Udayana

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I always wondered how do people write female dialogue lol
Coming as a guy who often has a dude and bro language, i find this impossible xD
But some devs to my surprise somehow nail it and it looks immersive
Maybe AI could help as well
It's the art of a writer. Male or female writers write dialogues spoken by men and women. Shakespeare or Virginia Woolf didn't need AI for that :ROFLMAO: But perhaps it can help.
 
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Geigi

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I always wondered how do people write female dialogue lol
Coming as a guy who often has a dude and bro language, i find this impossible xD
But some devs to my surprise somehow nail it and it looks immersive
Maybe AI could help as well
There's no secret. Writers write men and women how they want them to behave, react, do or say in different situations. Some people can recognise the gender of the writer by the writing, and they always amaze me.
 
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colombianhoes

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I used to joke at one instance where i really was surprised how well the autor wrote female characters and dialogue to the point i thought am i really liking this stuff made by some male dude, am i gay or what lol
 
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Ishtvan

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Well, to be honest, Valerie is too loving for a dark-themed VN. Maybe some jealousy from her in monogamous route (if MC is paying for a prostitute, or sleeping with other girls) would be a good option. Or her rival could try to seduce MC, and she will be very jealous...
-Ah, Valerie, sorry, but you rival is better kisser
-....
-I'm really sorry for kissing her... Wait, aren't these our BDSM toys? And where did you get that leather suit and whip?
-Horny human needs more training.
I got carried away again, but I think more conversation and attention from our succubus would made the game better. I like dark themed games, and it would be a good option, where MC slowly turning into the dark warlock, while Valerie is trying to save her human.
 

colombianhoes

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I did actually like the dark themes this game has, the God of death looks creepy, this vampire or demon guy is also kinda dark or scary. Its slightly goofy too, but hey, its porn game after all. Succubus is also kinda goofy, so i can see your point, not very serious game but it also has some deep moments.

Playing on Val's jealousy, huh? What if tables were turned, rules for thee but not for me lol
 
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