Ren'Py Shattered Minds [v0.11] [eXtasy Games]

[Ka1tzer]

wow, now im glad that i never got around to play this game, i delete it from my to play list.

Kinda proving my previous point...

There's no sexual femdom in the game.

There is an instance in the plot in which the protagonist finds himself in a bad spot, and a female antagonist has leverage over him. It is something both predictable since the start of the story as well as something that makes sense.

It's also something that will SURELY be resolved at some point in the future simply on account of the dev sharing his vision for the game (in which you get to mind dom the entire city, if the game lives that long).

What the guy you quoted was saying/doing is akin to a 5 year old throwing a tantrum over nothing, and was making some kind of extreme argument.

The game has not properly tagged itself before (and I criticized the game and the dev for it), but it has since been rectified by the dev and is now no longer the case.

Bottom line - you like mind dom? This game will probably be something you enjoy.
Be aware that the game does have a plotline that is far from being finished, and the current cliffhanger is what is throwing the monkey brained ones to throw temper tantrums before the situation presented gets resolved.

And honestly, it might be quite a while since it's effectively resolved. The way that situation is presented gives a lot of room for the dev. It *could* be resolved as early as next patch or 10 patches down the line and it'd make no difference plot-wise (as an arbitrary "threshold" would need to be reached for that line to continue).

 

[funkymonkeyjedi]

Kinda proving my previous point...

There's no sexual femdom in the game.

There is an instance in the plot in which the protagonist finds himself in a bad spot, and a female antagonist has leverage over him. It is something both predictable since the start of the story as well as something that makes sense.

It's also something that will SURELY be resolved at some point in the future simply on account of the dev sharing his vision for the game (in which you get to mind dom the entire city, if the game lives that long).

What the guy you quoted was saying/doing is akin to a 5 year old throwing a tantrum over nothing, and was making some kind of extreme argument.

The game has not properly tagged itself before (and I criticized the game and the dev for it), but it has since been rectified by the dev and is now no longer the case.

Bottom line - you like mind dom? This game will probably be something you enjoy.
Be aware that the game does have a plotline that is far from being finished, and the current cliffhanger is what is throwing the monkey brained ones to throw temper tantrums before the situation presented gets resolved.

And honestly, it might be quite a while since it's effectively resolved. The way that situation is presented gives a lot of room for the dev. It *could* be resolved as early as next patch or 10 patches down the line and it'd make no difference plot-wise (as an arbitrary "threshold" would need to be reached for that line to continue.

I couldn't agree with you more.

To be honest, I'm not one who normally takes to "sandbox" games. But I still gave this a try. And even with it's relatively "early" development, I found the story to have huge potential and quite intriguing, not to mention funny as well.

Sure it's perhaps not AAA title, but it still a good game.

 

[Juerhullycin]

Kinda proving my previous point...

There's no sexual femdom in the game.

There is an instance in the plot in which the protagonist finds himself in a bad spot, and a female antagonist has leverage over him. It is something both predictable since the start of the story as well as something that makes sense.

It's also something that will SURELY be resolved at some point in the future simply on account of the dev sharing his vision for the game (in which you get to mind dom the entire city, if the game lives that long).

What the guy you quoted was saying/doing is akin to a 5 year old throwing a tantrum over nothing, and was making some kind of extreme argument.

The game has not properly tagged itself before (and I criticized the game and the dev for it), but it has since been rectified by the dev and is now no longer the case.

Bottom line - you like mind dom? This game will probably be something you enjoy.
Be aware that the game does have a plotline that is far from being finished, and the current cliffhanger is what is throwing the monkey brained ones to throw temper tantrums before the situation presented gets resolved.

And honestly, it might be quite a while since it's effectively resolved. The way that situation is presented gives a lot of room for the dev. It *could* be resolved as early as next patch or 10 patches down the line and it'd make no difference plot-wise (as an arbitrary "threshold" would need to be reached for that line to continue).

