Reason? From Stan? Dude flips at the smallest *perceived* slight. The fact that he is going to such extremes over something so small feels vital to his character (or lack thereof). Unless I am missing your point...
Yeah Stan isn't exactly a nice guy or particularly stable. I don't think he needs much motivation.
Were you able to get the Emma & Kate scene if so how did you get it. it didn't proc for me.
Personally I like to have a, at least somewhat, comprehensible Story in my AVNs, but that would be a whole different Discussion now. And yeah, no one is reading RHC for the Plot, or the dialogues, but still...Without changing seems obvious future plot development that gonna lead Linda's daughter to willingly participate in corrupting her mom, which serves to eroge goals, how else you would justify that Rebecca is not just OK with what happens to Linda, but even helps some evil man to drown her in the abyss of depravity?
It's not easy task I would say.
Seems also planned, protagonist's "revenge" to Alex, Emma's son, also suffers from lack of solid reason. But since we are not for sparkling and breathtaking stories here, I guess it's ok. We have enough lost literature critics in reviews section, we better not be as smelly as them.
I am not the biggest fan of the cum diet, so I really hope it doesn't become such a big focus. I know its not going anywhere but I rather it focus on the actual relationship than just the cum diet, which feels like all it will be now. And if i just skip that content, then I will pretty much have no content with her, just a shame.
But you can't measure characters evolution in number of scenes, screentime or any other appearances. It's not works like this in works of fiction. Authors usualy shows some milestones, kind of checkpoints where changes was significant, while the viewers have to imagine the rest by themselves.
I agree. It's the eternal problem with open-ended porn games - escalation. MC has basically achieved his goals with almost all the girls at this point, with them being broken/submissive/accepting/whatever you want to call it. You can try to make new escalations interesting still, but it's way harder now.
The girls are all still largely unaware of each others involvement with the MC and their families are still unaware for the most part and they all still have a public image and jobs they are maintaining. Plus Adrianna is the only one who has started to actively corrupt herself in anticipation of what would please the MC which could go further and others could adopt that behavior. So with those 4 things plus new sex acts I think there are quite a few possible avenues for escalation.
This is probably one of the best descriptions of how to don't write fiction. It would be stupid to assume the Audience themself will just fill in all the blanks the author leaves, regardless of how big they are.
I honestly think there are enough boundaries to push/break if one want.
Yea, I agree there's plenty more things that can be introduced. This issue is the narrative tension of new developments, not the developments/acts themselves. Most of the tension - the feeling of not knowing what's going to happen or how the characters will react - is gone when the girls are all "anything you want, master! I love being your slave/slutty mother/anal whore"
I get what you mean, and I think with Adrianna this is 100% true. She's burned for a while now and there is not really anything really new happening with her. Though I'd have to admit I personally always thought of Adrianna as the weakest Character in terms of her writing, I know a lot of people Love her but for me she always was on the boring side.
Bruh, the terms "main character" and "side character" exists for the reason. Length of works can't be infinite. In movies you rarely see some side character's background being described with more than one little speech line, the rest relies on being assumed based on character's looks and acts. And that is not even bad, because not the number of details matters, but how precise and well made they are. Conciseness is a virtue.
Isn't it's just mutual exclusion? I feel realy sorry for Kalyha, to always being between two opposite vectors of criticism. Some people acussing him in being milker who intentionally slows progression of his story, others says story feels rushed. Some claims that plot is unworthy and should be skipped to sex scenes, others implying that potential was huge and developer should have turn it into 10 times bigger narration focused novel. And sometimes it's same speakers.
Btw, about connection, I remember, after one of the updates, where MC was quite harsh with Jenna and she appeared to be quite depressed, I felt really bad for her, she made impression of a person who can commit suicide any day and probably considering it right now. I think no need to explain that sudden strike of empathy is not what you expect(or need) when you want to fap.
But isn't it's just natural? Corrupted characters as a result of corrupting game. I don't see other options, so I don't think "fault" is accurate word. It's just how storytelling works, tension level can't be even from start to the final. We passed the culmination, it's expected that excitement get lower. I remember like 2 years ago I was warning other users here, about that they are wrong with hurrying dev to break Adrianna faster, because the process of pursuit can be better than reward. And now we are in a point of time where people complaining that girls already broken.
I really have a hard time to try to explain myself in a way that you don't take it the wrong way.
