Stunned this game is not getting more attention and some games that are garbage tier and I mean garbage tier are getting more hype than this.
I am judging this game as a non finished product. So everything I say onwards are based on the game in current state and my understanding this is a non finished product with time to develop and adjust. As of this time, I can see the potential and vision. The story, original, characters have personality. I assume you have to go back to parts already done to flesh them out as there seems to be gaps in the story.
Note I enjoyed the game, but I have to also highlight some issues I felt as this is constructive. The writing is disjointed sometimes, it is probably not the case, but I get a feeling sometimes with some scenes they feel sometimes like different people wrote different sections. Just the flow sometimes or choice of phrasing felt a bit off.
If you went back and reworded some sections to flow better, I feel that would aid this game so so much. I know off the top of my head the girlfriend seems like two different people from the first chapter and then second chapter or so, she acts a bit different. The constant daddy naming for me came on suddenly and a tonal shift.
Even if this game never takes off, whoever the dev is and you read this. I don't think you can blame yourself. This is a good standard and very easy to understand game. I played it through without ever feeling stuck or not understanding what to do next. If people complain about that, I can only assume they were spamming through not reading to get to next fap scene.
The renders are wonderful. I feel if I was to rate this and remembering this was an unfinished game which feels to me like someone is putting heart and soul into with very little patreons is commendable. I would currently give it 4 stars or so. Obviously, if it is ever finished I would have to grade it differently at that time as a whole product. Best of luck to you.
