first impressions :
the writing is good
the renders are nice , even so the animations
i like the little cutscenes
well - the penis ... a bit oversized i think , but well, porn and his influence at the overall expectations
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the glossary - nice and clear to use
a textbox_opacity slider would be nice ( but i think this will come no? seen a outcommented line at screen.rpy)
the changing of the text size at longer sentences - well it surprised me , thats a new one for me
idk how some choices play out later (like who to rescue , take out the rebels or spare one)
there are a lot of LI´s at the script - hope this plays well together
so ,for now , i think this can be a hit
gl again with this new project
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btw nice typo "varables.rpy"