VN Ren'Py Completed Secret Summer [v1.0 Epilogue] [SuperWriter]

[el kaskis]

It's still definitely an idea I have for the future, so don't worry, I have not abandoned the idea. Just not on the plate right now.

Glad to hear that ^^

 

[harsha_26]

It's still definitely an idea I have for the future, so don't worry, I have not abandoned the idea. Just not on the plate right now.



That's the type of girl Leanne is, she goes with the flow, so losing her virginity isn't going to be a big emotional experience for her, or at least she's not going to act like that. I think the sex scene is true to her character and changing it would be a mistake.

And let me add another comment concerning the sex scenes. The DeLuca family is one of the most popular games on this site, I'm sure many of you know, but it has almost no sex scenes. I believe it has a blowjob? And the game is two or three years old.

My game isn't lacking as much sexual content of course, but it is way more focused on the story and getting to know the girls. The sex is a bonus, so like I said before, if you are playing this game to jerk off or just watch sex scenes, then you will be disappointed, I think.

My goal is to write a story where you fall in love with the girls and give you a good story =] Of course I tried to make the sex scenes hot and a lot of you seem to enjoy that but definitely there are a few of you who think they are too short and there should be more sex. That's not my goal

Then why the blueballing upto 0.7? Should have planned that sex in like third or fourth update. She isn't too concerned about slow burn or virginity. Yes, it's still "incest", so that may would have took some time for their sexual progress. But, that's said third or fourth update. Otherwise i would have said first update if it is not big sister. She is a slut. Yeah, loyal slut. But, still a slut. So, what's wrong in showing her sexual progress in a more pacing mode rather than cockblocking us upto latest chapter?

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Then why the blueballing upto 0.7? Should have planned that sex in like third or fourth update. She isn't too concerned about slow burn or virginity. Yes, it's still "incest", so that may would have took some time for their sexual progress. But, that's said third or fourth update. Otherwise i would have said first update if it is not big sister. She is a slut. Yeah, loyal slut. But, still a slut. So, what's wrong in showing her sexual progress in a more pacing mode rather than cockblocking us upto latest chapter?

You are saying you would write sex with her by the third or fourth update, but you do realize there are four other women, right? Leanne has only been in 2 or 3 updates and I needed time to developer character and get into her storyline before jumping right into sex.

And I have no idea why you're calling Leanne a slut. She explained why she made the deal with the MC, to keep him from getting himself in trouble with the other girls. On top of that, she's a virgin.

 

[BTLD]

Then why the blueballing upto 0.7? Should have planned that sex in like third or fourth update. She isn't too concerned about slow burn or virginity. Yes, it's still "incest", so that may would have took some time for their sexual progress. But, that's said third or fourth update. Otherwise i would have said first update if it is not big sister. She is a slut. Yeah, loyal slut. But, still a slut. So, what's wrong in showing her sexual progress in a more pacing mode rather than cockblocking us upto latest chapter?

the fuck?
How is she a slut?

 

[harsha_26]

You are saying you would have sex with her by the third or fourth update, but you do realize there are four other women, right? Leanne has only been in a 2 or 3 updates.

And I have no idea why you're calling Leanne a slut. She explained why she made the deal with the MC, to keep him from getting himself in trouble with the other girls. On top of that, she's a virgin.

You only told she won't care much for virginity. So, yeah, who have tendencies to be slutty have much less care for virginity. Not all but in most of the slutty girls, it's true. And I didn't said to show sex in first update. I said third or fourth update. That's still counted as some time for build up. And if you have show Leanne in first and fourth update, with non-sexual small scenes in second update, it would be perfect builup for her and not be counted as "too soon".


And you saying it's a "landlady" game. Are you serious? It's a family game. Both landlady and roommates are main Lis and each got their own stories, characters, scenes etc. Almost all main Lis will have same "content" at the end i think so. It's not like Haley's story for sister, DMD for daughter, Sinful Delicacies for Mom. Hope you got my point. It really hurts when someone says family game to be a landlady game for me as I'm a huge mom/son fan.

 

[Heavy Sleeper]

You are saying you would write sex with her by the third or fourth update, but you do realize there are four other women, right? Leanne has only been in 2 or 3 updates and I needed time to developer character and get into her storyline before jumping right into sex.

And I have no idea why you're calling Leanne a slut. She explained why she made the deal with the MC, to keep him from getting himself in trouble with the other girls. On top of that, she's a virgin.

