VN Ren'Py Shut Up and Dance [Ep.1-10 Ch.1 v1.0 SE] [Boring Games]

[desmosome]

So Dude #1 consensually fucks Dude #2's mother and that makes Dude #2 justified in committing double murder and then beating his mother?

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Did MC not use the pill power on her? Either way, MC is clearly a fucking asshole and horrible friend from Jake's POV. What kinda asshole uses magic powers to fuck all the bitches, doesn't let his friend get anyone, and when said friend tries to hit on MC's sis, he cockblocks him, but that only goes one way, he doesn't give a fuck about banging said friend's mom (and Jake even lusted after Faith, begging MC to hook him up with some magic shit to bang her, if I'm remembering correctly).

Jake is right to be pissed off, but what he does to get back at the MC is a separate issue. You can be justified in getting back at some dude, but there is the question of proportionality. Obviously, the brainrotted kid went way overboard, trying to literally kill the guy.

 

[Jericho85]

Did MC not use the pill power on her? Either way, MC is clearly a fucking asshole and horrible friend from Jake's POV. What kinda asshole uses magic powers to fuck all the bitches, doesn't let his friend get anyone, and when said friend tries to hit on MC's sis, he cockblocks him, but that only goes one way, he doesn't give a fuck about banging said friend's mom (and Jake even lusted after Faith, begging MC to hook him up with some magic shit to bang her, if I'm remembering correctly).

Jake is right to be pissed off, but what he does to get back at the MC is a separate issue. You can be justified in getting back at some dude, but there is the question of proportionality. Obviously, the brainrotted kid went way overboard, trying to literally kill the guy.

No, MC never used the pills on Faith. He literally wakes up with his cock in her mouth in Chapter 2, then later she gets drunk and seduces him. She's wanted MC from the start and everything was consensual, so you're wrong about basically everything

As far as using the pills on girls, there is almost always a choice not to use the pills. The only time that there wasn't a choice to use the pills on an LI was with the doctor at the beginning, and it was unintentional.

Edit: And just to make sure I'm not talking out of my ass, I went back and rechecked the beginning of the Faith routes. The only time MC actually does use the pills on Faith is on the sharing route, wherein MC tells Jake about the pills instead of keeping it a secret. Jake is literally the one who talks MC into using the pills on Faith. On the non-sharing route, MC never uses the pills on her. So any way you slice it, Jake is still the asshole.

 

[OWSam000]

Actually, both of these cannot happen on the same corruption route, so you will need an A and B corruption path.
Those on the corruption path and not on Dr Wood path, got a really small update though.

What is the difference when on corruption path and Dr Wood path?

 

[Antman63995]

You're a special kind of special, aren't you?

Oh yes, because you're playing this game for it's amazing story right? Don't be a simp for the devs all your life.

 

[HornyyPussy]

Oh yes, because you're playing this game for it's amazing story right? Don't be a simp for the devs all your life.

Thank you for reinforcing my point!

 

[byaaahh]

No, MC never used the pills on Faith. He literally wakes up with his cock in her mouth in Chapter 2, then later she gets drunk and seduces him. She's wanted MC from the start and everything was consensual, so you're wrong about basically everything

MC absolutely used the pill power on Faith. Jake wanted him to use the power so she has a softer attitude towards him and is comfortable naked around them.

 

[balboa2151]

I agree, but I think that new cop girl is a contender too. She's fucking hot.

OH OH OH...I have seen her yet...I can't wait...and one more thing...I see many people are talking about Jake...he is a little fuc*ing douche bag...I couldn't stand him from the very begining

 

[HornyyPussy]

MC absolutely used the pill power on Faith. Jake wanted him to use the power so she has a softer attitude towards him and is comfortable naked around them.

Yes, as stated. He used them on the sharing path, not solo.

 

[byaaahh]

Yes, as stated. He used them on the sharing path, not solo.

I never did the sharing path and the powers were still used.

E: Just played it again and the opportunity to use powers is to trust Jake with the secret, sharing is a later path

 

[Bootyman92]

This thread is more entertaining than the game lol. We have the annoyed complainers that feel betrayed that a porn game has shitty writing and the white knights who are defending the game like they're getting paid for it.

Meanwhile I'm just looking through the replies wanting an update whether or not the mc grows a brain or not. For me personally it's all about the revenge at this point, if it's executed poorly (aka not satisfying) the game is dead to me.

Few things as entertaining as watching a bunch of window-lickers bitch and moan over things they have absolutely zero control over.

As for the story, sure, it's got plot holes galore, but then again, who the hell would expect Pulitzer Prize winning writing from an AVN? I just wish the MC wasn't so painfully dumb.

 

[Jericho85]

I never did the sharing path and the powers were still used.

