This is promising. There are some issues though where it comes to progression and the game being non-intuitive. Some might be caused by the fact that I didn't play this before and started with 0.4.
For example, I kept visiting Sal in the diner. The log said to improve her living situation, but there was nothing like that in interactions with her. So I assumed it would come later. Only after helping her with food for Honey and she said to visit her in her room, I was like "what room?" and realized that the janitor's closet is her room and I need to talk to her there to advance.
Similarly, took me a while to figure out that helping Cindy with cleaning actually has a storyline, I initially assumed there were a few random outcomes and I was getting one. Perhaps splitting the storyline in a few longer parts instead of many very short ones would help?
Progression with so characters also is weird, particularly Cindy - goes from uh, "friendly", in the very first scene, to "fuck off and die" and then straight back to "fuck me please" for no apparent reason. Princess is even weirder, being all her royal bitchy self, and then we suddenly get an option to tie her up and fuck her, and she doesn't mind (but indeed badly requires a gag
). There really needs to be some buildup to that, as it's a stretch even with porn game logic. The random event where we find her self-bound could be a good starting point...