. inlaws are family by law that is what inlaw means. Incest is blood relations sex. I get so sick of having to explain this over and over Also, anything Step is not incest.

 

[Wildbill5150]

Curious about planned content/genre's? I don't want to get to invested just to get ntr'd/ cucked, later just my preference. So please if you chose to do ntr/cuck, sharing, etc. Please make it avoidable? I don't want to share Rebecca or the wife with other men! Just my personal preference

 

[Mormont]

Curious about planned content/genre's? I don't want to get to invested just to get ntr'd/ cucked, later just my preference. So please if you chose to do ntr/cuck, sharing, etc. Please make it avoidable? I don't want to share Rebecca or the wife with other men! Just my personal preference

It doesn't strike me as one of those games I've had a feeling that it will all be the MC I hope those aren't put in just for the sake of it. In terms of fetishes the game is just fine as it is.

 

[V19XX]

It's too bad you don't understand the tag rules. And feel the need to insult Americans.

Perhaps read the definition of the incest tag here:?
https://f95zone.to/threads/tags-rules-and-list-updated-2019-03-24.10394/

You maybe need to read what i wrote again, precisely what i'm saying is that they need to add an actual incest tag, but you don't get it, it seems. Also can you explain to me how i'm insulting Americans?

 

[goobdoob]

You maybe need to read what i wrote again, precisely what i'm saying is that they need to add an actual incest tag, but you don't get it, it seems. Also can you explain to me how i'm insulting Americans?

"Not incest, remove tag." It is incest, according to the tag rules. If you disagree with the tag rules, that's fine. If you think that another tag should be added, that's fine. But the place to discuss that is in the "Features Request" forum, not in an individual game thread.

"No need to impose American worldviews in a porn web." -> Americans are puritanical fuckheads. We don't want their bullshit here.
That's insulting to those of use who aren't puritanical fuckheads.

Ironic when you consider it's NOT American worldviews that are driving "step incest is incest", but the credit card companies who pull Paypal's strings, who in turn pulls Patreon's strings.

Also, thinking that there is one "American worldview" is headscratchingly insulting (thinking that we're all simple and can't think for ourselves).

 

[Deleted member 1040098]

A word to the developer from a woman who have enjoyed this game a lot and trust me each and every moment. Please never ever ever STOP dev! I LOVE THIS! The models both male and female, the story, everything is SO SO SO SENSUAL i cannot describe. The passion is blatant and not CHEESY. I am hooked. I love this game. Please continue this. This would be a masterpiece. At least to me. <3 Once again, love this, DEV!

 

[Grober]

How do I log in on day 3? The game ends after going to the clothing store in all versions

 

[Mrgt's Slave]

Nice game)

 

[Mrgt's Slave]

"I need sex" (c) Andrew

 

[DWMP]

Incest tag and only has Patreon. Only a matter of time before abandonment or complete butchering rewrite. Patches only hide for so long. Could just use SubscribeStar and not have to self censor but thatd just be crazy.

 

[Mrgt's Slave]

When will we have a new update?

 

[alyxdl]

Looks like a catfish from steam. but i'll still try it.

 

[Famescua]

Just tried it and it has potential. I'm not a fan of how much of a creep the mc is. Other than that I like the renders and the story is pretty good. Good luck with your game, I'll try it again next release hopefully the mc will be a little better written.

 

[Hysni]

Hmm looking good