- Thread starter Zivairs
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incest?..huh?...did i just boink my sister? :O thought she was a cop or something..not related..must have missed something..will have to replay and remove my tongue from her heart-hoohaa.
ok..rechecked..nope..heart-hoohaa is not related..not even same species..lol..so boinking shall proceed..and Zoe in the dream is not related and not same species..so..no incest seen...games safe my fellow boring folks!!
ok..rechecked..nope..heart-hoohaa is not related..not even same species..lol..so boinking shall proceed..and Zoe in the dream is not related and not same species..so..no incest seen...games safe my fellow boring folks!!
- Jan 29, 2018
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No man the game has magic and sorcery in it. A glamour is like an illusion spell.
- May 10, 2018
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having played through..reading carefully..and done so twice choosing the different options in each playthrough of the very few choices..i do not see how the heck you can assume NTR from the "black guy" as he is devoted to the MC for all the help the MC has given him and now his sister..it would probably kill him internally if he did that..so we should immediately quash that comment above based on looking at the preview images..play the game before you toss out that statement..because thats derp as heck.
- May 21, 2018
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yeah, good game, it has potential. Reminded me of Wolf Among Us with all that talk about glam and whatnot. The dev really needs a proofreader tho
- Jan 9, 2018
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*picks it back out of the trash*
Hey, this one actually isn't bad at all.
After seeing what a prick the father seems to be the MC doesn't look bad at all.
Good work dev, but seriously, even the most basic spellchecker like word or docs would be a huge improvement.
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haha dude i think i've seen you in so many threads with this exact same post "Thx.."
it's nice you feel grateful and i respect that, hope i'll see you in more game threads
Interesting premise and decent renders. The English isn't perfect but it's not a chore to understand either. The game does start out fairly confusingly though, it could do with a small in-game intro to explain a little bit about the setting - nothing fancy, just a screen or two of world-building before the game starts proper.
Definitely one to watch.
Definitely one to watch.
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Zero patrons, like most new releases lately. Devs claiming to be hobbyists and creating 'free' games are usually just being dishonest. However, this one seems to have spent way more time on the demo than his patreon profile. Deserves some credit.
- Nov 16, 2018
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yeah... sometimes the patreon page of games is more complex than game itself.
Yes, English is not my native language, and the program I was using for spell-checking was out of date and not working properly. I apologize, and promise to do better on the next release.
You probably figured it out already but the MC is the guy kissing the girl.
You probably figured it out already but the MC is the guy kissing the girl.
I did actual have a small time period{three days or so} where you'd play as the MC among his family. Here I was going to explain the world, the works of magic or at least how they use them and the problem that caused hostilely between the MC and his Father. But a few things were stopping me. One: this time period would have less than the amount of choices the current build does, so none. Two: Zoe the girl from the dream, is older than the MC by a few months, and the MC's eighteenth birthday was in that time period. As you could have guessed from the dream they were romantically involved, and I didn't want to start or deal with any age related problems so I cut it. And decided to show the family problems via dreams and flashbacks, but I'll come up with a way to explain more of the world that fits into the story.
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My short review, already posted as such a few days ago.
This game is off to a good start.
The story is interesting, not something that I've seen done this way before.
The renders are alright, not exceptionally great, but solid middle-class
I enjoyed the writing, the only problem I had with it were the many, many wrong words and spelling errors.
It was weird since it read as if someone ran a spellcheck and never looked through it afterwards, in regards to words being replaced with similar ones, but otoh, then there wouldn't be that many simple spelling errors.
To sum it up. The strong point is the story which seems to have a lot of potential, the renders are perfectly serviceable, the writing, apart from mistakes is alright.
There's a sex-scene that makes sense in terms of story-telling, which is really not something all that many games manage in their first version.
A really good effort for a first version in general.
This game is off to a good start.
The story is interesting, not something that I've seen done this way before.
The renders are alright, not exceptionally great, but solid middle-class
I enjoyed the writing, the only problem I had with it were the many, many wrong words and spelling errors.
It was weird since it read as if someone ran a spellcheck and never looked through it afterwards, in regards to words being replaced with similar ones, but otoh, then there wouldn't be that many simple spelling errors.
To sum it up. The strong point is the story which seems to have a lot of potential, the renders are perfectly serviceable, the writing, apart from mistakes is alright.
There's a sex-scene that makes sense in terms of story-telling, which is really not something all that many games manage in their first version.
A really good effort for a first version in general.