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Ok, first scene on the hate path this update (dream sequence with dad) really made me laugh. Wow, that was...hillarious 
Just finished both routes. Other than that going back to waiting, I guess. Rather short but nice update...
but there are many possible psychological answers. MC can torture or plan revenge on Nicole but Ashley isnt allowed to interfere (even if in the same ship against Nicole). She is still his bitch mom that in his view is only his to punish - so he comes involuntarilly to defend her even in his thoughts.
I also might be wrong and its all but error that putted lines of text from "good boi" path. Who knows
Just finished both routes. Other than that going back to waiting, I guess. Rather short but nice update...
Well of course its far fetched, its taboo fantasy lewd game
but there are many possible psychological answers. MC can torture or plan revenge on Nicole but Ashley isnt allowed to interfere (even if in the same ship against Nicole). She is still his bitch mom that in his view is only his to punish - so he comes involuntarilly to defend her even in his thoughts.I also might be wrong and its all but error that putted lines of text from "good boi" path. Who knows
- Jul 13, 2018
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gfx nice enough. The story not any worse than a lot else out there, keep the story unique/interesting enough and it will blend out. I don't know if English is the first language of the creator or not, but dialogues feels a bit "to constructed". Try to aim more for "everyday/casual speech" (Which can be a bit hard if not native English speaker, I know).
Also, tell what going on in a scene if the scene shows it clearly, is a bit redundant.
Good luck with the game though.
Also, tell what going on in a scene if the scene shows it clearly, is a bit redundant.
Good luck with the game though.
- Dec 26, 2017
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As others have said, the art is fantastic and the premise (evil mother) is unique and interesting. The only thing letting this game down is the writing. It's not horrible and you can understand what is supposed to be happening (mostly), it's just the dialogue is stilted and unnatural.
Clearly English isn't you first language, but if you can find someone to help you with it then you will have a top level game on your hands.
Clearly English isn't you first language, but if you can find someone to help you with it then you will have a top level game on your hands.
- Oct 29, 2019
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i like the story, i really do, both path is different in its own way.
as for mom, yea she got issues, who the fuck can stay straight, while working things out with her husband, thats the first red flag and could at least used protection, she is a whore and only doing things, that benefits her needs, nothing more.
as for Ashley, i can understand her, to a degree, i dont have bi polar myself, but have some traits for it(not enough to make it)
fav characters , is Jessica and Chloe.
as for renders, they are decent, seen heck alot worse and better, but they are getting the job done.
she left his dad, to marry Derek, but Derek dont seem to care all that much, always busy and so on and to a degree, i can understand why, the flame went out.
i think my list is getting longer now
as for mom, yea she got issues, who the fuck can stay straight, while working things out with her husband, thats the first red flag and could at least used protection, she is a whore and only doing things, that benefits her needs, nothing more.
as for Ashley, i can understand her, to a degree, i dont have bi polar myself, but have some traits for it(not enough to make it)
fav characters , is Jessica and Chloe.
as for renders, they are decent, seen heck alot worse and better, but they are getting the job done.
she left his dad, to marry Derek, but Derek dont seem to care all that much, always busy and so on and to a degree, i can understand why, the flame went out.
i think my list is getting longer now
I do not speak English. My English is very bad. But I do not write the text. I do everything except writing a story
- Jul 29, 2017
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I decided not to use Ashley's photos and yet, at school, it appears that they are published...
It's a very good game, some things, or reactions don't make any sense, but it's no big deal.
It's funny, it has beautiful girls, decent animations, keep doing what you've done so far.
It's a very good game, some things, or reactions don't make any sense, but it's no big deal.
It's funny, it has beautiful girls, decent animations, keep doing what you've done so far.
- Apr 25, 2017
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i think is only this last 2 updates in the hate route that the text can be better, for example the insults to the mc and the whole from love to hate, it should be the mc hate, not the mom hate route xD
(but that is easily fixed guys since there is only a few sentences that can be changed and all will be good)
I think for example the good route is very well done, and the hate route until this last 2 updates they were good too.
A game is something that will always have something that can be better, but something like that is easily fixed .
You guys are kinda judging all entire game for just a few lines.
btw if i may ask , who is the writer MaksB ?
(but that is easily fixed guys since there is only a few sentences that can be changed and all will be good)
I think for example the good route is very well done, and the hate route until this last 2 updates they were good too.
A game is something that will always have something that can be better, but something like that is easily fixed .
You guys are kinda judging all entire game for just a few lines.
btw if i may ask , who is the writer MaksB ?
- Jul 13, 2018
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Okay I'm in the middle of playing but Devs who added that Dream sequence with the MC Dad at the beginning of this update? They deserve a for that.
Reedley is Hawt Af, not quite surpassing Jess for me currently but she's up there.
That Drive way scene with Diana. She's officially next on my list and oh yeah Suck it Nicole and not literally this time.
for that.Reedley is Hawt Af, not quite surpassing Jess for me currently but she's up there.
That Drive way scene with Diana
. She's officially next on my list and oh yeah Suck it Nicole and not literally this time. 
- May 11, 2018
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I have the same issue. Irrespective of whether you decided to use Ashley's photos or not, the game just assumes you did. Other than that, good update.I decided not to use Ashley's photos and yet, at school, it appears that they are published...
so many paths, and subpaths
maybe someone has checked all ways, and can write some kind of walkthrough?
maybe someone has checked all ways, and can write some kind of walkthrough?
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The mom can eat a dick. I knew she was a POS lol
- Jun 24, 2019
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Yea same here what da fuck?? Whats the point then they still got posted anywaysI decided not to use Ashley's photos and yet, at school, it appears that they are published...
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