VN Ren'Py Completed Rebirth [Ep.1-5 All in One] [LikesBlondes]

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Incognito919

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Story no longer makes any sense has had like zero progresson as to why MC is the way he is. That plot has seemingly been forgotten lol. Especially this chapter. Lots of milking and filler. No real progression for MC who is suppose to be this special powerful vampire but is slowly turned into a coward. None of his abilities has been touched on or expanded after draining baldy. Calisto gets one shot when shes supposed to be an all powerful ancient vampire. Can tell its being totally rushed to an ending. Each update gets shorter and shorter makes little to no sense to overarching narrative started at the begining. Sad to see such a good story go to shit like this.
 
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Doug2009189

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Strange seeing the game lose
Incognito919 said:
Story no longer makes any sense has had like zero progresson as to why MC is the way he is. That plot has seemingly been forgotten lol. Especially this chapter. Lots of milking and filler. No real progression for MC who is suppose to be this special powerful vampire but is slowly turned into a coward. None of his abilities has been touched on or expanded after draining baldy. Calisto gets one shot when shes supposed to be an all powerful ancient vampire. Can tell its being totally rushed to an ending. Each update gets shorter and shorter makes little to no sense to overarching narrative started at the begining. Sad to see such a good story go to shit like this.
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Dude the story isn't finished yet.
 
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Incognito919

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Doug2009189 said:
Strange seeing the game lose

Dude the story isn't finished yet.
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Dude it not being finshed doesn't change the fact its going to shit from a narrative perspective from where it began leaving many plot holes and unanswered questions; nor does it refute anything I said. You can defend this if you want thats your choice. This story has been going on for 5 chapters so far. This chapter has had 10 short to super short updates so far with 3 more short updates to end the chapter or the story completely we don't know cause the statement wasn't clear if the author meant till the end of chapter or story itself in his update message. Its leaving readers confused. There has been no real substance to the actual story in terms of story telling and character development engaging the reader like in previous chapters. It seems to me the author is doing the bare min to keep the payments coming in on patron and thats it. When the game first released it was high quality from a narrative perspective and left readers wanting more. This is a narravtive focus game so the story beats matter.
 
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Incognito919 said:
Story no longer makes any sense has had like zero progresson as to why MC is the way he is. That plot has seemingly been forgotten lol. Especially this chapter. Lots of milking and filler. No real progression for MC who is suppose to be this special powerful vampire but is slowly turned into a coward. None of his abilities has been touched on or expanded after draining baldy. Calisto gets one shot when shes supposed to be an all powerful ancient vampire. Can tell its being totally rushed to an ending. Each update gets shorter and shorter makes little to no sense to overarching narrative started at the begining. Sad to see such a good story go to shit like this.
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Unfortunately to get the most out of the story you have to be aware of the thread and the discussions here.

MC is a powerful vamp, Calisto is an ancient vamp and the two in the cave are literal vamp goddesses. MC does not belong on the same planet as the two.

But yes, it should have been explained better and the way this is being rushed is certainly disappointing.
 
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I agree it doesn't make senses. The Mc cant use his powers ; Can't even help you his mother, Where are his mothers powers? MC .. Truly a coward .
How is the story going to turn and MC suddenly to became a hero?.
 
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