 

[Deleted member 5676061]

eXtasy Games just want to say the music choice is fantastic, especially the guitar instrumentals

 

[Skode]

Strange update, i liked the Luna storyline and it being so different from what we saw before (she is powered so no mindless drone for you!) and i liked the big twists we saw from the main plot (i will not spoil it) but is this yet ANOTHER girl we get to bang but not add to the harem? We are seeing too many one and done girls we should be keeping to our selfish selves as why would you NOT want to keep the escort as a fuck toy given you can protect her from the predatory advances of the boss? why would you NOT want to keep the dark hotties to perma cuck the bully jock you have been messing with already as a questline?

Part of the games main appeal is mind breaking hot women and then adding them into the harem so you can repeatedly have fun pseudo impregnating them over and over. The MC is a selfish prick so it would be on par for course that he would do as such anyways but seems not - this despite claiming just about anyone else otherwise. His nearest and dearest at home and likes of Luna? sure it seems he has genuine affection for them by time he ensnares them for himself but the likes of Scarlet was far from a legit love interest, MC just wanted to seed a sexy bitch with an attitude so his harem recruitment criteria seems a bit all over the place.

 

[Newpthx]

Telling the player their player character doesn't remember scenes the player has just seen is weird. Creates ludo-narrative dissonance that hangs over the rest of the playtime. Hurt my immersion, tbh.

Would be like if Bioshock had revealed WYK a third of the way in, but then said "you forget this" and asked you to play the 2nd third the same way it went down before.

Probably would have had it be a blackout and only revealed the reveal when it was time for the character to actually know about it. Trickier writing and maybe choppier flow, but it would make more sense.

 

[AkaQ]

Another amazing update. I prefer this kind of update, releasing the entire questline of a single character all in one go.
Luna's quest was unexpected and unique in a good way, making me imagine some fun possibilities for future harem girls.
Also she's fucking cute.

Spoiler: Luna

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OSHA and Ava bit were also really great, plot moving forward is always a good thing.
The way she can just exert her power like that and create pure mayhem like a Sith Lord is something I like to see in a villain/antihero character. I was a little bit disappointment tho because I was always hoping Ava was this cool and snarky onee-san type. Instead of being a yandere brain cancer.
We also get another harem girl as a "gift"(?), our very own spy protecting us from the shadows.
Hopefully we see her again in the future.

Bugs:
The only bug I found was when Luna, her Father and MC are at the coffee shop and she takes a sip and there's an error there.
And I don't know if this would be considered a bug but at one point during Luna's quest you have to talk to art teacher, questlog says you have to talk in the morning, but you can talk to him during the evening (school is supposed to be closing).

Spoiler: Bugs

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And if Dev is still taking suggestions:
It would be nice to have the ability to see the phone wallpapers in fullscreen using the computer. The phone apps kinda block most of the picture.
And talking about "recieved images" it would be also cool if harem girls would send nude pictures from time to time showing what they are doing during the day. Like a picture of Scarlett doing naked yoga or Chloe studying naked, all of them posing sexy for you or something.

Spoiler: Wallpapers

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[AkaQ]

Blue haired girl in your class. But don't worry about not remembering her, there is a perfect explanation why everybody ignores her.

Such a witty comment, awesome joke

 

[LB1990]

Honestly a good game, first of all it's rare to see others things than ntr and sissy things, so i'm glad we have something like that here. The story is cool, have some humor, scenes are great, the things make sense. Can't wait to see further updates.

+ people complaining about the developpement of the story are stupid because it's not over, yet, We can't really judge if you don't know how the things will work in the future

 

[Bronzescorpion]

Another amazing update. I prefer this kind of update, releasing the entire questline of a single character all in one go.
Luna's quest was unexpected and unique in a good way, making me imagine some fun possibilities for future harem girls.
Also she's fucking cute.

Spoiler: Luna

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OSHA and Ava bit were also really great, plot moving forward is always a good thing.
The way she can just exert her power like that and create pure mayhem like a Sith Lord is something I like to see in a villain/antihero character. I was a little bit disappointment tho because I was always hoping Ava was this cool and snarky onee-san type. Instead of being a yandere brain cancer.
We also get another harem girl as a "gift"(?), our very own spy protecting us from the shadows.
Hopefully we see her again in the future.

Bugs:
The only bug I found was when Luna, her Father and MC are at the coffee shop and she takes a sip and there's an error there.
And I don't know if this would be considered a bug but at one point during Luna's quest you have to talk to art teacher, questlog says you have to talk in the morning, but you can talk to him during the evening (school is supposed to be closing).

