VN Ren'Py Rise or Fall [v0.0.2] [Kzero91]

[Kzero91]

Here is the list of typos I found:

Damn so many but thanks for that, everything will be corrected!

I had the same expression on my face in the previous version when Alex's secret was revealed :

Finally, is the hair in Daz3D like a wig?
I don't know how it works, but it doesn't appear to be subject to the laws of gravity :

Yes I know I know, that fucked me up hard too, but the hair unfortunately has no simulation settings (I tried to set them myself but only wasted 3 hours with it...) or suitable shapes for upside down so I couldn't do anything to it except maybe take other poses... Well, look like the characters all use extremely strong hair lacquer.

 

[Birdnman993]

Is there a point in time where Jessy will be tempted to try drugs on her own, or is that ruled out throughout the story?

 

[Gaslight77]

And you keep writing what you like, never said you should stop, my nitpicking/feedback is the character inconsistency, the delivery of her opening up to heterosexuality its completely lost if the first thought crossing her mind is sucking off her long-time friend, which we've just being introduced to, in the open, that's not a mindset of someone who's into woman, it is a hussy ... and I want make this very clear, I don't mind she being straight, nor I'm asking for a lesbian route or 4783 romanceable female LIs, you do what you want, but no lesbian open up to the heterosexuality possibility out of nowhere, she's not a lesbian, and at this point in the game, she's bi-curious because, as far as player's intervention goes, she just fantasize about woman.

The Mia character was a typo (I have no idea if the game has a Mia to be honest), I mean the girl she did the yoga, I don't know her name at the top of my head, Melanie I wanna say? Sorry, I'm really not too fond of the game to be digging that up now.

Good luck with your game, I wish I could say I look forward to the next update, but that would be a lie, the writing it's actually good, and I like the dialogue, but the character inconsistency really gets me, and I'm a sucker for that.

I really see that you have failed to understand that the game lets you choose the path, whether to be bi or lesbian. Kzero never said that Jessy was exclusively A or B at any point in the game, if you understood that the problem lies exclusively with you.

(And you clearly don't know how the process of sexual discovery works in young people, your determinism is quite unrealistic to say the least. Don't measure other people by your own yard-stick, in that regard.)

 

[Kzero91]

Is there a point in time where Jessy will be tempted to try drugs on her own, or is that ruled out throughout the story?

No, it is not ruled out by the story, she will be tempted, but it is up to you to decide whether she takes something or not.

 

[Lynava]

No, it is not ruled out by the story, she will be tempted, but it is up to you to decide whether she takes something or not.

I understand the weekly payment will go up due to drug costs.

 

[Santiana]

OMG...a game with a female MC that is not a complete moron NPC and have actual choices in game......the rabbit approves this game !

 

[R1k0]

OMG...a game with a female MC that is not a complete moron NPC and have actual choices in game......the rabbit approves this game !

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[damnedfrog]

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Jessy is rather short, but she is a real badass and she's not afraid to kick the shit out of guys a head taller than her.

 

[Ati Moren]

Quick question. The game seems to imply (or outright say, I can't remember) that Miriam has a family (Steve and Jake), but during the yoga scene Jessy mentions a girlfriend, is that just a female friend or did I miss something? And if not yet, will it be explained or did I get hung up on something unimportant?

Also, will content with Nina be only sub for Jessy or will we be able to turn the table on her like with the other dom lady?

 

[Kzero91]

First of all, sorry for the late reply, unfortunately I didn't get a notification.

The game seems to imply (or outright say, I can't remember) that Miriam has a family (Steve and Jake)

Yes Steve is her husband and Jake is her son...

but during the yoga scene Jessy mentions a girlfriend, is that just a female friend or did I miss something? And if not yet, will it be explained or did I get hung up on something unimportant?

yes the girlfriend thing is such a mistake uhm what I meant was “female friend”, in my language girlfriend is just ambiguous, don't know exactly how it is in english, anyway Miriam is not with a woman! And yes, that will be explained in the side story, which is not yet available.

Also, will content with Nina be only sub for Jessy or will we be able to turn the table on her like with the other dom lady?

Well, not quite turning the tables, but I say either there are 2 doms and a sub, or 1 dom and 2 subs.

 

[Kagarus]

Ah yes, Freundin ≠ Freundin

 

[omen777]

Well I like the game. There is still too few game where the MC is a dominant female. At first when I saw the scene at school I was disapointed : "f... unavoidable sub scene!" but I got rassured seeing it was a dream, got reassured as well seeing the bitchy client of Steve and she got to make her submit. However I thought it was a little too easy how she was broken, a dominant brat like her should have tried to call a bluff from Jessie. And I was thinking she could have called Viktor or her "uncle" to make her afraid. It would have been more logical in my view.
I hope there will be more trans in the future, and I hope she'll get dominant with every one (except maybe the "uncle").
Also the last update was a while ago, do you know when the next one is planned?