E: Just played it again and the opportunity to use powers is to trust Jake with the secret, sharing is a later path

Ah good point, I thought Telling Jake was the start of the sharing path, but perhaps I was wrong about that. I wasn't aware you could deny Jake sharing Faith after telling him about the pills. Either way though, the point still stands. Faith is horny for MC right from the start with or without the pills being used. If you never tell Jake about the pills, he never suggests using them on Faith and yet she is still sucking on MCs cock in his sleep by the start of Chapter 2.

The dude I was responding to was trying to make the case the Jake was justified, but my point is he was literally the asshole from day one. Faith's interest in the MC was not manipulated.

 

[byaaahh]

Ah good point, I thought Telling Jake was the start of the sharing path, but perhaps I was wrong about that. I wasn't aware you could deny Jake sharing Faith after telling him about the pills. Either way though, the point still stands. Faith is horny for MC right from the start with or without the pills being used. If you never tell Jake about the pills, he never suggests using them on Faith and yet she is still sucking on MCs cock in his sleep by the start of Chapter 2.

The dude I was responding to was trying to make the case the Jake was justified, but my point is he was literally the asshole from day one. Faith's interest in the MC was not manipulated.

Not sure if she was horny for MC from the get-go, or if it was a mixture of her often-absent husband leaving the party, her getting drunk and the increased pheromones (I think that was mentioned as a side effect of the pills) which lead to her wanting some intimacy.

But yeah, my first playthrough was to trust Jake, thinking he would be the horny best friend who actually had a heart of gold trope. Nope, just an asshole.

 

[Antman63995]

Thank you for reinforcing my point!

Ditto friend

 

[HornyyPussy]

Ditto friend

That makes......no sense what so ever..........

Anywho, the List!™ is there for a reason.

 

[Badjourasmix]

Apart from fucking Megan, fucking the Doctor, and then meeting the fine-as-fuck Officer Cope... Yeah I suppose there's not much that MC can do during recovery from getting beaten within an inch of his life and a 2-week coma.

I mean honestly, what did you really expect to happen?

In my opinion most of the hospital scenes were kind of useless and weren't really needed to advance the story. In situations like that where the mc can't do much it's not a bad idea to just do a little time skip instead of just adding filler scenes.

 

[Anteron]

In my opinion most of the hospital scenes were kind of useless and weren't really needed to advance the story. In situations like that where the mc can't do much it's not a bad idea to just do a little time skip instead of just adding filler scenes.

Exactly. We waited well over a year since the previous scene ended for THAT????

 

[Jericho85]

In my opinion most of the hospital scenes were kind of useless and weren't really needed to advance the story. In situations like that where the mc can't do much it's not a bad idea to just do a little time skip instead of just adding filler scenes.

I mean yeah it was an episode with less tension, but I wouldn't call it "filler". There were some big foreshadowings in this episode particularly regarding Jake and the Pills.

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And then there's the expected tension between MC and Emma over losing the pills, and of course the business with Officer Cope which adds another element to the story. So less tension sure, but the story did advance. Plus there was some hot lewds tossed in during the hospital stay.

So like I said, I'm not sure exactly what you were looking for in the episode. I think it was fine. Besides, it's not like MC could have taken that kind of beating and not wind up in a hospital. It would have been weirder if there wasn't a hospital episode.

 

[Anteron]

I was kind of hoping Jake's head would explode or something from the effects of ODing on the pills.
Another idea would be he'd run into a guy about the size of the one he had beat the MC and immediately say something like "Oh, fuck me!"

 

[Badjourasmix]

I mean yeah it was an episode with less tension, but I wouldn't call it "filler". There were some big foreshadowings in this episode particularly regarding Jake and the Pills.

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And then there's the expected tension between MC and Emma over losing the pills, and of course the business with Officer Cope which adds another element to the story. So less tension sure, but the story did advance. Plus there was some hot lewds tossed in during the hospital stay.

So like I said, I'm not sure exactly what you were looking for in the episode. I think it was fine. Besides, it's not like MC could have taken that kind of beating and not wind up in a hospital. It would have been weirder if there wasn't a hospital episode.

Yeah I don't think the whole episode was useless there was definitely some stuff there that is important for the story. I didn't hate it, but overall I felt like the hospital stuff just dragged out. I wasn't expecting him to just magically be fine after taking that kind of beating but like I said in situations like that I feel like it's just better to give the player the important information, do a time skip and advance the story.

 

[dolfe67]

As for the story, sure, it's got plot holes galore, but then again, who the hell would expect Pulitzer Prize winning writing from an AVN? I just wish the MC wasn't so painfully dumb.

There is someting between pulitzer prize and 12yo level of writing. The writing is quite bad, the mc is dumb and thinks with his dick like a basic porn mc. Furthermore, some choices are not fully taken into account, and they are not many. Lots of (sex) scenes are played without player input. Despite those flaws, it's not the worst game I played on here. I was waiting for the full rework to play it and I'm pretty disappointed considering its rating.