- Sep 24, 2017
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Hmmm.... three things. 1). I agree that the game world feels a lot smaller in Act 3 and the story events feel shorter. 2). I disagree that this is a quality issue. 3). I always find it humorous when people complain about grammar and then spell out what was wrong with the grammar.Just finished it for the first time after like three restarts halfway through. Boy howdy does the quality take a nosedive after Act 2. Power progression basically stops, enemies don't get any harder and we don't get any stronger, most of the systems from Act 1 and Act 2 get abandoned or left in stasis, the sex scenes are few and far between, and the writing goes from weak to downright atrocious.
And yeah, I get it, it's a porn game. But titles like The Last Sovereign have proved that you can have a porn game where the creator knows what a bloody comma is, what a sentence fragment is, and that gluing syllables together with apostrophes does not a compelling fantasy setting make!
Not to mention the quality control apparently also flies out the window, if the number of mangled sentences, grammatically incorrect sentences, sentences with leading or trailing characters cut off by formatting errors, and repeated sentences is anything to go by.
Bleh.
Still. It's a finished game, even if the conclusion feels rushed, and that's a rare thing in this genre. If I were giving advice to anyone, it'd be to quit after the end of Act 2 and then just pick out the epilogue slides that match your choices. There's really nothing gained from playing through Act 3.
I think the reason the world feels smaller and the events are shorter in Act 3, frankly, is that your characters are globe-trotting badasses with the resources of multiple nations to back them up. You aren't struggling just to reach Slinsk like you were in the early game. Now, instead of a lot of wandering around, you can go to the exact place you need to be to get to the meat of the events. It makes for a much shorter on-screen adventure even if the actual content is similar in size.
I'm not sure as to the quality. Honestly, didn't notice much of a problem. Too busy enjoying the game. And I'm generally blind to grammar issues that don't affect readability. Because I'm too busy reading it to care. Something I like to call "priorities." If there was an issue that actually affected my enjoyment of the game, I'd be right there with you. But since there isn't... ::shrug::
And on the subject of grammar: there's a rule of thumb you should keep in mind: If you can tell what they did wrong well enough to correct it... then it doesn't affect the clarity of the sentence enough to need correcting. Claim you want to protect the clarity of language all you like but just by listing off all the things done wrong you prove what you actually care about isn't clarity. It's just pedantry. Now, if that's your thing... go for it. Just don't pretend that you are serving some noble calling when it's really just an ego thing.
Regardless, I still jump when I see Roundscape has updated. ::shrug:: Good enough for me.
P.S. Agree with you on NTR with the additional caveat that the character must enjoy being belittled in such a way. Otherwise it's not a sexual fetish (NTR/Cuckolding)... it's just one person being a bitch/douche to another.