Unofficial dialogue fix.
For those who were unhappy with the writing, here is the entire game (v 0.4) with updated English dialogue.
My fixes include-
1- Corrected the screwed up relationship naming that plagues the game.
2- Made the dialogue flow more naturally.
3- Remained true to the original story and the characters.
4- Fixed some parts that didn't make sense.
Old saves would probably work but you wouldn't see all the fixes, so I suggest starting over. It takes less than 90 minutes to play though the entire game.
Serenity Meadows V 0.4 English Fix
I have also included the script files if you prefer to go that route.