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The game does a lot of things right, but also makes catastrophic mistakes.
She is too aggressive and eager to have sex, to the point it's a turn off. 99% of the time, the woman puts up a lot of resistance or plays games, which then causes the male to come on stronger. It's the males that pursue the women, that try to seduce her. It would be more realistic if she gets offended or blows guys off, all while getting aroused. The men who hit on her should be cretins and low lifes, only wanting to fuck her, and while they say vulgar things to her, her own body betrays her; she gets aroused, from their vulgarity. It would be better if the males attempt to seduce and corrupt her. If you watch and study Hentai, it has this formula down to an art.
She is way too open and casual about sex. That's not realistic. Women are not like that, thus the scenarios become unrelatable, lacking believability, which then don't result in erotic stimulation. Yes, women are secretly perverted, but they don't show it, because they've learned that if they're too eager, it turns guys off.
You've got to adhere to the basic, basic, basic rules of male & female seduction in order to create a believable and erotic scenario.
I normally would never leave feedback like this, unless I thought the game had real potential to be great.
PROS
- She is attractive.
- The open world aspect is interesting.
- Pacing is good between scenes, dialogue, choices. Some games have too much story and lack choices. This game has a good balance of choices, so it keeps the player engaged.
- She has the look of an interesting character, one of the hardest things to pull off.
- The actual sex scenes and animations are quite good, even though the render lighting quality is very low. It works surprisingly.
CONS
- All the males who pursue her should be cretins, ruffians, low lifes, the worst of the lot. They can't be nice, kind, and decent.
- She should never start or initiate the sex, but she can strike poses, or make subtle body gestures. It should be the males that pursue her, that ask for sex, while she puts up resistance, while the males come on even stronger, all while she resists and resist, until her body finally betrays her, then she finally consents to sex.
- I would suggest trying to create higher quality renders. Remember, even if you have a crappy video card, you can still do overnight renders in DAZ Studio.
Long story short, MEN pursue WOMEN, not the other way around. This is the most basic seduction formula.
Trust me, study Hentai porn, notice how the men pursue and corrupt the women. Then in this game, the men should act like they do in hentai porn, they try to seduce and corrupt her, all while she is putting up resistance, but her body begins to betray her. She'll tell the men to fuck off, but she also gets wet, until she eventually consents to letting them fuck her.
OMG, what the hell? Why is he apologizing? The innkeeper should be a complete dirt bag piece of shit. If anything he should grope her, and offer her a job as a bar wench.
He should notice that she has a new sword.
Innkeep: "See that? You got a sword out of it. Instead of thinking for yourself, you listened to me. Had you not whored yourself to the merchant, you'd have nothing. I've seen adventurer types like you, you're all brawn, but lack strategy and clever thinking. You should consider working here for me, even a few nights a week, until you're back on your feet. I can help a dumb girl adventurer like you."
*Innkeep gropes her, looking at her in a vulgar manner with sinister intention, wanting to profit off her, and use her.*
LOL WHAT? Women are not like this, lol. She needs to put up resistance, all while the males try to seduce her. I'm not talking about rape, I'm talking about her choosing to stay, enjoying the advances of males trying to seduce her. She knows she should leave, but she stays, while they say vulgar things, and try to convince her to let them fuck her. She should not be so eager to have sex, lol.
Here, let me pay a compliment. If you hide the dialogue, and only pay attention to the sexual content in the scene. It looks pretty erotic.
Shiva: "You bastard, what are you doing?"
Orc: "You said I could inspect you. You want to pass through this road, so you have to let us inspect you."
Shiva: "This isn't what I meant. You orcs are all liars."
Orc: "Aww, come on now. Don't be like that. Wait, you've got a body built like an orc woman. Not bad, not bad at all."
Shiva: "Really? Well, I guess I can take that as a compliment."
Orc 2: "Yea, you're strong like an orc female."
*ORC 2 gropes her*
*ORC 1 gropes her*
Orc 1: "Yea, built like a proper orc woman, ready to be fucked and filled."
Shiva: "You filthy orc, stop saying such vulgar things. It's always the same with your kind. Humans try to reason with you, but you always try to take advantage."
Orc 1: "If you wanted me to stop, you would've turned back or attacked us. I think you like Orc inspection, don't you?!"
Shiva feels her body betraying her.
Shiva turns back.
Shiva: "i've had enough of this. I'm leaving."
ORC 1: "Stupid slut, then you can't pass. hahaha."
