I think this has a lot of potentials.
The models are good.
The premise of the story is interesting.
The thought of how to execute this seems daunting to me and I have to wish the developer a lot of luck.
The choices you have to make show clearly the impact they will have, and I appreciate that.
Personally, I did not like how the characters were presented to me. It was in someway chaotic. I also feel that if you are playing in the role of the MC then the other characters should be presented through the MC, not through an all-knowing third-person view. That though is my opinion, I'm sure others would disagree.