First of all, thank you, thank you, thank you for extending this adventure. Really like what I've seen from the new chapter so far.
This is just a personal choice. A choice that probably will be downvoted by most. But...I don't think every woman should have huge tits. I like them more proportional, and even to the smaller side. But that's just me and probably not reflective of the majority playing this game.
Another personal choice, not really into either guy. But I admit, it would be kinda erotic for me for the pervert to hit on me a few times. Or try something more with me. Again, just personal preference. You continue to weave the story how you see fit.
It was easy for me to follow. And when I didn't click on the right choice, the hints help me go in the right direction. Appreciate those. Also liked the titles you gave to the characters. LOL. Great stuff. Reminds me a bit of Burn Notice. The artwork was pretty darn nice for a game such as this. And I like writing so far as well.
Really don't have any negatives to add other than what I mentioned above. Really appreciate the effort in continuing this story. Thanks again! And will definitely be in for more updates.