I don't understand, please clarify.
ok so if you don t understand me, i will quote a review of your other game... which applies to this one.
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1) Abrupt change in plot, unplanned writing
From a simple plot line of "meeting your high school bully again and living with her", the game took an abrupt turn and seems to have turned into some sort of mafia-gang-crime-assassin-mystery.
It would have been cool if it was build-up from the beginning, hint at from the dialogue or perhaps just a bit of foreshadow in the character's action,
but no, these changes just pop out of nowhere and it feel so forced and weird. To make these changes, more and more characters are introduced for the sake of telling the story, but they are hardly getting any meaningful arc or dialogues so they are not developed at all. The change in plot is so sudden that I cannot help but suspect the dev actually didn't plan the writing at all but just threw in whatever ideas they have and make a messy stew out of the plot. The dev/writer of the game went all out to try and add depths to the plot by adding sudden, unnecessary back stories to every girls, e.g. the whole Emma and mother flashbacks which
took almost an entire episode (that is perhaps the single longest flashback scenes in the history of AVN - am I watching NARUTO or something?) But these backstories are clearly afterthoughts because they just pop out from thin air without any foreshadowing or build up. It is the worst kind of things you can do to ruin a character.
And of course the dialogues remain childish and non-sensical. Everyone has like the IQ of 12 year old in this game.
2) Hardly any sex scenes
For a game that has been in development for such a long time, I thought there would be substantial amount of H-scenes, seeing that the writing is hardly given any thought. But no, despite the one thousand characters introduced we only get to see like less than 10 scenes with a handful of the girls, and these are few and far in between (out of the 3-4 hours playtime, only 5 mins are H-scenes) and
they are all very basic AND identical.
I am not saying the game should be overflooded with sexy time but if your writing is already so poor, maybe more H-scenes can compensate your poorly laid-out writing, but in this case both aspects are equally lacking.
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Well, i would like, have more time with the first girls, you fuck your 2 years friend and she disappears from story, you have one event with the best friend of ken and she disappear, 2 event with aurora and she disappear, etc...
Find your old girlfriend (even if she near), pffff don t care anymore...
And the new plot start, and a new troop of fight li come, the nina red girl, the pink head girl, etc... well you keep charlotte a least it s good.
You accept li or not don t change anything in the second stage because of the constent new li and the few time we have with the old.
That what i said when i said " The structure of the game are nearly the same..." the structure is just a copy past.
And if you push a little your thinking, you can easily see the caracters are also nearly the same, just with a new looking and few background story but nearly the same.
First of all, please improve your English so that everyone understands what you're talking about. If English is not your first language, consider using a translator. Criticizing something in broken English kills your plausibility and the chances that people will even bother reading your post.
If I understand what you're trying to point out here, it doesn't seem to be a flaw. It is a different writing style or approach. The developer/the game does not force-feed you an entire brigade of LIs for each update. Instead, it focuses on 1-2 LIs as major highlights. It completes a part of their story, and you get to understand them better because of it. If you think otherwise, then that issue is yours. People are so used to the normality and what they consider the proper writing and approach, like every dev on this site does. Just because the developer seems to have found a different way doesn't make it a flaw.
If flaws are the point, this game has a lot to point out.
The games are being created side by side by the same developer. What do you expect? A difference between heaven and hell?
The stories are connected for a reason. If we want to go by similarities, the other game is a slice of life, and this is action sci-fi.
Well, my guy. You can't simply post a negative review and tell the developer to adjust to your needs. And given that on a pirate site with a bunch of brain-dead schizophrenic incels.
I have been following this person ever since he started. If you want proof of the developer's improvements throughout the years and the depression and heartache he receives through those reviews you're talking about, look no further than their latest releases and compare them to their earlier episodes. From a literal standpoint, he wouldn't be able to get this far without improvements anyway. The support and numbers he receives are solid proof of that.
Tell them they're slow once you've given them a cent of your disposable income. If you can't, you don't have the right to tell that to any developer while being on a pirate site waiting for leaks and public releases.
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If people really want to criticize a game, share it non-schizophrenically, and don't include your personal likes and dislikes about it. Because, at the end of the day, people have different opinions. And maybe, just maybe, developers will have the appetite to read and swallow your thoughts. There is a clear difference between praising, criticizing, and totally shitting on a developer. Every ounce of bad-mouthing they receive impacts their mental health, so be mindful of what you say. That is, if you even care. Respect the developer for a game you are playing for free. Bad game or not.
Well, argumentum ad personam... attack the form without being interested in the substance i see, well i m not english native no, and i don t had many problem to be understand here, so... Maybe it s just you.
That's exactly it Mr The White Knight, it s my issue with this game. And that why i post here to say it. you know free pirate forum to talk about pirate game with the dev of the game who post it here...
Well i expect more that a copy past, i expect new thing. it s that bad when you try a new game...? yes it s the same world, but i feel it s the same mc, the same story, the same li (i m not talking about the visual here), like for example you play zelda breath to the wild, and just after you play tears of the kingdom. 2 games right but nearly the same anyway.
i never post review, i don t watch, i don t evaluate anythings... i talk in forum of what i feel with the dev if i can.
MMMmmm, maybe this will feel a little hard but i don t try to insult anyone... I m fan of games, that all. I really don t care o devllopers. i don t care there live, i don t really care how they feel i m never a fan or a groupie... i care about games that all.
So i will talk about game, you talk about dev don t make an argument for me.
I never support a dev who have not finish at least one game. it s my rule to see what the devs are.
For finish, forgot where are we talking ? it s a pirate site where all is free, and a forum for talking about game, in good or bad.
i don t really care about what you think of what i think Mr the white knight, and i will tell what i think of this game honestly.
maybe i will move the dev view, or maybe not. But i had said what i think, your free to do the same, but don t expect i answer you anymore.