ludobico
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It's awful and I can't play it with all these errors. You should solve this problem as soon as possible.
Juv3
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is it a new trend all the games with
female protagonist Ntr cuck Rape
Blackmail
female protagonist Ntr cuck Rape
Blackmail
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zlith89
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Love the renders! Great looking game. Its a shame (for me) that its female protagonist. Anyho, good luck with the game, looks good
Olivia_V
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I think about 75% of your errors are just misused pronouns (lots of using "he" and "him" to refer to female characters for example), which are fairly easy to correct. Your English sounds proficient enough that you won't need a translator to fix those.
Skylark21
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I can somehow tolerate wrong pronouns but what I can't tolerate is calling a 35 year old muscular man with thick beard a "boy".
TeamEquipe
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not sure why Sandra’s old daughter and live in boyfriend were removed in this update. The boyfriend is now a ac worker and just friend from school now & the original daughter was replaced with a new 10 yr old daughter? I do like Sandra’s older daughter though & how she’s making her mom go on double date with the pervert and how Sandra kept Pablo’s phone# while hubby will be out of town with boss’s hot wife
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Stef Story - I quite liked your first version of Scandal but this has even greater promise.
However, apart from the He/She, Him/Her mistakes I also got a bit confused with the names of some of the characters. I also thought that most of the storylines seemed rushed and muddled up. It was almost as if I had some renders and dialogue missing.
IMO you need to go back and rework some of these scenes to give them more depth and gives us a greater understanding of her lusty feelings as she slowly unravels. (You don't need to go all AWAM on us though!)
Do that and I think you will have a really excellent game on your hands.
However, apart from the He/She, Him/Her mistakes I also got a bit confused with the names of some of the characters. I also thought that most of the storylines seemed rushed and muddled up. It was almost as if I had some renders and dialogue missing.
IMO you need to go back and rework some of these scenes to give them more depth and gives us a greater understanding of her lusty feelings as she slowly unravels. (You don't need to go all AWAM on us though!)
Do that and I think you will have a really excellent game on your hands.
ijako3
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Yeah, your ability to write also went out through the window it seems.
Actually loved the game, besides some simple writing mistakes, there is lots of potential . I am really looking forward to the next update.Sandra reminds me a lot of a wife and a mother ,super sexy ,smart ,love her character. Hope the dev continues with more lesbian content ,so far rating it as a five star game..Thanks and again cant wait for the next update, hope it isnt like Jessica oneils hard news or a wife and mother,as the updates seem to take for ever to be released.
Whilst English uses the male, female and neutral forms of gender the majority of languages in the world do not have grammatical gender and do not distinguish between masculine and feminine forms of the pronoun; those that do distinguish principally belong to the Indo-European or Afro-Asiatic families. So for example, Chinese, Russian and Japanese have no gender forms or only started to introduce them during the past 100 years ... so you can read say the Bible in that language and never know that Jesus is a male ... whilst other countries such as Turkey that do not have an equivalent for neutral, and lots of countries where language regarding gender is 'more complicated'. So perhaps it is best just to try and help others to improve their English rather than just berate them.
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