RPGM Completed Shadowcore [Shadow Garden]

[Komdot]

The game was already good before with us having to guess the story, imagine now with a good translation, I'm going to play for the fifth time now, ty.

 

[Umbra.Nox]

Oh my god, why this game is so cryptic with stuff? Like with pyramids, you have to stop running and slow walk, BUT it will only negate some fall pits, while some will stay. Same goes for saving Elysia in hot springs, with how weirdly it is done. Or hiring Brad, that would require you to lose the unloseable. What the hell, dev... There's also some ice cave in northern continent, that's just seemingly impossible to reach? Like, how, what do i do with it?

 

[S3vatari0n]

So, I feel reealy dense right now: how do I progress past the first town? Played the game ages ago and managed it, but now I can't remember a thing. I believe I talked to everyone and interacted with everything, but I'm still on the patrol the town part.

 

[kingofbrocoli]

I think it depends on the dev, but yeah, unless you're speaking as a translation group or company, most japanese devs will think you have nefarious purposes.

Activists have done a lot of damage, but there's also the aspect of etiquette in the scene.

The game was already good before with us having to guess the story, imagine now with a good translation, I'm going to play for the fifth time now, ty.

There certainly were a couple of "oh, fuck" moments ruined by the machine translation. Hope you like it.

Oh my god, why this game is so cryptic with stuff? Like with pyramids, you have to stop running and slow walk, BUT it will only negate some fall pits, while some will stay. Same goes for saving Elysia in hot springs, with how weirdly it is done. Or hiring Brad, that would require you to lose the unloseable. What the hell, dev... There's also some ice cave in northern continent, that's just seemingly impossible to reach? Like, how, what do i do with it?

Most 2000s games were like that lmao

So, I feel reealy dense right now: how do I progress past the first town? Played the game ages ago and managed it, but now I can't remember a thing. I believe I talked to everyone and interacted with everything, but I'm still on the patrol the town part.

Talk to the 2 shop owners, the blonde guy at the bunk house, and the married fat guy.
Then go back to the town entrance.

 

[S3vatari0n]

Talk to the 2 shop owners, the blonde guy at the bunk house, and the married fat guy.
Then go back to the town entrance.

Argh shit, That was the one! I talked to his wife a bunch but forgot it was him specifically!

 

[reaper01]

Jesus fucking christ. Finally Done !


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Here's the non machine eng translation of this classic:

Mega


Really enjoyed working on this, the story, world building & characters were crafted with love & passion by the author making it a very personal project, even got a chance to talk with him, got nothing but respect for the guy.

I'm no proffesional writter, but I tried my best to bring his voice into the english language.

Hope you guys like it.

Also, please DO NOT contact the guy about it, he got really mad at me when I told him I was translating his game.
(Kinda my fault tbh)


Changes from the machine translation.

1. The dialogues actually make sense.
2. Desert town had 3 untriggable random events, they work now.
3. Reading certain letter no longer crashes the game.
4. Castle puzzle is finally solvable without a guide.
5. So is finding the zeppelin.

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Thanks for the effort dude but why did you leave parts of the menu in japanese? Like look at this



And then in theres parts where Japanese text is left like in the intro

I've seen other talk about how bits of japanese as well and it makes it look like you just edited over the MTL.

 

[kingofbrocoli]

Thanks for the effort dude but why did you leave parts of the menu in japanese?

Thought I had proof read it extensively...Damn.
Reason for that is, the file wasn't compiling so I started a new project & exported said file into it. Sometimes some elements don't copy correctly, I'll fix it later. Let me know if you find more untranslated stuff.

 

[S3vatari0n]

Thought I had proof read it extensively...Damn.
Reason for that is, the file wasn't compiling so I started a new project & exported said file into it. Sometimes some elements don't copy correctly, I'll fix it later. Let me know if you find more untranslated stuff.

Found one in the Reminiscence Room. Might be more there.

Spoiler: Pic

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There's also the items in here that aren't translated:

Spoiler: Town of Est

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Oh, and one more thing that keeps popping up: you've got "Jiggle" nearly everywhere I think it's supposed to be "Giggle" unless the girls are actually supposed to be jiggling instead of laughing...

 

[kingofbrocoli]

Oh, and one more thing that keeps popping up: you've got "Jiggle" nearly everywhere I think it's supposed to be "Giggle" unless the girls are actually supposed to be jiggling instead of laughing...

Thank you for the help.
You telling me I've been writting "Giggle" wrong my whole life ?
Damn...

 

[N3termia]

Jesus fucking christ. Finally Done !


View attachment 4776948

Here's the non machine eng translation of this classic:

Mega


Really enjoyed working on this, the story, world building & characters were crafted with love & passion by the author making it a very personal project, even got a chance to talk with him, got nothing but respect for the guy.

I'm no proffesional writter, but I tried my best to bring his voice into the english language.

Hope you guys like it.

Also, please DO NOT contact the guy about it, he got really mad at me when I told him I was translating his game.
(Kinda my fault tbh)


Changes from the machine translation.

1. The dialogues actually make sense.
2. Desert town had 3 untriggable random events, they work now.
3. Reading certain letter no longer crashes the game.
4. Castle puzzle is finally solvable without a guide.
5. So is finding the zeppelin.

Buy me a beer here:
buymeacoffee.com/kingofbrocoli

Tell me to fuck off here:

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Wow u're finally done!! why the author got mad at u? cuz he wanna gate keep his game to jap only? also have u fixed jiggle?

 

[Yukihirou]

What do you know, I come back to one of my most favorite NTR game and waifu and it got a proper 2025 translation... Life sure does hand out lemons

 

[kingofbrocoli]

Wow u're finally done!! why the author got mad at u? cuz he wanna gate keep his game to jap only?

Because I didn't asked for his permission. Which is a valid reason. But I mean, in my defense, he was MIA & never replied to my other messages.
Once he returned I told him about the project & he was not happy.

also have u fixed jiggle?

No, had more issues with Translator++ It registers the changes, but doesn't compile & corrupts the files.
I got butthurt & dropped it, but will come back to it later.

What do you know, I come back to one of my most favorite NTR game and waifu and it got a proper 2025 translation... Life sure does hand out lemons

It's far from proper tbh, mainly due to issues derived from the translation tool.

 

[xxx123345]

How tf do you pass floor 4 pyramid?

 

[MordredWoF]

hey, i'm trying to get the true ending, and have just beaten claude on new game+ and picked up the sword, I know because of the story walktrough i'm supposed to head toward the lower floors of the castle, but when I do, the prison door is closed and I no other way to keep going down, am I just missing another way to keep going down, or should I do something else to go past the prison door?