Tarakis

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Excellent update, no bugs or crashes for me. I like all the artwork and animations. English is not to bad but could still use some editing. Kinda grindy at the beginning but it all works out. 4.75 out of 5 faps (why only 5 max faps?? Imma not a youngin' anymore :p)
:D CHEERS (c)
 
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Vrassk

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This door is the garage, in the android versions, it doesn't light on when you hover the mouse... cause there is not mouse :oops:

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Thanks, I could just drag my finger around the back drop and find highlights I guess I kept missing that one.
 

Demoness_Kiss

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Someone plz do me a solid and send a picture of the old mc model so I can have.some context
Immagine.png

I almost want to reconsider my statement about the MC being better as old one...they're both ugly...but the new one...too much "Summertime Saga-vibe" for me
 
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Jamliz

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I almost want to reconsider my statement about the MC being better as old one...they're both ugly...but the new one...too much "Summertime Saga-vibe" for me

In our defense it wasn't our intention to seem "Summertime Saga-vibe", we did a poll, it was democracy...:censored:

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You made the d smaller.

Never do that.
Adjustable would be preferred, although that will require more work.

In our defense it wasn't our intention to seem "Summertime Saga-vibe", we did a poll, it was democracy...:censored:
I guess they have no problem that TownUncovered is also Summertimish as well. I consider it a Slice of Life sort of feel, which is fine. There is an old saying, if it ain't broken, don't fix it. Besides it is your own artwork, your own characters, your own plot and flow of story. Just so long as you don't have random sex objects and images all over the place (which Dark Cookie loves more than I love saying what is on my mind), then it is your own thing. The alternative was to make it a blend of Corruption and Insexual/Incestual Awakening. Porn is porn. Some people just need to accept that.
 

GopnikDude

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Here are my suggestions, based on what i played so far and from my personal knowledge (i am a game dev as well, but not for lewd games)

I would add more minor events into the "grindy" parts of the games (Such as helping Kyle or Jane with work and such) to make them more interesting but also value the grind itself; it is much more interesting to grind a certain skill or affection requirement when said thing has a variety of small, funny and unique events or some variety between them. Doing the very same activity while having the very same dialogue and interactions each time make it pointless to add to the game if it add nothing more.

Also, (I'm aware i do not know if you already planned this) you must have a proper pacing for the events and the sex scenes. What i mean is that the "climax" of the game shouldn't be to be able to have sex with one of the characters, but to be able to really do a multitudes of scenes with them with more specifics focuses on some optionnal fetishes like for example, public, hardcore, pregnancy, multiples partners (3some, 4some, etc...) with specific settings (Such has going out for a road trip, with unique scenes attached to it). This is rather important because a lot of lewd games focuses waaaaaay too much on the "having sex with x character is the ultimate goal" and doesn't go beyond it, doesn't explore it and doesn't add interesting details to it. This end up with an endless and unnecessary long ass grind and/or a mountain of lame/tame texts and dialogue with a whole bunch of drama into it that nobody asked for, to ultimately lead to the MC having the damn sex, but not before waiting for 367 updates before having the actual ability to do it due to very incremental releases.

Updates need to have a theme or a goal and focus on one specific character or aspect of the game. This is to address a point i made earlier; too many lewd games sprinkle their updates all over their places, leading to a game where you can't actually finish anything until much, much later in development, because every update advance the overall story progress of all characters by a mere 5% instead of completing them in order of importance and popularity. This of course depend on the structure of the game, but in your case this is doable.

Otherwise, game is quite good overall. Love the art, love the characters so far (Although i would like more depth and more details about them).
 

FatDragonite

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Wait........ looking at those concepts for the mc there was a chance for him to be black......(although it was a democracy so there was literally no way in hell, heven or anyother plain of existence it would have ever happened sadly )I'm very happy that you guys even put it in the poll.I mean if you did go that route you would have been the first devs on this site (as far as I'm aware )would of helped change the unfair narrative that black people have on this site. Apparently all we're good for are being thugs and stealing wives. Anyway you gain points for effort.
 
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Pistolmax

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This seems fun. Sex scenes could use a bit of work and certain details could be added but still pretty fun.
 

Jamliz

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Jun 15, 2019
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Here are my suggestions, based on what i played so far and from my personal knowledge (i am a game dev as well, but not for lewd games)

I would add more minor events into the "grindy" parts of the games (Such as helping Kyle or Jane with work and such) to make them more interesting but also value the grind itself; it is much more interesting to grind a certain skill or affection requirement when said thing has a variety of small, funny and unique events or some variety between them. Doing the very same activity while having the very same dialogue and interactions each time make it pointless to add to the game if it add nothing more.

Also, (I'm aware i do not know if you already planned this) you must have a proper pacing for the events and the sex scenes. What i mean is that the "climax" of the game shouldn't be to be able to have sex with one of the characters, but to be able to really do a multitudes of scenes with them with more specifics focuses on some optionnal fetishes like for example, public, hardcore, pregnancy, multiples partners (3some, 4some, etc...) with specific settings (Such has going out for a road trip, with unique scenes attached to it). This is rather important because a lot of lewd games focuses waaaaaay too much on the "having sex with x character is the ultimate goal" and doesn't go beyond it, doesn't explore it and doesn't add interesting details to it. This end up with an endless and unnecessary long ass grind and/or a mountain of lame/tame texts and dialogue with a whole bunch of drama into it that nobody asked for, to ultimately lead to the MC having the damn sex, but not before waiting for 367 updates before having the actual ability to do it due to very incremental releases.

Updates need to have a theme or a goal and focus on one specific character or aspect of the game. This is to address a point i made earlier; too many lewd games sprinkle their updates all over their places, leading to a game where you can't actually finish anything until much, much later in development, because every update advance the overall story progress of all characters by a mere 5% instead of completing them in order of importance and popularity. This of course depend on the structure of the game, but in your case this is doable.

Otherwise, game is quite good overall. Love the art, love the characters so far (Although i would like more depth and more details about them).
Thank you so much for taking the time to share with us all of this, that is really important for us and you are right, but this is basically the "2nd version of the game" (it's on the 0.043, but we had to make a lot of changes from the 0.01, we started on Unity and have to move to renpy (It was like starting again from 0) we made a full redesign of all the characters and the main character 4 TIMES! and just on this version we are expanding the content to new locations and characters) Of course we have to focus on something every update, otherwise it would be pointless, this one was focused con the family (Letting this done for now), Next update (0.05) will focus on expanding the world, new characters and locations, (0.06) will focus on Brixxida and the sexnote, setting new spells and mechanics, and then we will make a poll to know what do you want to depth on, so we could start to improve the game flow and creating more events with each character. Is just that the game is for now on an early version. (If you had tried the last updates you would understand better the progress of the game)
 
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