VN Ren'Py Completed Returning to Mia [v1.2.0] [Inceton]

[JNolan92]

Am I the only one that got more happy to see Ellie than Emma?

I was pleasantly surprised to see Ellie, though its not the same without Miss Moonified providing her voice for the part.
But I was also glad to see Emma. Even though I accidentally spoiled myself on her appearance before I got to play Ep. 5... so it wasn't a shocker to see her. But I did not expect her return to result in the cliffhanger ending of Ep 5.

 

[cxx]

I really kind of hope there's going to be a Summer With Mia 3 in the future

highly unlikely.

I guess this take place where there aren't smartphones? in this VN the phones "appear" to be smartphones 'cause i'd record this for future use against sebastian

he has smartphone as you can see later when she goes to meet seb's daughter.

 

[trauts]

he has smartphone as you can see later when she goes to meet seb's daughter.

if they are smartphones, then i'm just curious as why the writers didn't think of MC recording what sebastian is doing as "evidence"

 

[Deleted member 4041066]

he has smartphone as you can see later when she goes to meet seb's daughter.

That was sarcasm, as pointing out the mc was written to be complete pepega idiot for not recording evidence with that very same smartphone.

 

[cxx]

That was sarcasm, as pointing out the mc was written to be complete pepega idiot for not recording evidence with that very same smartphone.

well he has to be.

if they are smartphones, then i'm just curious as why the writers didn't think of MC recording what sebastian is doing as "evidence"

various reasons and primary that mc is idiot.

 

[Deleted member 4041066]

well he has to be.

But why tho? Why couldn't he have at least that much of brain cells that he would do what everyone else would do, as in record what Sebastian is doing, would show that to Isla at dinner and then would get some good revenge Gluck Gluck from her?

Oh yeah that's right, because they would run out of episodes if they did that. Completely forgot that.

 

[cxx]

Oh yeah that's right, because they would run out of episodes if they did that. Completely forgot that.

well wouldn't run out of episodes but then episodes would be more boresome.

 

[Deleted member 4041066]

More boresome? Not really. The episode 5 now was pretty boring, but with a little twist like that it would've gotten more spicier and made it more interesting for the future. Now it just made you really not care about Isla or the whole Sebastian lore anymore.

It's also kinda pepega how you are able to punch the bastard at the bar when you get caught with his daughter, but in E5 you are just forced to be a total cuck who is afraid of him.

 

[cxx]

bit different to punch him in private than out in public.

 

[Deleted member 4041066]

Well, isn't punching the guy at the bar (public place) more risky than punching him at the door of your own apartment, where there isn't even any neighbors around and some decently high fence covering the whole area? Not to mention that the guy came to your place uninvited aggressively to argue with you, which would be domestic peace disturbance and punching him could be counted as self-defense in front of the law. Or wasn't punching that random baldie creep at the beach boulevard risky, where surely there was other people too? Punching a guy out in public wasn't any problem before, so why should it be now?

Also you don't have to necessarily punch him the second time, but you could be more aggressive than just the passive cuck who shat his pants like we had right now. Again, lots of inconsistency in the writing.

 

[cxx]

writing is normal for this game.

 

[Deleted member 4041066]

It's inconsistent and not very good at the moment. It's constructive feedback for the writer, who is known to read this forum. Maybe he can change something up or see through the feedback some inconsistencies and retardness that it currently has and avoid that in the future. It's completely ok if you like it and think it's good, but do understand that not everyone likes or thinks it's good enough for the team as big as Inceton.

 

[cxx]

not saying it's good but i'm not expecting it to be either.

 

[Deleted member 4041066]

Not expecting it to be? You really are a weird man if you don't expect that this story based AVN's writing should be better than what it currently is.

 

[cxx]

Not expecting it to be? You really are a weird man if you don't expect that this story based AVN's writing should be better than what it currently is.

keep expectations low and you won't get disappointed, writing is better than on some games i play but worse than on those where dev really puts thought to plot.

 

[Deleted member 4041066]

keep expectations low and you won't get disappointed, writing is better than on some games i play but worse than on those where dev really puts thought to plot.

But how can you really keep your expectations low and accept this kind of writing in a game that doesn't even have any other main factor than the story itself? The sex and porn in this one is clearly side thing, and the story is the main thing. That's the point here. In the first one it wasn't a problem, as the sex and porn was the main thing and the story was a side content. Now regardless of what the developers have said, this falls to the exact same category with the first one, even though this doesn't even have the half amount of sexual content that the first one had this far in the game.

 

[JNolan92]

highly unlikely.

Aw damn

 

[cxx]

But how can you really keep your expectations low and accept this kind of writing in a game that doesn't even have any other main factor than the story itself?

easily, i don't expect anything more than some timewaste.

 

[Chabs28]

Is there no way to continue straight to episode 5 do i have to download episode 5 and start over again from the start?

 

[Chabs28]

Ànyone has save of episode 4 end

Do we have to start over again? Geez this is so embarassing