PS je devine à ton pseudo que tu es français. Bonne chance pour ton jeu.

 

[Kzero91]

However I thought it was a little too easy how she was broken, a dominant brat like her should have tried to call a bluff from Jessie. And I was thinking she could have called Viktor or her "uncle" to make her afraid. It would have been more logical in my view.

Yeah, I could have done that, but I didn't think of it at the time, and I imagined her as a “rich bitch” who always gets everything she wants, who “panics” when someone challenges her for the first time, grabs her by the throat, and threatens her with an uncle who is a mafia boss.

I hope there will be more trans in the future

It's not out of the question.

and I hope she'll get dominant with every one (except maybe the "uncle").

Yes, I always try to give you the choice between dom or sub.

Also the last update was a while ago, do you know when the next one is planned?

Yes, a new update has been available on my Patreon and Subscribestar since a few hours, but it's only an “interim version” (V0.0.2.2), because I'm currently having problems with a scene that's too big for my graphics card, and the rendering takes forever...

PS je devine à ton pseudo que tu es français. Bonne chance pour ton jeu.

No, I'm not French, but thanks .

 

[omen777]

Yes, a new update has been available on my Patreon and Subscribestar since a few hours, but it's only an “interim version” (V0.0.2.2), because I'm currently having problems with a scene that's too big for my graphics card, and the rendering takes forever...

Ok thanks I hope it will be out soon

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[Ati Moren]

Thanks for the explanation! An other question would be about Alex, how much variation will be in her scenes, think top/bottom dom/sub or non at all?

yes the girlfriend thing is such a mistake uhm what I meant was “female friend”, in my language girlfriend is just ambiguous, don't know exactly how it is in english, anyway Miriam is not with a woman! And yes, that will be explained in the side story, which is not yet available.

It's like that in my own language (hungarian), but in english, at least recently it's used more in the sense of female partner. Having to specify "female friend" feels kinda awkward, but it gets confusing otherwise so I asked instead.

Well, not quite turning the tables, but I say either there are 2 doms and a sub, or 1 dom and 2 subs.

I don't get this part, does this refer to Jessy/Nina/Beatrice trio, that you can only dom one or the other, or Jessy, Nina and her girl meaning you can dom the girl together with Nina, but not Nina herself?

 

[Alley_Cat]

First of all, sorry for the late reply, unfortunately I didn't get a notification.


Yes Steve is her husband and Jake is her son...


yes the girlfriend thing is such a mistake uhm what I meant was “female friend”, in my language girlfriend is just ambiguous, don't know exactly how it is in english, anyway Miriam is not with a woman! And yes, that will be explained in the side story, which is not yet available.


Well, not quite turning the tables, but I say either there are 2 doms and a sub, or 1 dom and 2 subs.

It's ambiguous in English too. Straight women will talk about going out with their girlfriends

 

[Kagarus]

It's ambiguous in English too. Straight women will talk about going out with their girlfriends

Yeah, although often in that usecase it's in the plural (in which case it can be ambigous if they're poly) or using an indefinite article as opposed to the possessive, while when talking non-abstractly about your SO you'd tend to use a possessive. Ambigous, but context clues can heavily imply.

(Thinking about it, in german there I think there's a similar pattern that you'd tend to introduce (when telling a story or similar) a non-SO friend as "eine(e) Freund(in)" or "mein(e) Freund(in) <Name>", as opposed to "mein(e) Freundin". But later on in that context you'd use "mein(e) Freund(in)" in either case, you might miss the introduction/context establishing and it's not a hard-and-fast rule anyway.)

 

[Kzero91]

An other question would be about Alex, how much variation will be in her scenes, think top/bottom dom/sub or non at all?

Yes, there will be a dom or sub path for Alex as well as for all characters, I will try to give you always the choice.
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I don't get this part, does this refer to Jessy/Nina/Beatrice trio, that you can only dom one or the other, or Jessy, Nina and her girl meaning you can dom the girl together with Nina, but not Nina herself?

For the next update at least, Jessy and Nina can dominate “Pet” or Nina will dominate Jessy and “Pet”. If you want to see something about this already, have a look at my

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What comes after that is not yet set in stone.

 

[Ati Moren]

For the next update at least, Jessy and Nina can dominate “Pet” or Nina will dominate Jessy and “Pet”. If you want to see something about this already, have a look at my

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What comes after that is not yet set in stone.

Thans for the clarification.

 

[Skavenkönig]

absolutely love the writing so far, keep it up. the models look great as well. Tossed a few bucks toward the dev on itch (hope that gets thru with itch seemingly being dragged into that weird anti porn crusade by religious nuts) the start here is amazing, one of the hottest games ive seen on here so i really hopeing to see more of this