Actually I was talking about Rachel. She's a hot redhead but I don't want to break up a cute lesbian couple (which is what she and Amy look to be right now).
And redheads are too under represented in games, always can use 2-3 in each game. Just consider it the "Mr Friendly requested allotment"
My only suggestion is just to take your story slow, no need to have everything happen at once. I think I said awhile back that Sandra's revelation came too quickly for my taste, other than that the Stat page needed names under the pictures, the entries don't really need nickname origins, I would like to know what type of relationship the MC has with Mary and Khloe (closed or open polyamorous?), it would be helpful to know the MC's job, and I wasn't thrilled by Lisa's bob. Otherwise the renders are spot on, plenty of mystery to explore, and I'm very excited to see where the story goes next.
If I ever come off as pushy or anything less than friendly then let me know, that isn't my intention. However I know I can get overexcited about things I like.