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And that's why she's such a good character.Would Carmen let someone take her prisoner just so she could find their boss and kill them? Yes. If we're to believe her story about the Orc Pirates then she's done exactly that before, and even had the figurative balls to tell Roman about it. Or maybe the story was completely made up, and she's trying to psych Roman into thinking that she set him up.
We've all seen shows, films and read books with plot lines so predictable you can see where it's going pretty quickly.
The thing with characters like that is you are kept guessing. It's great writing. We don't know what's true and what isn't all we know is she is powerful, she's confident in her position and she's certainly not scared. Is she telling the truth?
It doesn't matter. Putting ourselves in Roman's position knowing she has the reputation she has even if we didn't believe every single word there is still the flicker that maybe there is some truth there. She got to where she is for a reason.
Crow's a character I don't know why I like. Normally i'm not a fan of those that are in it just for the sex but she's just finding out about her Orc side and she is quite endearing. Something about how she's written makes me like her.
This is why it would be a shame if you had abandoned it. A few more updates and people see it's progressing and you've got a really good story on your hands.