VN Ren'Py Abandoned Secret Boss: New Neighbours [v0.2] [PaperBoyProductions]

[mysterious stranger]

I love the art. My only gripe is the white boxes without text in them - I'm not a RenPy programmer (I'm sure there are better ways) but I would be tempted to replace:

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with

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That way the image shows on the screen until the user clicks and no empty white box hiding quarter of the image.

 

[lorddarkam]

Milf Romance im always ON

Future please no NTR keep it Pure

Devs get angry when you demend something from then some are suicidal and say "oh now is going to be full NTR"

The best stand is just check if theres netorare TAG if theres i just ignore the topic without talking in the comments

 

[EZ8lt]

I'm confused, why does it quit without any warning if I blame Martin at the beginning? Makes zero sense, and the choice useless as well.

 

[blademaster89]

Milf Romance im always OFF

Future please only NTR keep it Pure

Trolling the troll I like it. But soon this page will be hijacked by the likes of the one that commented first. sigh.

 

[PeggyBlackett]

With the "former CEO of a pharmaceutical company" and "developing a drug that doesn't do what it was supposed to do" and "secretly working at your new company" stuff, this sounds like a setup for a mind control game, but it's not in the tags.

Will there be mind control content?

 

[PeggyBlackett]

I'm confused, why does it quit without any warning if I blame Martin at the beginning? Makes zero sense, and the choice useless as well.

Probably for a future update? But if so, it really ought tell you so and send you back.

 

[Vasy]

The character models are nice, but the "choices" that kick you to the title screen if you choose incorrectly are annoying as hell. If you want to make a kinetic novel, just do so.

 

[Mormont]

Well without the extra clicking to read the dialogue it would be just fine although I was a little confused at the start making those choices without knowing any of the stories was a bit odd, overall looks good.

 

[SpikeZg]

renders look really nice, the ass on Katrina is delicious
but that ha-ha and he-he after every two sentences must go...
also a lot of white text boxes with nothing on them

but it's a cool game, i like it, best of luck in the future

 

[Alexis_1]

3DCG, Male protagonist, Romance, Corruption, Milf, Teasing

If sex is not planned, then a waste of time.

 

[PaperboyP]

I love the art. My only gripe is the white boxes without text in them - I'm not a RenPy programmer (I'm sure there are better ways) but I would be tempted to replace:

scene c1p16
""

with

scene c1p16
pause

That way the image shows on the screen until the user clicks and no empty white box hiding quarter of the image.

Thank you for the info; I’m relatively new to this lol. I will utilise on the following update.

 

[PaperboyP]

If sex is not planned, then a waste of time.

Don't worry, there will be lots in due time

 

[PaperboyP]

renders look really nice, the ass on Katrina is delicious
but that ha-ha and he-he after every two sentences must go...
also a lot of white text boxes with nothing on them

but it's a cool game, i like it, best of luck in the future

Noted

 

[Deleted member 451676]

People never seem to get the overview right. It's either a single incredible vague sentence or it's a goddamn essay. Find the middle ground.

 

[Baharomont]

Pfff... Another Boring Copy-by-Copy Project...

 

[MuffinManWantsPregnancy]

Hmmm not bad so far. Though, I found the clicking on the white bars annoying, as well as the abrupt game overs. Rather have choices that are choices (maybe cutting off a future romance path if you choose a certain action), otherwise, there's no real point in having them and practically turns it into a kinetic novel. Also, there should be some background story as to why MC feels a certain way toward this character and that character. Some context will go a long way in the decisions the player will make, especially since I had no idea how to act around any of the characters.

 

[JoshuaDADAD]

Yess please

 

[Ragnar]

Bianca and the jailbait for me.

 

[Look-see]

it slightly reminded me of Pandelo's game. given who you're supposed to romance first. but yeah the meaningless choices are pointless. for the most part this coulda just been a demo to introduce the story and some characters. if the bad choices lead to a game over they're just annoying if it lead to a bad guy route it would make more sense. that being said im actually looking forward to more. especially with vee's daughter.

 

[Blargher]

Okay from all the comments, it seems the negatives could easily be fixed later on. So I'm gonna download this and give it a try. Though I agree without even reading it yet. I've never understood choices that drop you to the main menu or constant ha haing. I remember one game every single sentence ended with a hah hah. Casually talking on a forum maybe, but in a story not so much.

I'll either edit this post later or if others posted, post again when I get a chance to play it.