I like how the dev tries to show eye movements, it might be best to make those auto transitions rather than player clicks though
All characters seem to be unique, so that is a really nice plus.
Some typos, some weird grammar problems.
The GUI font doesn't seem like it goes well with the game, is way too sharp and techy looking.
An unknown lady on the opening Banner, but not Martin/Juliette/Gary/Lian/Venus
The white is a bit harsh, maybe a light grey or add opacity filter bar in preferences.
Laura's name is hard to read on the text box
For an Ex-CEO you would think he would change the name he enters the company under. Otherwise a quick search would show him.
Ex-CEO seems to way too innocent in business, for being someone who at sub 30 got such a major position, he seems to be pushed over by everyone, and does no actual research.
MC multiple times says Venus's and Gary's place, which I am assuming he means Anna
Lottie gained hair length without getting extensions. (Pre color change it was mid shoulders, post it was mid middle to lower back)
Slightly sad that one choice at the end lacking it's images, feels like the game should have waited the extra day to include them.
Side note all the choices that seem like not being a good person are the ones that get any decent images. Unsure if this is on purpose.