- Thread starter Maleficent
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After playing i can say, that this game needs big amount of time and effort to run correctly. Missing option to talk, move around the house are annoying. There's no possibility to finish one task [i.e. sunlotion in male path]. Graphics looks not bad, but little bit to pale. And language - too much mistakes.
See! Where else would you find a game that gives you so much entertainment?
That it was not intentionally funny is a different matter.I'm more bothered by the coding errors. Tasks have to be done in a rigid sequence, but there are no hints on where to go and what to do. Certain areas get blocked depending on what you have to do next. Even the arrows on the map don't always work. That's not free roam.
Hovering over a door or a map location should show a label.
Trying to go to the wrong room or location is a good place to show a hint - "I need to do this first." There are a few hints, sure, but not always where they are needed.
This is probably the dev's first attempt, so let's not pound on him too much. He'll get better. The Engrish is atrocious, but we were able to understand what he meant, so fixing the grammar shouldn't be too tough.
- Nov 27, 2018
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Agreed on all points. The crash to desktop in the bathroom bothers me more than the sunscreen lotion. It's one thing if there's legitimately no more content available, but it's something else if there's a leak that's been left unplugged. I don't enjoy getting unceremoniously kicked out of a game.See! Where else would you find a game that gives you so much entertainment?
I'm more bothered by the coding errors. Tasks have to be done in a rigid sequence, but there are no hints on where to go and what to do. Certain areas get blocked depending on what you have to do next. Even the arrows on the map don't always work. That's not free roam.
Hovering over a door or a map location should show a label.
Trying to go to the wrong room or location is a good place to show a hint - "I need to do this first." There are a few hints, sure, but not always where they are needed.
This is probably the dev's first attempt, so let's not pound on him too much. He'll get better. The Engrish is atrocious, but we were able to understand what he meant, so fixing the grammar shouldn't be too tough.
But yes, minimal pounding. I really was trying to be fair, and I really like the promise shown with the multiple points tracking. If I'd outright hated this I would not have written anything about it. And I'd love to play a visual novel version of that old Jodi West sink-scene in the kitchen. But that writing has to be fixed at some point in the near future if this is going to find its legs.
I really should have taken a screenshot of the breakfast scene in Jennifer's story. The image of three supermodels sitting at breakfast table in an otherwise barren room with just monstrous cheeseburgers for each of them, speaking in broken English at each other. It would have summed up everything wrong and entertaining with the game.
- Dec 10, 2017
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- Dec 29, 2017
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In 99% of the incest games the father always dies.
Why the father cannot be part of the game
after all in all games MC always has sisters?
This is an idea not a criticism
Apart this, the characters are interesting
- Mar 25, 2018
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Because if you have another related male in an incest game, the thread gets dominated with terrified questions about NTR content.
Also, if the Father is removed from the game, it leaves the door open for the son to become the "man of the house" and fuck his Mom.
- Aug 12, 2019
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Oh, God, another broken English game! Makes it painful to read, let alone to try and get into the "story" (loosely referred to as a story - it's the same fucking trope over and over again).
- Aug 12, 2019
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Here's a brief translation list of the dev's broken english into actual English for those who need it.
confortebal = comfortable; bye = buy; bayed = paid; vegetabel = vegetable; neirby = nearby; relly = really; tolk = talk; body = buddy; custumer = customer; steppen = stepping; ow = oh
I get it - he, like most Dev's here, is not a native English speaker. But the majority use some sort of translation software; this guy is sounding it out like a 4 year old.
confortebal = comfortable; bye = buy; bayed = paid; vegetabel = vegetable; neirby = nearby; relly = really; tolk = talk; body = buddy; custumer = customer; steppen = stepping; ow = oh
I get it - he, like most Dev's here, is not a native English speaker. But the majority use some sort of translation software; this guy is sounding it out like a 4 year old.
- Sep 14, 2019
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I don't mind the bad English and poor grammar but I just cannot accept the fact that the saving mechanic is broken and the sunscreen quest is not even a quest.
For example: I save in the living room and when I load, I entered the phone shop!
The sunscreen quest just makes the stairs arrow icon disappear, so I thought the dev might want me to try the poolside windows but it is not usable either..
Need to wait for more updates to see the bug fixes and the content.
Did anyone see the phone shop having some cool equips? Drone, Camera and Phone? It is also buggy
Overall a good v0.1 but I have seen better. Keep it up! (English is not the utmost priority at this point )
For example: I save in the living room and when I load, I entered the phone shop!
The sunscreen quest just makes the stairs arrow icon disappear, so I thought the dev might want me to try the poolside windows but it is not usable either..
Need to wait for more updates to see the bug fixes and the content.
Did anyone see the phone shop having some cool equips? Drone, Camera and Phone? It is also buggy
Overall a good v0.1 but I have seen better. Keep it up! (English is not the utmost priority at this point
)I'm a few minutes in and the spelling and grammar are terrible, Not sure how I feel about the story because I'm too focused on the spelling. Images look good though
I mean on the one hand, I guess kudos to the dev for publishing their spin on "keeping it in the family" for the world to see.
Even simply rewriting some dialogue for shits and giggles can take its sweet time, let alone creating renders yourself, writing the entire dialogue for a game, creating some consistency of what you can buy where and when etc. I also like the idea of having the ability to play different characters and seeing the story unfold from their respective povs.
But fuck me man, have someone proof-read your dialogue or use the yandex-, deepl- or whatever translator is more suitable for your mother tongue. Heck even the google translator would at least avoid spelling errors ... I knew it was going to be a ride from the other comments, but how the fuck do you even mix up "mind" with "ming"? Not getting a "This is the end of v0.1!" message can be chalked up as something that'll be ironed out later on, just like saving in the kitchen as the male protagonist when there's nothing left to do and starting back at the electronics store when loading the save.
But I'm just going to have to ask for a big #oof for these lines concerning chocolate in the init.rpy:
$ choco0 = True
$ choco00 = False
$ choco = True
$ choco = 1
$ chocoo = False
Yes, you have to somehow keep track of the items available in the store, items in the player inventory and items "delivered" to whoever wanted you to buy something, but this just screams headache for when you have like 20 different items later on, that are buyable on different days and different people want you to buy different amounts. Give them some speaking names before you end up with "$ choocoooo000217 = Maybe" or something like that.
Even simply rewriting some dialogue for shits and giggles can take its sweet time, let alone creating renders yourself, writing the entire dialogue for a game, creating some consistency of what you can buy where and when etc. I also like the idea of having the ability to play different characters and seeing the story unfold from their respective povs.
But fuck me man, have someone proof-read your dialogue or use the yandex-, deepl- or whatever translator is more suitable for your mother tongue. Heck even the google translator would at least avoid spelling errors ... I knew it was going to be a ride from the other comments, but how the fuck do you even mix up "mind" with "ming"? Not getting a "This is the end of v0.1!" message can be chalked up as something that'll be ironed out later on, just like saving in the kitchen as the male protagonist when there's nothing left to do and starting back at the electronics store when loading the save.
But I'm just going to have to ask for a big #oof for these lines concerning chocolate in the init.rpy:
$ choco0 = True
$ choco00 = False
$ choco = True
$ choco = 1
$ chocoo = False
Yes, you have to somehow keep track of the items available in the store, items in the player inventory and items "delivered" to whoever wanted you to buy something, but this just screams headache for when you have like 20 different items later on, that are buyable on different days and different people want you to buy different amounts. Give them some speaking names before you end up with "$ choocoooo000217 = Maybe" or something like that.