I wouldn't worry about that person, they like to go to any thread and start fights(even if they don't like the fetishes in the game). As you can see by that comment alone, it doesn't matter how little sense it makes. Their main objective is to try and force dev to change their game with the old "I would support but..."

 

[d_pedestrian]

I believe it has a blowjob? And the game is two or three years old.

Look at the way that scene was written and shown. That blowjob scene can make a lot of actual sex scenes like nothing. you are a great story writer but the way you design sex scenes will show how erotic writer you are. The developer of the deluca family made that blowjob cuck scene really hot.

if you are playing this game to jerk off or just watch sex scenes, then you will be disappointed

Don't know about others but I ain't here to jerk off. There's plenty of real porn available for that. I am here for the story but an adult game doesn't feel the same if the sex scenes are underwhelming.

She is a slut. Yeah, loyal slut. But, still a slut.

Are we playing the same game? She's 23 and hot as fuck. if she was a slut she would have gone and had sex with anyone she want but she didn't do that. MC has been the closest person to her and really cares about her. maybe go and google the definition of slut. A loyal slut is the one who is in an open relationship and fucks around with partner's permission. Take katherine from deliverance for example. she's whom you call loyal slut.

That's what i like about SuperWriter's games. You won't find any sluts in his game and sluts really turn me off.

 

[Tragic Princess]

the fuck?
How is she a slut?

It makes no sense lmao

 

[harsha_26]

Look at the way that scene was written and shown. That blowjob scene can make a lot of actual sex scenes like nothing. you are a great story writer but the way you design sex scenes will show how erotic writer you are. The developer of the deluca family made that blowjob cuck scene really hot.

Don't know about others but I ain't here to jerk off. There's plenty of real porn available for that. I am here for the story but an adult game doesn't feel the same if the sex scenes are underwhelming.

Are we playing the same game? She's 23 and hot as fuck. if she was a slut she would have gone and had sex with anyone she want but she didn't do that. MC has been the closest person to her and really cares about her. maybe go and google the definition of slut. A loyal slut is the one who is in an open relationship and fucks around with partner's permission. Take katherine from deliverance for example. she's whom you call loyal slut.

That's what i like about SuperWriter's games. You won't find any sluts in his game and sluts really turn me off.

So, you mean slut cannot be in a monogamy? Oh okay. Never known that truth. I thoughr sluts can be Monogamous not only romantically but also sexually too.

 

[BTLD]

It makes no sense lmao

Yea...I don't know...I'm not even going to try to understand...

So, you mean slut cannot be in a monogamy? Oh okay. Never known that truth. I thoughr sluts can be Monogamous not only romantically but also sexually too.

Stop..you're embarrassing yourself with that...Leanne was/is a slut...yea...mkay...let's move on..mkay?

 

[Deleted member 3006697]

So, you mean slut cannot be in a monogamy? Oh okay. Never known that truth. I thoughr sluts can be Monogamous not only romantically but also sexually too.

"many"

Will you stop now?

 

[harsha_26]

Yea...I don't know...I'm not even going to try to understand...

Stop..you're embarrassing yourself with that...Leanne was/is a slut...yea...mkay...let's move on..mkay?

Okay. That's what i told. And i like those horny slut girls who are faithful and Monogamous to one man.

 

[harsha_26]

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"many"

Will you stop now?

I dont bother much about definitions. Girls lot of times say "slut" word as casual. If that girl is horny and bold in sexual matters. So, I told leanne is a slut in that sense. We talk dirty in sex like "i'm ur slut etc etc". Doesn't actually mean she's sleeping with many men right?

 

[d_pedestrian]

So, you mean slut cannot be in a monogamy? Oh okay. Never known that truth. I thoughr sluts can be Monogamous not only romantically but also sexually too.

You call someone a slut who is easy, had many casual partners.

you can call the one who just lost her virginity a slut if she lost it to someone whom she had no feelings for and is only sexually attracted to the guy. In this case MC is not only sexually attractive to her but she knows he cares about her a lot and she's not just a random fuck to him. They are siblings. They grew up together. They actually have feelings for each other.

She's a tough girl and that's why she didn't give her virginity much importance but she's not easy and lost it to someone for whom she actually have feelings and the one she's really close to.

MC will always be by her side no matter what happens. This cannot be said for even those people who are in a relationship.

We talk dirty in sex like "i'm ur slut etc etc".

ever heard of roleplay?

 

[maankamara]

My games are stories WITH sex, not the other way around, so if you're looking for oral every sex scene, and a long drawn out scene, you may end up disappointed, so please keep that in mind.

