Several issues I have with the novel (sorry I can't call it a game and my reason for it will in the list).
1) the grammar and spelling needs some work.
I mean while I could easily figure out what the heck was meant to be said there were times where words were missing, spelling was off, or the words were out of order. Then there was also the issue where it would say one character is saying something when it was obviously another character. The mother (or Mrs, Reigns if not using the patch) has this issue so many times it was staggering.
2) The main character lusting after his female family members but only actively pursing one.
While I get he is actively pursuing the biggest smoke show of the bunch (AKA is mother) you would think for someone who wants to fornicate with all his female family members he was figure out a way to get break their defenses by spending time with them. He had several chances to do so but as pointed out he only actively pursues is mother or Mrs. Reigns if not using the patch. I mean for Christ sake if he put even 10% of the effect he is with his mother with his Aunt Stacy for example I am willing to bet that he would not only be balls deep in her but if I had to guess would be able to convince her to give up all her other fuck buddies and make him the only fuck buy she has.
3 How slow and big of a tease the active woman he is pursuing is
Sorry to say this but while I get he is breaking her barriers one by one the lengths he is going to break each one for only so little pay out is just sad. I mean even though he was literally being blackmailed to do so he literally stole the Jewel of Love for her. The level of danger he went for that one to show how much he meant to him and he doesn't even get oral done on him let alone scoring a home run.
4) The fact this feels more like a story or novel rather than a game.
I remember when I first started this thing it mentioned that we would have to make decisions and said decisions would in turn change the outcome of the game. That the littlest of decisions would make big impacts. The problem here is that there are so few of these and after the island decision that can lead to a game over if you so choose it these decisions just up and vanish and you are just left with a novel. I could think of at least 7 - 10 points where we could have had decisions made in this novel to make it feel like a game.
For example when it came to stealing the jewel of love a decision could have been made here in whether or not you would give him the real jewel or like the game to successfully buy time for you blackmail, or give him a fake while giving the real one to your mother to score points with her. Another decision that could have been added was whether or not you wanted to spend time with you mother and go to club like it did near the end of the game, or choose to spend time with one of your other family members to get some points in with seducing them. I could go on with the choices that could have been done and where they could have been added but I won't.
Now don't get me wrong I am loving the art work and the animated scenes we are getting, however with the lack of decisions being made by the player, the extremely slow burn to sexual content you as the main character is getting, and the locked path that we have where you only are pursuing the mother when it was mentioned how the main character wants a piece of all the sexy blood related females in his family (I won't say Candice seeing as she isn't blood related and she is the only girl in the family who the main male surprisingly doesn't want to fuck) I can't give this novel that good or a rating.
Hell had you thrown us at least the choice to get some action between Aunt Stacy and the main character (seeing as she would be the easiest one to justify due to her nature and attitude) I could have called this something of a game due to this but sadly there isn't even that.
I will look on with the novel seeing as I am not the type of person who just gives up on something until it is compete or abandoned but I must say the teasing in this novel and lack of choices hurt it in my opinion.