Shiva gains +1 corruption.
Shiva returns to town, not knowing how she'll pass the orcs. Shiva begins to remember how the Orcs groped and felt her body up. "Hmm, well it was just an inspection. They said my body was strong like an orc woman. Maybe if I let them inspect me fully, they'll let me pass, but I won't let them do anything else."
See? Slow corruption.
Shiva decides to go back and let the Orcs do a complete inspection. Shiva gets felt up while they say vulgar things. Then they let her pass, because her sword is very intimidating and they have a gut feeling she is a skilled warrior. However, if Shiva travels back, she'll have to let the Orcs inspect her again, and from there it slowly escalates as she becomes more corrupt.
She is too aggressive and eager to have sex, to the point it's a turn off. 99% of the time, the woman puts up a lot of resistance or plays games, which then causes the male to come on stronger. It's the males that pursue the women, that try to seduce her. It would be more realistic if she gets offended or blows guys off, all while getting aroused. The men who hit on her should be cretins and low lifes, only wanting to fuck her, and while they say vulgar things to her, her own body betrays her; she gets aroused, from their vulgarity. It would be better if the males attempt to seduce and corrupt her. If you watch and study Hentai, it has this formula down to an art.
She is way too open and casual about sex. That's not realistic. Women are not like that, thus the scenarios become unrelatable, lacking believability, which then don't result in erotic stimulation. Yes, women are secretly perverted, but they don't show it, because they've learned that if they're too eager, it turns guys off.
You've got to adhere to the basic, basic, basic rules of male & female seduction in order to create a believable and erotic scenario.
I normally would never leave feedback like this, unless I thought the game had real potential to be great.
PROS
- She is attractive.
- The open world aspect is interesting.
- Pacing is good between scenes, dialogue, choices. Some games have too much story and lack choices. This game has a good balance of choices, so it keeps the player engaged.
- She has the look of an interesting character, one of the hardest things to pull off.
- The actual sex scenes and animations are quite good, even though the render lighting quality is very low. It works surprisingly.
CONS
- All the males who pursue her should be cretins, ruffians, low lifes, the worst of the lot. They can't be nice, kind, and decent.
- She should never start or initiate the sex, but she can strike poses, or make subtle body gestures. It should be the males that pursue her, that ask for sex, while she puts up resistance, while the males come on even stronger, all while she resists and resist, until her body finally betrays her, then she finally consents to sex.
- I would suggest trying to create higher quality renders. Remember, even if you have a crappy video card, you can still do overnight renders in DAZ Studio.
Long story short, MEN pursue WOMEN, not the other way around. This is the most basic seduction formula.
Trust me, study Hentai porn, notice how the men pursue and corrupt the women. Then in this game, the men should act like they do in hentai porn, they try to seduce and corrupt her, all while she is putting up resistance, but her body begins to betray her. She'll tell the men to fuck off, but she also gets wet, until she eventually consents to letting them fuck her.
OMG, what the hell? Why is he apologizing? The innkeeper should be a complete dirt bag piece of shit. If anything he should grope her, and offer her a job as a bar wench.
He should notice that she has a new sword.
Innkeep: "See that? You got a sword out of it. Instead of thinking for yourself, you listened to me. Had you not whored yourself to the merchant, you'd have nothing. I've seen adventurer types like you, you're all brawn, but lack strategy and clever thinking. You should consider working here for me, even a few nights a week, until you're back on your feet. I can help a dumb girl adventurer like you."
*Innkeep gropes her, looking at her in a vulgar manner with sinister intention, wanting to profit off her, and use her.*
LOL WHAT? Women are not like this, lol. She needs to put up resistance, all while the males try to seduce her. I'm not talking about rape, I'm talking about her choosing to stay, enjoying the advances of males trying to seduce her. She knows she should leave, but she stays, while they say vulgar things, and try to convince her to let them fuck her. She should not be so eager to have sex, lol.
Here, let me pay a compliment. If you hide the dialogue, and only pay attention to the sexual content in the scene. It looks pretty erotic.
Shiva: "You bastard, what are you doing?"
Orc: "You said I could inspect you. You want to pass through this road, so you have to let us inspect you."
Shiva: "This isn't what I meant. You orcs are all liars."
Orc: "Aww, come on now. Don't be like that. Wait, you've got a body built like an orc woman. Not bad, not bad at all."
Shiva: "Really? Well, I guess I can take that as a compliment."
Orc 2: "Yea, you're strong like an orc female."
