- Nov 6, 2019
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Without changing seems obvious future plot development that gonna lead Linda's daughter to willingly participate in corrupting her mom, which serves to eroge goals, how else you would justify that Rebecca is not just OK with what happens to Linda, but even helps some evil man to drown her in the abyss of depravity?Or with Linda the more or less only Woman left to break I can't help myself but feel sorry for her as the whole Plot of how her Daughter is supposed to hate her guts because she is overprotective just doesn't fit well imo. I mean she's behaving as if Linda would have her imprisoned under the pretence of protecting her, while everything we saw so far was Linda being overprotective. It just feels out of proportions for what actual has happened, at least as far as we know.
It's not easy task I would say.
Seems also planned, protagonist's "revenge" to Alex, Emma's son, also suffers from lack of solid reason. But since we are not for sparkling and breathtaking stories here, I guess it's ok. We have enough lost literature critics in reviews section, we better not be as smelly as them.