VN Ren'Py Abandoned Sibling Primacy [v0.3] [PY Studios]

[yihman1]

Not the most impressive game out there.

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[pystudios]

I seem to have brought out the misfit collective today. Reading the recent post I see the incest bashing and the misfit praising. Why not start a poll, would NTR make this game better? Probably because you've learn in the past that those polls always end in defeat and as you've probably noticed if you've actually played this game there are NO other male characters besides the MC.
Anyway I have a strict no trolling policy! Come here and troll you get reported.

 

[Muff Diver]

@yihman1 use the review system to the Top Right of the title for reviews not in the thread. Thanks

 

[jackkane]

anyone have a changelog?

 

[pystudios]

It's on page 1

 

[pystudios]

anyone have a changelog?

Hey JackKane, could you be so kind as to give this game an honest review taking into account it's less than two months into development. I have these incest bashers trolling my thread and writing reviews. I had the 1 star Zippity gave me removed a while back and now he's returned with his 1 star and it looks like I have to wait until the big man get's here to have it removed as no moderators have acted upon it as of yet. I'll have to get my role modified to better moderate this thread and keep the trollers at bay.
TIA,

 

[jackkane]

the artwork is ok,and I would increase the texture to some degrees it's kind of grainy. the models are sexy except the lena headey look alike. it's good that your scenes are animated,but they need some work. hopefully the longer you work on this game the more they'll improve. the sex scenes are pretty damn good for your 1st attempt at making this type of game. i'm not expecting a great story story in a porn game;but you should really have a native english speaker go over your game,and edit it. overall i give this game 3 stars,and hopefully you can make improvements on the things I mentioned to make your game even better.

 

[pystudios]

the artwork is ok,and I would increase the texture to some degrees it's kind of grainy. the models are sexy except the lena headey look alike. it's good that your scenes are animated,but they need some work. hopefully the longer you work on this game the more they'll improve. the sex scenes are pretty damn good for your 1st attempt at making this type of game. i'm not expecting a great story story in a porn game;but you should really have a native english speaker go over your game,and edit it. overall i give this game 3 stars,and hopefully you can make improvements on the things I mentioned to make your game even better.

You can click the 3rd star on the 1st page and paste your comment. Thanks.

 

[pystudios]

(This review has been moved to the review section above, for this thread)

This imitation critic is an incest basher who trolls the incest threads. He gave DoD a 2 star rating so don't take this wannabe seriously. The review was removed once but time has past and now the troller is back.

 

[Altarin]

Does anyone have the other code?

there is one more code, but per uploader request it will not be disclosed.

However if you ever made anything in Renpy, there is a way. If you know what unren.bat is and if you are willing to spend a little time looking for it.




To Uploader: Awesome work. Please keep it up, unfortunately i can only support you verbaly.

 

[pystudios]

there is one more code, but per uploader request it will not be disclosed.

However if you ever made anything in Renpy, there is a way. If you know what unren.bat is and if you are willing to spend a little time looking for it.




To Uploader: Awesome work. Please keep it up, unfortunately i can only support you verbaly.

You can help by giving an honest rating. I'm being attacked by the incest trollers again. Just click the star of your choice for my rating in the upper right-hand of the page and write a short review of the game. Thanks in advance.

 

[pystudios]

Honest not honey lol

 

[Mahgni Mada]

I didn't want you to have to wait two weeks! I'm starting to understand this and will have to go back and rewrite the scene and somehow put it in unison with the WSs. I had it as her not learning how to keep it clean but maybe I should put it as not expecting how much room that monster cock is going to take up, push the air out then suck a vacuum and really clean her colon!

Oh, well in that case thank you for sharing it And yeah, I think you could have the Scat scenes connected to the WS scenes somehow, Shelly could get into toilet fetish stuff the more she has toilet related accidents or events happen to her, a few examples might be -

. (Scat scene example) Shelly has to go for her daily poop and as she's just about to sit down to use the toilet her brother accidentally walks in on her, after apologizing he then ends up asking if he can watch (She could pee while she poops).

Or

. (WS scene example) Shelly drinks too much water while working out and heads off to use the toilet, the toilet is out of order or occupied and she can't hold it much longer, her brother offers to take her somewhere out of the way so she can do it, he then asks her if he can watch or asks if she will consider emptying it on his penis (Choice).

And about the keeping it clean part, I would personally keep it as she just forgot to go to the bathroom beforehand, stuff like that actually happens in real life and when people create fictional experiences based on amateurs having anal sex, 95% of the time they forget to take that little detail into consideration, which sometimes ends up making the situation a little less believable unfortunately, but you yourself actually put it in there, which is pretty neat IMO

 

[Mahgni Mada]

Not the most impressive game out there.

