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We haven't seen Judit since Chapter 8, and then only briefly. I had originally planned a larger role for her in Chapter 10, but as it grew so large, I had to cut it back. But Judit's scene is important, because Rick has to meet her anyway. But this posed a problem: Rick can only go over to Judit's in Chapter 10 if he doesn't go on a trip with Cora and go hiking. However, because of these two storylines, there should definitely have been another Judit scene in a later chapter, where the meeting takes place.
So, I deleted it from Chapter 10 and moved the meeting to Chapter 12, so I don't have to edit the story so that there are two versions of the same meeting. (It could not be in Chapter 11 because it is already fully developed, and there is no place for Judit there.) However, Miri and Ash's mother does appear for another brief scene in Chapter 10 to set the stage for what is to come in Chapter 12.