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At least we know how it's going to end, just in case it gets abandoned...Daughter: "Oh dear father... We are finally reunited!"
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Daughter: "Daddy, can I suck your DICK?"
MC: "That's all you had to say, darling!"
THX for sharing...
Looks good, but the narrative text constantly switching between past and present tense, sometimes even between second, first and and third person, is rather disruptive, at least to me.
I'd suggest keeping all narrative text in present tense, second person.
No, actually, Bob will be one of the best characters in this novel. I want him to be a character that everyone will love. No NTR/Sharing. As i said, will be another game with that Tags. Not this game.Good update, though I do not see anything "important" that's in this update unless I put on my "reaching conspiracy hat"...
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a.k.a. the character with the most screentimeNo, actually, Bob will be one of the best characters in this novel.
It's like a simple spelling mistake.Curious why it says version 0.2 but when extracted it is version 0.1?