Charlie99993

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I really like the writing and the art that's here so far, but this has got to be the some of the most basic sauceless RPG Maker stock standard combat in anything I've ever played with a teleporter maze in the first area to boot. Jeez
 
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Umarius

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Game break bug have stop my play but already find some stuff i think could be improved ( i am big fan of this type of game so not story relate critic for now )
1 the game crach when i obtain the power
2 the fight are bored and
3 too many fight and by fight i mean click enter and drink potion
4 would be intersted to add interst point in game so many i wish i could click but no nothink to interect with
5 guide a litle more the exploration could be a good idea in both
a) the find of the book only one help when discut with the "hero"
b) no help for after the tp just go random until i find the general and have bug break after
I haven't been able to replicate the crash you mentioned, so I can't comment on that. As for the combat, the fixed version posted earlier today should make the combat progress much faster, and be less of an annoyance to people who want to focus on the story/corruption.

they from where ? the first look like the precorruption of the second ( even if unlikely since you use 2 name ) but don't know from where they are
Misaki isn't really based off of anyone. I just made her from my own preferences.

I really like the writing and the art that's here so far, but this has got to be the some of the most basic sauceless RPG Maker stock standard combat in anything I've ever played with a teleporter maze in the first area to boot. Jeez
As mentioned in the overview, combat isn't the focus of the game, and with the earlier update released, it should be less annoying for people. Although I do want to improve the combat as I get better at making the game, and learn what people want from it.
 

Azope

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ok i redo the scene and could go after
juste one think some people don't like have the corruption form of a character spoil but other love that becauce it creat anticipation me i am neutral but i am not sure that do it in the title screen is the best way
 

jaredh72

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Patreon does not tolerate incest but games like raptus have been around for a while, wife and mother, Restore Her Career and others, I don't understand

maybe the main implication of patreon is the characters with childlike appearance.. maybe
That's probably part of it. I'm sure another part is someone reporting them either to be a white knight or out of spite. Or if it gains enough popularity that it can't stay under the radar anymore.
 
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Umarius

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Will there be a replay function added in later updates?
If you are talking about the sex scenes, then yes. I'm not sure when exactly, but by the end of development there will be a gallery room with all scenes.
 

Uhhgeoduck

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Love the premise, but I do have to admit I'll be waiting for the balance patch to come out. Even the first bit of combat just feels like a slog currently. Keep up the good work though!
 

Umarius

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Love the premise, but I do have to admit I'll be waiting for the balance patch to come out. Even the first bit of combat just feels like a slog currently. Keep up the good work though!
Balance fix was released earlier today. Combat and leveling is much faster, and combat sections shouldn't take any longer than 5-10 minutes depending on how much you're rushing through them. Read the changelog for more info.
 

Azope

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I have finish the content.
I like this premise , the art is good it have some good idea but for now it clearly a barebone game you probaly need to do in deep update instead of continuation update and by that i mean rework your curent content for have a good first section beford expand the story.
The game could become good or bad only time will tell i will likely wait 1 year or 6 month ( depenting of the regumarity of your update ) beford retesting the game because for now i think it need a least 10 update to have the base need to be worth play if you don't have a corruption fetichism good luck and have fun
 

Illuminati00

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The game is really interesting, more magical corruption is always welcome. I really like the patrol scene, it really does improve the experience when you see the corruption affecting her actions outside of your "meetings", more games should do that. As everyone else have already said, the game is very barebones, but I really see something great coming from it.
 
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exiqwert

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What can i say about the game


Good points
the story is nice
the pictures are also good

points to improve
-npcs at start are supperior (without save edit and make me 5x so strong not do able)
-to much run a to b
-idk why you need to clear 3x more stages in realm to see stronger enemys maybe for future?
-as i said story was good but also you could make it like pres strg for fast text^^

wish you gl with more updates and maybe it will be a great work
 

Umarius

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Mac and Linux test builds are publicly available on my Patreon.
Link:
If these work, I will include more download links in this thread's OP for these systems in the future.
 

CuriousWonder

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So, my only complaint is that the corruption was to quick. Although this could be personal preference but the corruption do able in 15min. That's of you blizt through the combat sections and ignored leveling. I would have preferred a limited number of interactions that you can do in a day before having to go off and rest or go grind some levels.

Also, might want to consider decreasing the potion drop rate because there's almost no reason to collect potions from the basement because the monsters drop so much.



All in all pretty good so far considering even my biggest complaint is minor if I'm being honest.
 

Umarius

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So, my only complaint is that the corruption was to quick. Although this could be personal preference but the corruption do able in 15min. That's of you blizt through the combat sections and ignored leveling. I would have preferred a limited number of interactions that you can do in a day before having to go off and rest or go grind some levels.

Also, might want to consider decreasing the potion drop rate because there's almost no reason to collect potions from the basement because the monsters drop so much.



All in all pretty good so far considering even my biggest complaint is minor if I'm being honest.
I'll probably make future corruptions to not be so quick, especially since starting in future updates there will be more resistance from characters. Don't know about limited interactions though. I'll have to see how well that fits with what I already have planned. Potion drop rates will be lowered a little in the next update.
 
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jazz154

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I'll probably make future corruptions to not be so quick, especially since starting in future updates there will be more resistance from characters. Don't know about limited interactions though. I'll have to see how well that fits with what I already have planned. Potion drop rates will be lowered a little in the next update.
Is it intended that you can go to the next level of corruption without trying any scenes that current one unlocked? As in I am pretty sure I could go to second level without using strip and patrol even once.
 

Umarius

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Is it intended that you can go to the next level of corruption without trying any scenes that current one unlocked? As in I am pretty sure I could go to second level without using strip and patrol even once.
Yes, that is intentional. The assumption while making it, was that people who wanted to see the corruption/porn scenes, wouldn't need to be told to view them. There will be requirements to advance the corruption for characters in the future tied in to quests and other events. The repeatable scenes for each level themselves won't have any real requirement to them for the reason mentioned.
 

.Inori

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Game has good potentials, cheers for the dev. Personally, I like the corrupting progress, but the trials can be improved to avoid fighting with a same mechanic (basically just get the healing potion and you are superior already).

Looking forward to new releases.
 

Curium255

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So, my only complaint is that the corruption was to quick. Although this could be personal preference but the corruption do able in 15min. That's of you blizt through the combat sections and ignored leveling. I would have preferred a limited number of interactions that you can do in a day before having to go off and rest or go grind some levels.

Also, might want to consider decreasing the potion drop rate because there's almost no reason to collect potions from the basement because the monsters drop so much.



All in all pretty good so far considering even my biggest complaint is minor if I'm being honest.
Adding grinding just to artificially slow things down sounds terrible, well adding grinding for almost any reason sounds terrible.

Potions were originally too rare leading to easily being in situations where you had none and could get none. Combat is said to not be a focus of the game so the current rate was an experiment to fix the lack of potions, though obviously further tweaks are in order.
 

DeviledEx

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I really like what it could bring to the table

Some thing I would change is how the trials are set up, despite a "linear" path - it feels grindy to play since most monsters are unavoidable. It could be remedied by instead of pathfinding just put the guy into a back-to-back enemy fight, basically a survival battle, since literally the intro tells the MC that they are giving him the trial to attune and strengthen them while giving them a challenge

Looking forward to it, will also be willing to work because I want to work on any RPGM Project regardless of the nature of the game
 
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