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That's unfair to say honestly, I mean, the game isn't even that far into development as of yet and it's the creators first ever attempt at making a game.

Now, if you were to give some constructive criticism instead i.e letting him know what you think the flaws are and then tell him what he could do to correct them in a friendly/respectable manner, then he might've been more willing to listen to what you had to say, and that would've been fair enough.

But you didn't, did you? You not only criticized his work in an unfair and very unfriendly way, you also resorted to name calling, which is pretty low I must say.

 

[Mahgni Mada]

how in the world is that disrespectful, when i download something with the tag male i expect to play as that and nothing else, tbats what i complained, he can always add a tag about female for a short part of the game or atleast make it know to the readers, my meaning of wasting my time is that i dont like playing as female not even for a short time and to me it was annoying that i even have to make choices as the girl, so thats plenty much playing as female in my opinion....i dont mean disrecpect to the game developer since i never complained about the game but only why there was no tag of female player to know before downloading for people like me that dont want to go and waste the time downloading something we will not enjoy.

Regards.

What you originally said was a little disrespectful considering the creator didn't have to share his game here for us to play, but he did anyway. You came off as a little ungrateful because a small portion of an in early development game didn't suit your preferences and ended up saying it was a "waste of your time".

I mean, I know this is your way of thinking and all that, but whats so wrong with playing as a female protagonist in a porn game? I prefer either personally, but that's just me.

 

[pystudios]

Thanks for the rating Mahgni, I had a drive by yesterday by the misfit gang out trolling again.

 

[pystudios]

I don't mind honest reviews but you could tell by his history he trolled and bashed incest games with bad reviews. He gave Dreams of Desire a two star rating, the number three game on the site. If he doesn't like the genre fine but why go around trolling and giving out bad reviews when you don't even like the games to start with? It's childish.

 

[jonrage39]

Oh, well in that case thank you for sharing it And yeah, I think you could have the Scat scenes connected to the WS scenes somehow, Shelly could get into toilet fetish stuff the more she has toilet related accidents or events happen to her, a few examples might be -

. (Scat scene example) Shelly has to go for her daily poop and as she's just about to sit down to use the toilet her brother accidentally walks in on her, after apologizing he then ends up asking if he can watch (She could pee while she poops).

Or

. (WS scene example) Shelly drinks too much water while working out and heads off to use the toilet, the toilet is out of order or occupied and she can't hold it much longer, her brother offers to take her somewhere out of the way so she can do it, he then asks her if he can watch or asks if she will consider emptying it on his penis (Choice).

And about the keeping it clean part, I would personally keep it as she just forgot to go to the bathroom beforehand, stuff like that actually happens in real life and when people create fictional experiences based on amateurs having anal sex, 95% of the time they forget to take that little detail into consideration, which sometimes ends up making the situation a little less believable unfortunately, but you yourself actually put it in there, which is pretty neat IMO

If this makes it into the game, I'd suggest making it optional, and making it very clear if you are opting in. Something like in Slice of Venture 2 where Ark very bluntly asks if you want to disable it as soon as you start the game. If someone skips the text warning and stumbles into it that could turn off a lot of people.

I don't have a problem with you putting it in the game, but scat is pretty niche and you don't want to risk turning people off early in a games development. Personally, I'm into piss stuff, but scat is a bridge too far for me, and if I stumbled into it, I would probably check out.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

What you originally said was a little disrespectful considering the creator didn't have to share his game here for us to play, but he did anyway. You came off as a little ungrateful because a small portion of an in early development game didn't suit your preferences and ended up saying it was a "waste of your time".

I mean, I know this is your way of thinking and all that, but whats so wrong with playing as a female protagonist in a porn game? I prefer either personally, but that's just me.

do i really need to repeat myself again? what part of " i just complained about there not being a tag of female player or info about it " you dont understand?¿?
for me is a waste of time because i dont like to play games as female is simply as that, there is nothing wrong with playing as female but for me is a question of taste, it doenst have to do anything with the game, the writing or the quality , i complained only about the tag so stop saying im disrecpectful for not sharing your taste in games or because you are misunderstanding my complaining for something else.

hope im clear now .
Regards

 

[Mahgni Mada]

If this makes it into the game, I'd suggest making it optional, and making it very clear if you are opting in. Something like in Slice of Venture 2 where Ark very bluntly asks if you want to disable it as soon as you start the game. If someone skips the text warning and stumbles into it that could turn off a lot of people.

I don't have a problem with you putting it in the game, but scat is pretty niche and you don't want to risk turning people off early in a games development. Personally, I'm into piss stuff, but scat is a bridge too far for me, and if I stumbled into it, I would probably check out.

This is just for the taboo version of the game in which you have to enter a code at the start of the game to access, so it's all good