Spoiler: Bugs

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And if Dev is still taking suggestions:
It would be nice to have the ability to see the phone wallpapers in fullscreen using the computer. The phone apps kinda block most of the picture.
And talking about "recieved images" it would be also cool if harem girls would send nude pictures from time to time showing what they are doing during the day. Like a picture of Scarlett doing naked yoga or Chloe studying naked, all of them posing sexy for you or something.

Spoiler: Wallpapers

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While it would indeed be nice with an in game view of the wallpapers, here they are (haven't extracted Luna's)

Spoiler: Ava

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Spoiler: Eleanor

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Spoiler: Sarah

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Spoiler: Scarlett

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Spoiler: Sofia & Chloe

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Spoiler: Kobe

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[Unregistered]

I think I'm done with this game. I'm not spazing out about who controls the body. The straw that broke the camel's back was Ava being able to use her powers. MC and Ava habit the same body. If this inhibitor works on the MC, it should work on Ava as well. But for some very convenient reason she can use her powers anyway.

It should have been the end right in the interrogation room. Or even more realistically, in the police station in the Scarlet story line.

 

[Bronzescorpion]

MC and Ava habit the same body. If this inhibitor works on the MC, it should work on Ava as well. But for some very convenient reason she can use her powers anyway.

There isn't anything that says it should work on Ava. We don't know how the powers manifest or how Ava and MC is truly linked together. You assume that just because they share the body they must both be affected by it, but you have no evidence of this.

 

[Unregistered]

There isn't anything that says it should work on Ava. We don't know how the powers manifest or how Ava and MC is truly linked together. You assume that just because they share the body they must both be affected by it, but you have no evidence of this.

Before OSA captures the MC, the agent runs a DNA analysis to confirm whether he is a superhuman or not. Which means it is biological, the power is tied to the body. Not to mention the nature of the MC's power, Ava being a figment of the MC's conscience, everything indicating that this power is related to the MC's own mind, and so on.

I think I have pretty good evidence.

 

[MarioChief]

Before OSA captures the MC, the agent runs a DNA analysis to confirm whether he is a superhuman or not. Which means it is biological, the power is tied to the body. Not to mention the nature of the MC's power, Ava being a figment of the MC's conscience, everything indicating that this power is related to the MC's own mind, and so on.

I think I have pretty good evidence.

At this point can we be sure Ava is a part of the MC's mind, after all we only have her statements as evidence and we know she's a liar.

 

[Unregistered]

At this point can we be sure Ava is a part of the MC's mind, after all we only have her statements as evidence and we know she's a liar.

Was there anything indicating she wasn't? What was provided by the game is that she is part of the MC's mind. And even if she is something else, what kind of existence would explain everything that happened in the game so far without creating even more plotholes?

 

[marvelfreak3000]

I have a theory about Ava. I wonder if the father did more to the MC than just making them try to forget about him. What if the father was the one to implant Ava with his powers into the MC's subconscious and wouldn't manifest until he got older? It could be a way to have the MC release her from within himself without hurting himself mentally if she wasn't created by him in the first place.

 

[MerlinUSA]

I just read where someone else ran into (what I assume is) this issue: at the coffee shop, after Thomas leaves, Luna takes a sip of her coffee, and this error message pops up...
View attachment traceback.txt

Is there a solution to this, or are we waiting for a fix? I'm not complaining, either way. Just wondering.

*** Never mind. I tried "Ignore", and it worked. Dev should still probably look into it, though.***

 

[Falkfisch]

Can you add a way to hide quests that have not yet been implemented?

 

[LinkBox88]

Luna update was ok but I'm not a fan of how the dynamic with Ava has changed.

Spoiler: Spoiler from last update

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[Zekethor]

At the end of the day these ratings are subjective opinions. They have a right to think what they think just as you have a right to think this game doesn't deserve the rating it got.

yes I understand, but the bad intention of some is also clear, at the end of the day ,like you said, you are right because if the game is getting it right the good ones outweigh the bad ones, the real problem is that it is 5 stars, a game with 3.5 already It gives the impression that it has more problems than this game.