*ORC 2 gropes her*
*ORC 1 gropes her*
Orc 1: "Yea, built like a proper orc woman, ready to be fucked and filled."
Shiva: "You filthy orc, stop saying such vulgar things. It's always the same with your kind. Humans try to reason with you, but you always try to take advantage."
Orc 1: "If you wanted me to stop, you would've turned back or attacked us. I think you like Orc inspection, don't you?!"
Shiva feels her body betraying her.
Shiva turns back.
Shiva: "i've had enough of this. I'm leaving."
ORC 1: "Stupid slut, then you can't pass. hahaha."
Shiva gains +1 corruption.
Shiva returns to town, not knowing how she'll pass the orcs. Shiva begins to remember how the Orcs groped and felt her body up. "Hmm, well it was just an inspection. They said my body was strong like an orc woman. Maybe if I let them inspect me fully, they'll let me pass, but I won't let them do anything else."
See? Slow corruption.
Shiva decides to go back and let the Orcs do a complete inspection. Shiva gets felt up while they say vulgar things. Then they let her pass, because her sword is very intimidating and they have a gut feeling she is a skilled warrior. However, if Shiva travels back, she'll have to let the Orcs inspect her again, and from there it slowly escalates as she becomes more corrupt.
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- Sep 11, 2017
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Look, while your suggestions are better for the sake of the NTR and Corruption aspects of the game, it is concerning how you talk about women. Women are individuals, not people who live or do anything for the sake of men. I think you're playing too many hentai games, because you speak about women in a very toxic and unrealistic manner.
- Jul 30, 2017
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The four rules of life. I just made them up.
1. MEN PURSUE WOMEN, not the other way around. (Unless there's femdom involved.)
2. DESPERATE SLUT BEGGING FOR SEX OR BEING TOO EASY = LIMP DICK
3. TOXIC = HARD DICK AND WET VAGINA
4. NICE GUY PUSHOVER = LIMP DICK AND DRY VAGINA
Great feedback. I don't think the author intends for this game to be that serious, to me it is a like a fun b movie comedy. But some of your advice might be helpful if he wants to improve the realness of how the characters act.
Finally, a female protagonist who makes her own decisions, which have meaningful consequences. She fights who she wants to fight, fucks who she wants to fuck, and tells everyone else to go to Hell!
From a more technical viewpoint, I was impressed by the way the fights progressed and that rollback allowed you to re-roll an attack without resorting to save-scumming and without breaking. Nicely done.
This was short, but fun, leaving me wanting to play a sequel
From a more technical viewpoint, I was impressed by the way the fights progressed and that rollback allowed you to re-roll an attack without resorting to save-scumming and without breaking. Nicely done.
This was short, but fun, leaving me wanting to play a sequel
- Jul 31, 2017
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I actually loved this game. Simple and entertaining, wish there was more like this.
- Feb 13, 2020
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It's been a while since I played this, but thought I could pick up from an autosave. I guess a restart is a bit more than recommended:
It looks like this has something to do with a bandits encounter on the road. I vaguely recall something from my previous playthrough.
Code:
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 3724, in script call
call screen cr_actions
File "game/script.rpy", line 3810, in script call
call screen bg_actions
File "game/script.rpy", line 3724, in script call
call screen cr_actions
File "game/script.rpy", line 3823, in script call
call screen vil_actions
File "game/script.rpy", line 3683, in script
if mc.loca == baroad:
File "game/script.rpy", line 3683, in <module>
if mc.loca == baroad:
NameError: name 'baroad' is not definedYeah. I did not find any of the fights difficult. Just have to rollback every once in awhile so that you can dodge, but that did not occur too often.
- Nov 5, 2020
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Yeah, sorry. I added some new variables in the last versions, and also slightly tweaked the code.
- Aug 24, 2018
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If a female protagonist has an admirer or partner and then is with someone else in such a way that they are, or the story has made it clear that they would be heartbroken, it's NTR.
If it's with a partner it can be cheating at the same time.
If the the partner of the female protagonist isn't really introduced properly and mostly in the background. If we, or the story, has no investment in their character, it's not NTR. Then it's just cheating.
TLDR: A female protagonist and NTR simultaneously is very possible.
Since this game is finished are you gonna make a new game or a sequel?
- Nov 5, 2020
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Yes, I have some ideas for new games. However, I have some problems with my pc right now, I hope to solve them in the coming days.
the MC must not have sex on the last day.
...I would *never* have found that! I shall have to see what that ending is, now