I will definitely consider your opinions, though I think most people are okay with how they are. I have scene a few posts saying they need work, and I have seen a few posts saying that the scenes were really hot, so who do I listen to?

In this case when the opinion is split, I cannot change the game based on three or four opinions either way.
I have to be careful and not change what I'm doing based on the opinions of a few for the mass.

Most comments are saying this update was great, so I'll just continue to monitor what everyone is saying and make sure to keep my eyes open. I will definitely change something if most people agree.

I hope I explained that well enough

I for one am extremely glad the way you write your sexual scenes. They feel more natural than many others. Of course there's always room for improvement but they are still very hot.

I am so fucking sick and tired of games where 30+ year old women flirt with the MC, get equal response, go into the empty house and then proceed to give a handjob before calling it a day. All just because it was first encounter of a game and that obviously means they can't have actual sex yet. Level one.

But I digress, keep up the good work!

PS. The ignore function on this site works wonders.

 

[UncleFredo]

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She's a tough girl and that's why she didn't give her virginity much importance but she's not easy and lost it to someone for whom she actually have feelings and the one she's really close to.

MC will always be by her side no matter what happens. This cannot be said for even those people who are in a relationship.
...

To reenforce this point. The MC is the ONLY man she's ever felt very close to. Her feelings, love, and trust for him is unique among her relationships, and that's why she decided to lose her virginity with him, planning for him to be the only person with whom she'll be sexually intimate.

In other words NOT A SLUT.

 

[d_pedestrian]

I am so fucking sick and tired of games where 30+ year old women flirt with the MC, get equal response, go into the empty house and then proceed to give a handjob before calling it a day. All just because it was first encounter of a game and that obviously means they can't have actual sex yet. Level one.

I completely agree. If a girl is virgin then i understand taking small steps to get to the final thing but when you're already experienced there's no point in taking small steps. If you're comfortable enough to be intimate with your partner you don't have to take it step by step. just go all the way.

 

[Talmadge]

I think you're confusing this game with another lol. There are no twins.

I have a game called I thought was called Secret Summer where there are twin boys who parent trap and switch places. I don't know if I combined it with this one or what. Oh well. LoL

 

[Bloodguard]

And let me add another comment concerning the sex scenes. The DeLuca family is one of the most popular games on this site, I'm sure many of you know, but it has almost no sex scenes. I believe it has a blowjob? And the game is two or three years old.

If the Dev of TDF would finally put some sexy time in the freakin game, bet they would double their supporters. All tease=eternal blueballs and not a fun game. I quit supporting it after over a year and no lewds. They could learn from masters of the AVN craft like DPC, and Philly, that a good mix of sexy fun time, and great story, make for a much better game.

 

[Deleted member 2237523]

My games are stories WITH sex, not the other way around, so if you're looking for oral every sex scene, and a long drawn out scene, you may end up disappointed, so please keep that in mind.

I will definitely consider your opinions, though I think most people are okay with how they are. I have scene a few posts saying they need work, and I have seen a few posts saying that the scenes were really hot, so who do I listen to?

In this case when the opinion is split, I cannot change the game based on three or four opinions either way.
I have to be careful and not change what I'm doing based on the opinions of a few for the mass.

Most comments are saying this update was great, so I'll just continue to monitor what everyone is saying and make sure to keep my eyes open. I will definitely change something if most people agree.

I hope I explained that well enough

And let me add another comment concerning the sex scenes. The DeLuca family is one of the most popular games on this site, I'm sure many of you know, but it has almost no sex scenes. I believe it has a blowjob? And the game is two or three years old.

My game isn't lacking as much sexual content of course, but it is way more focused on the story and getting to know the girls. The sex is a bonus, so like I said before, if you are playing this game to jerk off or just watch sex scenes, then you will be disappointed, I think.

My goal is to write a story where you fall in love with the girls and give you a good story =] Of course I tried to make the sex scenes hot and a lot of you seem to enjoy that but definitely there are a few of you who think they are too short and there should be more sex. That's not my goal

Thankyou for responding.

I don't want talk to much about other game, just this last one. I disagree if comparing with Deluca, because that is on another different level, even just a simple teasing or bj, it has a lot of effort in there, not just static renders (it has animations, longer duration and a lot more renders, not just different angle), another example is Amnesia it only has two fingering scene, but the details in it, is a god like skills.

But I like your game from the start, it's already good VN as I said, I already gave 5* even before this discussion show up. I merely mention one thing that can be improved to make it better, but you are the one that know your game and audience the best. Overall I still enjoy SS story and writing very much and I respect your decision if you want to stay as it is. Thankyou.