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well last bigger update was dinner with marcus and mc and laurie visited on that fat guy when his skin was getting washed.Well, that was ... short.
well last bigger update was dinner with marcus and mc and laurie visited on that fat guy when his skin was getting washed.Well, that was ... short.
Intense is "noice" BUT sometimes I wish I could understand what the hell just happened.Short (really short) but intense update!
Dude the story isn't finished yet.Story no longer makes any sense has had like zero progresson as to why MC is the way he is. That plot has seemingly been forgotten lol. Especially this chapter. Lots of milking and filler. No real progression for MC who is suppose to be this special powerful vampire but is slowly turned into a coward. None of his abilities has been touched on or expanded after draining baldy. Calisto gets one shot when shes supposed to be an all powerful ancient vampire. Can tell its being totally rushed to an ending. Each update gets shorter and shorter makes little to no sense to overarching narrative started at the begining. Sad to see such a good story go to shit like this.
Dude it not being finshed doesn't change the fact its going to shit from a narrative perspective from where it began leaving many plot holes and unanswered questions; nor does it refute anything I said. You can defend this if you want thats your choice. This story has been going on for 5 chapters so far. This chapter has had 10 short to super short updates so far with 3 more short updates to end the chapter or the story completely we don't know cause the statement wasn't clear if the author meant till the end of chapter or story itself in his update message. Its leaving readers confused. There has been no real substance to the actual story in terms of story telling and character development engaging the reader like in previous chapters. It seems to me the author is doing the bare min to keep the payments coming in on patron and thats it. When the game first released it was high quality from a narrative perspective and left readers wanting more. This is a narravtive focus game so the story beats matter.Strange seeing the game lose
Dude the story isn't finished yet.
Unfortunately to get the most out of the story you have to be aware of the thread and the discussions here.Story no longer makes any sense has had like zero progresson as to why MC is the way he is. That plot has seemingly been forgotten lol. Especially this chapter. Lots of milking and filler. No real progression for MC who is suppose to be this special powerful vampire but is slowly turned into a coward. None of his abilities has been touched on or expanded after draining baldy. Calisto gets one shot when shes supposed to be an all powerful ancient vampire. Can tell its being totally rushed to an ending. Each update gets shorter and shorter makes little to no sense to overarching narrative started at the begining. Sad to see such a good story go to shit like this.
It's finished in 3 updates. That's not a lot of time to fix much of anything given how short they are getting.Dude the story isn't finished yet.
Probably the current arc will resolve in 3 updates. Hopefully the series will continue.It's finished in 3 updates. That's not a lot of time to fix much of anything given how short they are getting.
Updated my Android port to Ep5 Update 10My compressed unofficial Android ports of Rebirth with Zoey Raven walkthrough.:
EP1
Mega
EP2
Mega
EP3
Mega
EP4
Mega
EP5 update 10
Mega
Usual gestures, save name/delete, seethru textbox, resizeable game and dialogue text.
Scrollable textbox - no more text off the bottom of your screen
Alternative persistent saves/log location
Grant storage permissions on first run!
Now all end of episode saves will be imported by the next episode.