What's that potential may I ask?
Don't take this the wrong way, the game does have potential. But if you give too much thought to the intimate relationship XD, it's a waste of time. Also in your synopsis you stated that they already had a certain attraction between them, not even if they succumb or resist the forbidden relationship. This is not the case, therefore you should have the player choose whether they succumb or not, or when the mother arrives, Erik succumbs to the mother. Another thing, if you are on vacation, the duration has not been specified, if at least it is two weeks, you have already burned almost a week or it is a month. Or they are end of year vacations that generally last two months in some countries XD
Thats good man and you should stay true to what story you want to tell. The point I wanted to get out is that it feels like the MC doesnt have any character development especially emotionally. And I think its time to decide what he wants after going back and forth countless times already. Other than that I love the focus on their special bond and discovering what it truly means.
But that IS the case. It's the entire premise of Chapter 1 and clearly mentioned in the game multiple times.
It's the start of June, it's said at the beginning. Also if you look at the 1st phone conversation you can see the date and also see each day on the replay gallery. I'm adding more mentions next update though.
My man, give me a chance
It's not even been two months since I released the game and I'm almost done with CH1.
Continue as best you can. Yes, and slow progress is rare in the game, but this is the hottest thing in the game. in a couple of months, you've done a great jobMy man, give me a chance
Plus, I don't want him to be a mindless perv and I'm clearly establishing their personalities through the conversations and actions. If they slowly get corrupted and change through the game that just makes the payoff much more interesting, don't you think?
Thank you so much, I love these comments! That's precisely what I'm trying to do and I also pay a lot of attention to the sound/music...
I'm gonna be brutally honest. Forgive me.Thank you so much, I love these comments! Tat's precisely what I'm trying to do and I also pay a lot of attention to the sound/music...
Tell me your final thoughts when you finish 1.4 and maybe write a review too
And btw if you wanna check the progress in graphics since I did my first render for the game like 2-3 months ago, yeah... (not the same scene but you get the point)
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Dont mind the haters It's okay to have dynamic characters the guy being shy and the sister being forward is a very good dynamic. Also I like that they feel guilt since they are siblings. Do what you envision about the story. Saying the guy/MC is a pussy is not a valid criticism it just their preference which doesnt matter. A confident/chad guy only works in harem as he is very confident romance a lot of girls. The shy type works really well with single romance cause a shy guy could build confidence and courage later on the story.My man, give me a chance
Plus, I don't want him to be a mindless perv and I'm clearly establishing their personalities through the conversations and actions. If they slowly get corrupted and change through the game that just makes the payoff much more interesting, don't you think?
that is his TWIN SISTER, and he is the more responcible/adult of the siblings. ofc he is holding back and tries to be reasonable. thatßs what makes this story great, they actually have to confront the taboo of what they are about to do insteat if just glossingover it. the auther makes a damn good job of delivering this story
